[The points have just been released and will gradually increase]
[Not nourishing the stomach + multiple female protagonists + no system + road writing + qcqs + refreshing writing]
Being pushed back by the fairy and forced to become a disciple - Lou Yao was not happy about this.
Fortunately, Master is the most cool and cool fairy in the world. As soon as he left the world, he was able to eat soft rice. It was so easy and relaxing~
"Master, what is Jianghu?"
"It's a bloody storm, it's a Shura field in the human world."
…
After traveling in the world for many years, Lou Yao looked at the women sharpening their knives in front of him and thought that his master was indeed right.
The Jianghu is indeed a Shura field!
Just when Lou Yao was about to run away, the inkstone sword was pressed against his waist, and the master exhaled like blue.
"Be honest with me and tell me clearly who they are?"
"Uu... Master, I was wrong..."
Reader comments
In the early stage, you spend some time grinding on the mountain, and then turn on the road text mode after descending the mountain.
The multiple heroines will definitely accept them all and won't cause any mess.
Lou Yao definitely doesn't know how to eat, nor does he pretend to be a pig to eat feed.
If you have any comments, please leave a message, thank you.
The rough reading feels good, the plot is coherent and not jerky, and it is not toxic at the moment. One problem is that some parts are too delicate, which is reflected in the first three chapters (many descriptions of appearance) and the modifiers in the dialogue parts of other chapters, such as the tone is light, the tone is light, and the tone is flat. In fact, words that have no effect on the character and plot can be omitted.
The language is still a little more feminine, the corners of the mouth are often "curved", and the male protagonist's ears are red more often than other female characters.
The book is relatively slow to pick up at the moment. I have read about half of it. The elder sister of Qing Leng Nian Shang [Adoration] is still Bingjia➕arrogant and possessive. She will get angry whenever she is next to the protagonist [laughing] But judging from the label, there are many female protagonists. I look forward to the plot of Shura Field in the future. It is so exciting. Master is a woman who can be my mother [shy]
It's pretty good [laughs evilly], it's not a cliche story. Each character has his or her own fate and calamity, and the daily life is well written. I just don't know how the harem line will develop, but I hope it won't become a repetitive plot like "robbing-imprisonment-robbing-imprisonment" in the heroine novel hh.
However, the male protagonist has a good character. At least he is frank in his actions and will not make big mistakes like "concealing things".
It feels like there is a lack of process and details in some places. Just like the relationship in the article, it is just mentioned as "gentle and humorous". However, judging from the personality of the male protagonist in the front, it is really hard to see where the humor comes from... The same goes for the subsequent conversations, which are often silent and never a dialogue maker.
Finally, Shili has made a fortune, as long as he keeps updating😋 Also, pay attention to whether the number of female protagonists in harem novels is good or not, it will be better
It feels like it's seeping through ai
Immortal, I would like to call you the strongest among the martial arts. Even now, the world view is quite large, and there are probably many female protagonists. The writing is too slow! Not enough! I also hope that the writing will not collapse later. If there is an outline, the probability of collapse is still quite small.
It's pretty good. After reading the first few dozen chapters, it feels like it will be a one-woman master-disciple novel with about 300 chapters. I don't know how there will be more women in the back. It may be that the protagonist is injured and rescued.
The plot between me and the master is pretty good now. It's okay to give it a 5-star rating now. There are occasional minor flaws, and there's no need to go into details about the combat power. I've been reading love stories about cultivating immortals on Tomato. Unless the combat power collapses, it's not a big deal.
This book is very delicious. The important thing is that the young man is wise, can distinguish the deliberate expressions of women when faced with them, and has a strong sense of responsibility. That kind of quaint and ethereal atmosphere is enough to write about. It's full of literary youth, but I hope the author will work harder and update it.
I am an old reader. From Lu Yuchuan to now, I feel that the first one I have written is not as good as the first one. It is a pity that I have not updated it. OK, I hope this one will not be eunuch. So far, the writing is quite good, but a bit bland. I want to see blood flowing like a river [angry], when will Shura Field [sneaky laugh]
If you are reading qcqs, please give me a five-star review to encourage the author. I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this book after reading it. I hope the author will not be affected by the high sequence of martial arts and continue to maintain a lightning-proof attitude for sensitive skin. There should be no thunder and no green.
