I Awakened the Tycoon System and I’m Openly a Heartbreaker

It's good. The author's laziness should be corrected. Many plots can be detailed in the process. Don't just focus on the results and emotions, but the plot is still quite interesting. Come on. Too short, just a running account

160 Chapters, rating 7.4, 270,000 Readers, no rebirth time travel Protagonist: Cao Xu, systematic Father: Cao Jianguo (middle-level banker) Mother: Li Rong (current civil servant) Here are the new cars: Xu Niannian (Chapter 2 Charging) Tao Jiayi (Chapter 17 Charging) Mao Yuetong (Chapter 39 Charging) Qin Shuyao (Chapter 41 Charging) Duan Jianing (Chapter 49 Charging) Lin Yuting (Chapter 134 Charging) Young Woman: Wen Ya (Chapter 84 Charging) Ex-girlfriend: Sun Menghan (Chapter 160 Charging) 453 chapters, 8.3 Rating, 220,000 readers Multiple heroines: Wang Qing (Chapter 186 Charging) Huo Sichun (Chapter 187 Charging) Bai Siwen (Chapter 249 Charging) Cheng Xiaoyu (Chapter 295 Charging) Ma Ran (Chapter 307 Charging) Shen Huimin (Chapter 356 Charging) Skills: Native Spanish, Arabic

I would like to give you a good review to encourage you. I have just read about twenty chapters. Let me share my personal feelings: First of all, the women change too quickly. Four or five appeared at once in just twenty chapters. It is a bit of a quarrel. The line about the first girlfriend is not explored further. The character of the vanity and money worshiper is very easy to write. You can continue to dig deeper into the plot to create a sense of satisfaction. Also, the girlfriend's poor roommate gave me a "Shen Youchu" feeling. I felt that when this female character appeared, there was a strong sense of separation from the book. The protagonist's system was completely based on vanity and money worship, and suddenly an honest girl appeared. I think the protagonist should not harm others. The ultimate pulling of the emotional line of "Chen Dog" really requires skills. Without that kind of skills, writing this kind of character will be a drama. Personal advice from a bookworm who has been at Qidian for more than ten years. I also hope that the author will get better and better. At present, all the updates have been followed. This book is fully qualified as a good article. I am willing to spend money to read this book at the starting point. I can't see any poisonous points at present, and there is no plot. The author has also entered the state of writing. The plot is reasonable and there is no awkward place. The suggestions I make are also based on the standards of high-quality articles. The purpose is to hope that the author can plan the next plot more reasonably and more enjoyable. This book needs to be polished. Once the control of the plot is improved to a higher level, the author of the next book can definitely start from the starting point and prove a masterpiece. Come on, author.

Recommended reading of cool and inspiring articles The logic and plot are reasonable, the protagonist's character is clear, and it is not cliché. For not hiding wealth and beauty, for advancing the plot without any sloppiness, and for writing the essence of a powerful novel, I give it a thumbs up [Like] Then there are the female characters involved, who have their own characteristics and flashpoints, such as the soft and dependent girl, the tomboy pretty girl, the contrasting teacher [laughing], etc. They are all very distinctive, and the author still understands them very well. In addition, I mentioned a character, that is, the girl who is innocent but has inner persistence. I hope that she can be constructed without destroying the character's independence and expectations. I also hope that it will be handled well [Chigua]

I think the plot is well written. Although it is a little bit annoying, the problem is very minor and does not affect the overall reading experience at all. The male protagonist maintains a very casual attitude, and does not participate or mess around if he does not understand. The spiritual girl also remained cautious in the face of high numbers of people. [Laughing evilly] It perfectly fits the characteristic spirit of the protagonist of this type of book.

It's okay, the logic is online, and I occasionally talk about some professional knowledge. I can't understand it anyway, but what the author said is clear and logical. OK, I just believe it. In fact, the biggest difficulty in this kind of writing in the later stage is to balance the relationship between money and chasing women. Those with lower material desires have more positive outlook on life. Does the protagonist want to use some unsightly means? In my opinion, this is a relatively low-level technique. I hope to see something different, but the author should not feel pressured. If I can't write it, I will get a score of more than nine points. Currently, come on.

It's not bad, it's a harem story about a powerful harem. Although there are many characters, the depictions are not very repetitive. There are also shortcomings. The daily life is a bit monotonous. How can I put it, it has the feeling of a Japanese movie, just add some plot, and then the two of them start. Generally speaking, it is all kinds of consumption, and the heroine has all kinds of imagination. And most of the female protagonists have a label of money worship. Although this is the reality, this is a novel, and you can still conquer the heroine by relying on some other conditions. For example, the plot of entering Tibet is actually quite well written, but it lacks too many details. Money worshipers will be boring if you watch it too much. Simply spending money will not bring you much pleasure. Hmm... I'm looking forward to the story of Sichuan and Chongqing girls and bank girls. I hope I can write some interesting plots. Come on [I learned it]

It's really nice to read the latest chapters in one go. It's not as exciting as a lot of mindless attacks on people, but the scumbag's various operations are still very good. I would like to give a small suggestion to the male protagonist to fully endorse it, otherwise it will get bigger and bigger. Everyone here knows what the final ending will be. You can also write about some foreign capital operations. Domestic growth to a certain extent will be amplified. Women don't need to be given a teddy, just get one from a few pictures. Too many people sometimes forget who they are [laughing and crying]. The writing is good so far. I hope it won't be poisonous in the future. Let me give you another small suggestion. You should have a picture to accompany each woman, but don't add another picture every time you mention it, because it is different every time and sometimes everyone feels different after seeing it. I feel disgusted when I see something I don't like. Personal opinion, for reference only

It's obvious that they are scumbags, they eat meat without any ambiguity, and they are all kinds of beautiful combinations! A perfect harem story. Love to watch

It's a rare harem god novel that meets your appetite. The author of this book has online taste and something. Unlike some wise authors who don't even have common sense, they only show off with supercars, and can buy Patek Philippe in any shopping mall, and so on. Come on! Writing about the emperor's uncle's big brother (づ￣3￣)づ╭❤～