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I haven't seen much so far and can tell you what I think are the pros and cons. Let's talk about the shortcomings first: the writing is too detailed, whether it is the plot or the characters, it is a bit risky to write like this. If there is one point that is not grasped well, I am afraid that the plot will be different from the previous rhythm, and the souls of the characters will be slightly different. The detailed writing will test the author's patience. Let's talk about the advantages: the writing is so detailed that it makes people want to read it. The prerequisite is that the author has excellent writing skills. This book can be savored carefully. There are currently no big problems with the character creation. I think it is acceptable. Also, if the author can continue writing it, judging from the current progress, the plot of JueZuo Zero will have two ways. 1. Speed up the progress at a node. 2. Write other games while writing JueZi Zero. No matter what kind of writing method, I hope the author can change it according to his own ideas. The change is not necessarily the writing. There are also bad points in the plot. Changing the plot is not just to make up for regrets. For example: To be honest, I didn't feel much about Pompey's death when I was watching the plot. But in the subsequent activities, I gradually felt fuller about Pompeo's character. I was wondering if I could add some of his highlight moments in the plot. I posted so much because I fell in love with this book and its delicacy. I hope that while retaining the characteristics of this book, I can also maintain the emotional lines of the characters in the book, but I have to distinguish the priorities. Just like the moon and stars, the stars will not block the light of the moon, but its shimmer is also a feature of the night.

It is detected that the automatic current limit of zero zone is in progress [laughing]

It's okay so far, but the production speed is a bit slow. It should be done faster. Then you can add some game plots in the future to introduce it to people who have never played the game (such as arranging a game anchor to play the game and pass the main storyline). Some of the character interactions look a bit awkward, I'll just polish them in the future.

Who knows what it feels like to wait all day just for a bite of rice from the teacher? When I see the teacher update, I feel like there is hope in life.

The structure is clear and the plot is smooth, very good

The beginning is not amazing, but it is plain and comfortable to read. I agree with you. Please try your best to update.

I've never seen it written in such detail.

I have never seen such detailed writing in my life, but the plot is a bit slow. I can speed up the progress later.

I've been playing the open beta for a few days🌚I went back to play it yesterday, and I suddenly felt that this game is quite fun.

Yes, but the plot advances too slowly

Very good. This is the first time I have seen a novel with a plot.

Come on, it's pretty good-looking so far, please give it a try. [Praise]