One Piece fanfic, cp Shanks, original heroine, first mate of merchant ship Akari thought she would only do two things in her life - running ships and wielding swords.
Until her ship was sunk by pirates, she looked up on the broken deck and saw a red-haired man. The Yonko Shanks stood at the bow of the boat and asked her with a smile: "Do you have any wine?"
She exchanged a can of home-brewed rum for his help, but she didn't expect that this can of wine would lead to all the subsequent stories.
Routes to the New World. She was knocked down and got up again at the naval training ground, rescued a naval ensign in distress in a storm, and faced off against the Yonko's old enemies in the deep sea.
Navy Admiral Kizaru discussed with her in the vegetable market what kind of ginger is suitable for making soup. Former Admiral Aokiji rode a rusty bicycle to borrow fire from her. The captain of the white-bearded team came down from the sky to stop the pirate attack for her. After eating the hash browns she ordered, Straw Hat Luffy said loudly, "Akari, you're so kind." The green-haired swordsman used three knives to guard her flanks in the deep sea. The blond cook... Something was very wrong.
On this sea, some people are waiting for ONE PIECE, and some are waiting for the straw hat to be returned. What she was waiting for was to finish the half bottle of rum the next time they met.
Reader comments
It looks good, and the writing style is more mature than most of the novels. The emotional scenes between Akari and Shanks are also good and gradually deepened.
I just always have the feeling that a storm is coming, and I am worried about whether there will be a knife in the future? Will Akari change the plot? Earlier, Ace and Dad still died according to the original work, which was quite sad.
Disadvantages:
1. There are many bugs in the original work. For example, the Shanks crew only wrote correctly that Beckman and Jesus Bu, and Usobu will also be in the Daughter Kingdom within two years (?), This is a completely avoidable mistake based on the update time.
2. The importance of Akari in the new world situation has been emphasized, but her strength and status are just that of an ordinary merchant ship mate, so how does her importance reflect?
3. It is repeatedly mentioned that strangers see her and see her wearing an old sword with red hair, and guess that she is a red-haired woman. This makes people feel uncomfortable, and they hope that the heroine's strength will improve.
4. Since the romance with Shanks broke up, the plot has become more and more dull. It focuses too much on situation description, resulting in two chapters being updated every day, but there is no plot advancement. The novel still needs conflict and tension.
I see now that I feel like the heroine herself doesn't know what she wants to do and has been drifting with the crowd. Is it because the main plot of this article has not been released yet🤔
There are too few articles about One Piece Shanks. I like Shanks very much. I hope more works will appear🥰🥰🥰🥰
Awesome. Seriously watched.
Super detailed article, but that's not to say that the plot is dull. On the contrary, it has ups and downs but also a steady flow of daily life. I fell in love with the heroine. I feel like I learned a lot from reading this book (really, it's great to read this book)
It's Kizaru but it doesn't seem to be Kizaru. I'm looking forward to a different general.
The writing is very good and delicate, and the plot is quite novel [Like]
It's a good read and recommended. Those who like the plot and details will find it more comfortable [shy]
It looks good, and the writing style is more mature than most of the novels. The emotional scenes between Akari and Shanks are also good and gradually deepened. I just always have the feeling that a storm is coming, and I am worried about whether there will be a knife in the future? Will Akari change the plot? Earlier, Ace and Dad still died according to the original work, which was quite sad. Disadvantages: 1. There are many bugs in the original work. For example, the Shanks crew only wrote correctly that Beckman and Jesus Bu, and Usobu will also be in the Daughter Kingdom within two years (?), This is a completely avoidable mistake based on the update time. 2. The importance of Akari in the new world situation has been emphasized, but her strength and status are just that of an ordinary merchant ship mate, so how does her importance reflect? 3. It is repeatedly mentioned that strangers see her and see her wearing an old sword with red hair, and guess that she is a red-haired woman. This makes people feel uncomfortable, and they hope that the heroine's strength will improve. 4. Since the romance with Shanks broke up, the plot has become more and more dull. It focuses too much on situation description, resulting in two chapters being updated every day, but there is no plot advancement. The novel still needs conflict and tension. I see now that I feel like the heroine herself doesn't know what she wants to do and has been drifting with the crowd. Is it because the main plot of this article has not been released yet🤔
There are too few articles about One Piece Shanks. I like Shanks very much. I hope more works will appear🥰🥰🥰🥰
Awesome. Seriously watched. Super detailed article, but that's not to say that the plot is dull. On the contrary, it has ups and downs but also a steady flow of daily life. I fell in love with the heroine. I feel like I learned a lot from reading this book (really, it's great to read this book)
It's Kizaru but it doesn't seem to be Kizaru. I'm looking forward to a different general.
The writing is very good and delicate, and the plot is quite novel [Like]
It's a good read and recommended. Those who like the plot and details will find it more comfortable [shy]