"Easy, Everyday, Not Holy Mother, Remove CP"
Li Xuan traveled through "The Adventures of Jackie Chan" and went through many difficulties and obstacles to collect all 12 talismans.
Then at night, when Li Xuan was sleeping, a crack in space suddenly enveloped Li Xuan.
When he opened his eyes again, Li Xuan was surprised to find that he had entered a new world.
Later, when he met various familiar characters, Li Xuan realized that he had traveled to the world of Mingke this time.
So what wonderful experiences will he have in this world?
Let us stay tuned!
Reader comments
The reason why I didn't give it five stars is that Kudo Shinichi's villain shouldn't be responsible for various unsolved cases. Why is it a direct crime?
It just represents my personal opinion: Don't take out the charms to use them. It's best if they work directly in the space. Firstly, it prevents accidents. Secondly, it looks better this way. Secondly, after the Tiger Talisman is broken, it will have no balancing effect. It can be used for a short time, but it is better to put it back together for a long time. Otherwise, you can't use many charms together. The author should write that if there are multiple female protagonists, they can have a dark empire that collects souls and creates a shadow corps. This way, you can contact more female protagonists with the main line. You can also go to Kaitou Kidd's corner to learn magic from Koizumi Anko.
Well written and beautiful
Being creative, the clone Shinichi joins the black organization
I haven't seen much of it yet, but it's still okay. But the spells still need to be modified. For example, the most obvious skin wrinkles not only have the ability to fly, but also have telekinesis. For example, when Xiaoyu ate the spell, he did not fly himself, but made the surrounding objects fly. Therefore, some spells should have some other abilities. The pig spell should not only have laser eyes, but also the ability to see through illusions. Well, it depends on the author whether he uses it. Anyway, the original work does not have it.
Not bad, it doesn't look too toxic, and the characters are pretty much in line with the anime's design.
Qin's personality is a bit broken.
Seeing that there are no poisonous points in Chapter 72, the author can think about arousing readers' expectations. It is very good.
The plot and concept are okay, especially the two Kudos, but the author's writing style needs to be strengthened.
The reason why I didn't give it five stars is that Kudo Shinichi's villain shouldn't be responsible for various unsolved cases. Why is it a direct crime?
It just represents my personal opinion: Don't take out the charms to use them. It's best if they work directly in the space. Firstly, it prevents accidents. Secondly, it looks better this way. Secondly, after the Tiger Talisman is broken, it will have no balancing effect. It can be used for a short time, but it is better to put it back together for a long time. Otherwise, you can't use many charms together. The author should write that if there are multiple female protagonists, they can have a dark empire that collects souls and creates a shadow corps. This way, you can contact more female protagonists with the main line. You can also go to Kaitou Kidd's corner to learn magic from Koizumi Anko.
Well written and beautiful
Being creative, the clone Shinichi joins the black organization
I haven't seen much of it yet, but it's still okay. But the spells still need to be modified. For example, the most obvious skin wrinkles not only have the ability to fly, but also have telekinesis. For example, when Xiaoyu ate the spell, he did not fly himself, but made the surrounding objects fly. Therefore, some spells should have some other abilities. The pig spell should not only have laser eyes, but also the ability to see through illusions. Well, it depends on the author whether he uses it. Anyway, the original work does not have it.
Not bad, it doesn't look too toxic, and the characters are pretty much in line with the anime's design.
Qin's personality is a bit broken.
Seeing that there are no poisonous points in Chapter 72, the author can think about arousing readers' expectations. It is very good.
The plot and concept are okay, especially the two Kudos, but the author's writing style needs to be strengthened.