It turns out that he is a fan of Hexue, no wonder. This male protagonist is written as if it is difficult to brew, and there is a high probability that he will have sex later.
Cultivation novels covered in martial arts skins, apart from the realm of martial arts, the other aspects, whether it is the world view, the sect structure, the secret realm, etc., Are completely the world of cultivating immortals.
So far, it seems to be a good martial arts novel, and it follows a refreshing flow. However, I feel that the realm rises too quickly, and the martial arts may collapse a bit later, and it turns into boring daily life, resulting in a hasty ending [plus one on the bookshelf]
Where can you run away from the thunder? ! Jiutian Xuanlei gives me electricity!
[Smile] The State Grid had a power outage for one day because of Master and Feng Qiuhuang.
In fact, I think this book is perfect if it is written with a single female protagonist. Having multiple female protagonists is a bit of a fly in the ointment. But after all, the protagonist is going down the mountain to travel around the world, and he will definitely have to meet multiple confidants. I can only say that the writing is pretty good so far, and I hope it will continue to be maintained. The emotional handling between multiple female protagonists will not collapse.
This is a very good martial arts novel. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is described very delicately. I see that there is nothing toxic about it now. I look forward to the Shura Field in the future, but there are too few. [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]
What a good book. I haven't seen any serious points so far. The plot is quite coherent. The author has literary talent, but he should talk about it or not. The master should be telegraphed. He is so dazzling at the age of 14.
What do the last two tags mean?
Haji's emotions are so well written, and the characters are not rigid. There are some poisonous points found in other books of the same type. This book also avoids lightning. Moreover, because Haji's writing is so good, I always have a feeling of substitution. No, no, no, it feels like the author is following me to write this novel.
It's so cool, it's completely the ultimate goblin fantasy [laughing and crying]
The plot is light, focusing more on emotion, and the characters are well created. It may have a bit of an AI flavor, but it should still have more female protagonists, right?
The best product is simply the most special, unforgettable, refreshing and comfortable product in my harem. You can taste it. The most plump, delicious food.
It can be written very well, and the author updates it very quickly.
This kind of delicacy is very interesting to write, and the plot continues to advance without too many tired descriptions.
It's pretty good, the storyline is well rendered.
Okay, okay, just keep this momentum going, and finally get some gold out of history.
Hao Chi [Love] is considered a masterpiece in Tomato
The plot is quite classic, but it feels comfortable to watch [Like]
It's okay, but the progress is a bit slow. The main heroine is a bit strong. It's probably too difficult for the male protagonist to start a harem. We'll see how it works later [crying]
In the early stage, you spend some time grinding on the mountain, and then turn on the road text mode after descending the mountain. The multiple heroines will definitely accept them all and won't cause any mess. Lou Yao definitely doesn't know how to eat, nor does he pretend to be a pig to eat feed. If you have any comments, please leave a message, thank you.
The rough reading feels good, the plot is coherent and not jerky, and it is not toxic at the moment. One problem is that some parts are too delicate, which is reflected in the first three chapters (many descriptions of appearance) and the modifiers in the dialogue parts of other chapters, such as the tone is light, the tone is light, and the tone is flat. In fact, words that have no effect on the character and plot can be omitted. The language is still a little more feminine, the corners of the mouth are often "curved", and the male protagonist's ears are red more often than other female characters.
The book is relatively slow to pick up at the moment. I have read about half of it. The elder sister of Qing Leng Nian Shang [Adoration] is still Bingjia➕arrogant and possessive. She will get angry whenever she is next to the protagonist [laughing] But judging from the label, there are many female protagonists. I look forward to the plot of Shura Field in the future. It is so exciting. Master is a woman who can be my mother [shy]
It's pretty good [laughs evilly], it's not a cliche story. Each character has his or her own fate and calamity, and the daily life is well written. I just don't know how the harem line will develop, but I hope it won't become a repetitive plot like "robbing-imprisonment-robbing-imprisonment" in the heroine novel hh. However, the male protagonist has a good character. At least he is frank in his actions and will not make big mistakes like "concealing things". It feels like there is a lack of process and details in some places. Just like the relationship in the article, it is just mentioned as "gentle and humorous". However, judging from the personality of the male protagonist in the front, it is really hard to see where the humor comes from... The same goes for the subsequent conversations, which are often silent and never a dialogue maker.
