[Supernatural + Multiple Heroines + Love Rival Showdowns] (Not a traditional supernatural-dungeon story. Please don't read if that's not your thing.)
A supernatural dimension descends, and only people in good physical condition are randomly chosen to enter it.
Jiang Wangting thought this had nothing to do with him, since he had been sickly and frail since childhood. Who would have guessed he would be chosen to enter the supernatural dimension? Even more unexpectedly, the System he had assumed was useless and only good for passing the time connected him with female ghosts from that dimension.
The aloof Ghost Queen: “Pspsps, little puppy, come over and call me Mommy. Then I'll save you.”
The yandere Dream Ghost: “Weren't you ignoring me before? Now that you're in my hands, tell me, should I lock you up first, or lock you up first?”
The possessive Shadow Ghost: “Please don't leave me. I'll get rid of all your enemies.”
The little girl ghost doll: “Big brother, you're the best. Be a good boy and turn into a doll so you can keep me company, okay?”
A purely emotional novel 😄 [OK] The world view is very average. The simple leather cover 🤦 is too stiff in the transition 🍉, but the pace is too fast (fast pace in fast pace). I hope the author can be more knowledgeable and describe the details [currently working on the manuscript] Fortunately, it is not toxic at the moment. Let me continue to appreciate [laughing] Shennong is here 😄 [OK] Although it's still a leather case, it's surprisingly good? [Learned] The turning point should be stronger. It's a low-opening high-altitude (relative) pace. It would be better if the pace is slower and the foreshadowing is also good. In addition, the article can have more memories of previous chats 🤦 is still non-toxic. The male protagonist is considered a gentle type. He should be killed. He is not usually bloodthirsty (currently there is only one Jiahao let go 🍉. The shaping is quite good. I don't think it is poisonous). Unfortunately, I haven't eaten yet (not the kind that I don't touch with my hands) and I didn't grasp the three golden chapters well. I was too anxious. There is nothing eye-catching [currently working on the manuscript] Because there is very little world view laid out in the beginning, I am confused. Editor 2: Chapter 54 has to be eaten 😄 [OK] Editor 3: It's a bit superficial 🙂 The world has been wandering for a long time, and there is no information. There is no problem in jumping to read 🤦
This book is a bit painful to write now. If you don't want to read a heavy story, don't read this book. Well, this book is okay, except for the sad things. There is also an author who wants to expand the world view and write about emotions as the place where yang energy is produced. I feel like this may be the case again, so I'm okay.
The writing is okay but too little.
Don't give up, keep updating. Blue Star has written too much, so I suggest you reduce it.
After the author has finished writing, look back and see if there is any unclear expression in the text@_@. Some narrative expressions are not smooth. Please support it with five stars.
It's okay, the writing is quite nice, so please give it a thumbs up, author!
It's okay, just write less human plots. After all, it is essentially a love story