Finally, Shili has made a fortune, as long as he keeps updating😋 Also, pay attention to whether the number of female protagonists in harem novels is good or not, it will be better It feels like it's seeping through ai
Immortal, I would like to call you the strongest among the martial arts. Even now, the world view is quite large, and there are probably many female protagonists. The writing is too slow! Not enough! I also hope that the writing will not collapse later. If there is an outline, the probability of collapse is still quite small.
It's pretty good. After reading the first few dozen chapters, it feels like it will be a one-woman master-disciple novel with about 300 chapters. I don't know how there will be more women in the back. It may be that the protagonist is injured and rescued. The plot between me and the master is pretty good now. It's okay to give it a 5-star rating now. There are occasional minor flaws, and there's no need to go into details about the combat power. I've been reading love stories about cultivating immortals on Tomato. Unless the combat power collapses, it's not a big deal.
This book is very delicious. The important thing is that the young man is wise, can distinguish the deliberate expressions of women when faced with them, and has a strong sense of responsibility. That kind of quaint and ethereal atmosphere is enough to write about. It's full of literary youth, but I hope the author will work harder and update it.
I am an old reader. From Lu Yuchuan to now, I feel that the first one I have written is not as good as the first one. It is a pity that I have not updated it. OK, I hope this one will not be eunuch. So far, the writing is quite good, but a bit bland. I want to see blood flowing like a river [angry], when will Shura Field [sneaky laugh]
If you are reading qcqs, please give me a five-star review to encourage the author. I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this book after reading it. I hope the author will not be affected by the high sequence of martial arts and continue to maintain a lightning-proof attitude for sensitive skin. There should be no thunder and no green.
It turns out that he is a fan of Hexue, no wonder. This male protagonist is written as if it is difficult to brew, and there is a high probability that he will have sex later.
Cultivation novels covered in martial arts skins, apart from the realm of martial arts, the other aspects, whether it is the world view, the sect structure, the secret realm, etc., Are completely the world of cultivating immortals.
So far, it seems to be a good martial arts novel, and it follows a refreshing flow. However, I feel that the realm rises too quickly, and the martial arts may collapse a bit later, and it turns into boring daily life, resulting in a hasty ending [plus one on the bookshelf]
Where can you run away from the thunder? ! Jiutian Xuanlei gives me electricity!
[Smile] The State Grid had a power outage for one day because of Master and Feng Qiuhuang.
In fact, I think this book is perfect if it is written with a single female protagonist. Having multiple female protagonists is a bit of a fly in the ointment. But after all, the protagonist is going down the mountain to travel around the world, and he will definitely have to meet multiple confidants. I can only say that the writing is pretty good so far, and I hope it will continue to be maintained. The emotional handling between multiple female protagonists will not collapse.
This is a very good martial arts novel. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is described very delicately. I see that there is nothing toxic about it now. I look forward to the Shura Field in the future, but there are too few. [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]
What a good book. I haven't seen any serious points so far. The plot is quite coherent. The author has literary talent, but he should talk about it or not. The master should be telegraphed. He is so dazzling at the age of 14.
What do the last two tags mean?
Haji's emotions are so well written, and the characters are not rigid. There are some poisonous points found in other books of the same type. This book also avoids lightning. Moreover, because Haji's writing is so good, I always have a feeling of substitution. No, no, no, it feels like the author is following me to write this novel.
It's so cool, it's completely the ultimate goblin fantasy [laughing and crying]
The plot is light, focusing more on emotion, and the characters are well created. It may have a bit of an AI flavor, but it should still have more female protagonists, right?
The best product is simply the most special, unforgettable, refreshing and comfortable product in my harem. You can taste it. The most plump, delicious food.
It can be written very well, and the author updates it very quickly.
This kind of delicacy is very interesting to write, and the plot continues to advance without too many tired descriptions.
It's pretty good, the storyline is well rendered.
Okay, okay, just keep this momentum going, and finally get some gold out of history.
Hao Chi [Love] is considered a masterpiece in Tomato
The plot is quite classic, but it feels comfortable to watch [Like]
It's okay, but the progress is a bit slow. The main heroine is a bit strong. It's probably too difficult for the male protagonist to start a harem. We'll see how it works later [crying]