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The writing is very good, but in my opinion, I always feel that the male protagonist doesn't have much sincerity now. I dislike the male protagonist very much, and of course the people around him also dislike him. I love the heroine the most. I don't know why, especially her character. I always want her to have a better life, even better. I don't often read ancient novels like this because I hate its feudal shackles, but the heroine is really hard to let go of.

The character design written by the author is very likable. The male protagonist has a very boyish look. He is youthful and handsome, and he is calm and dignified in his work. The interaction with the female protagonist is also very sweet and cute. He and the heroine are younger brothers, hahahaha 😂 It really makes me laugh every time the hero calls the heroine sister, it feels really good. I feel that the author has a very good grasp of the age and character design. This feeling of being both young and stable is really relaxed and relaxed. However, for the heroine, I feel that her speech and behavior are inconsistent with my experience. This is just my personal feeling. How can I put it, I feel that the heroine is a modern person and has graduated from college. She has experienced work and unemployment, and has experienced some harassment and setbacks in this life. However, the heroine's speech, behavior and handling feel very naive. It feels a bit silly and immature, and it doesn't match the experience of the previous heroine. This is just my personal feeling. In fact, the character of the heroine is also quite lovable, hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha cute. I quite like the heroine's love for food. The author also wrote the reason why. I really feel sorry for the heroine's experience in the previous life. This article is really good. I feel that everyone really deserves to be read. But I always like to resonate with the heroine when I read it. To be honest, I really feel for the heroine. She starved to death and traveled to ancient times. She is not rich. She is an adopted daughter. There are no people around her who treat her sincerely and consider her sincerely. I always feel a little sad when I read it. Every time I see the female protagonist mention that she wants to eat the food cooked by the male protagonist many times, but the male protagonist always refuses, it really hurts me. The male protagonist doesn't really like the female protagonist now, but just fulfills his obligation as a husband. It makes me feel so sad. In this relationship, the male protagonist is currently dominant, and the female protagonist is passive towards the relationship. She feels that the female protagonist likes the male protagonist, but she feels inferior. She always feels that the male protagonist does not like her, and the male protagonist belongs to the original female protagonist. Ahhhhhhhh, I feel so sorry for this inferiority complex. I hope that the male protagonist will pursue his wife fiercely in the future. The male protagonist always feels emotionally indifferent. I hope that he can be sincere and sincere in the future. I feel that the current relationship is perfunctory. I hope that the female protagonist can meet a few true friends after leaving. Regardless of male or female, they really consider the female protagonist. 🥺🥺🥺

I finally found a treasure novel 😢 😢 😢 The heroine has a very funny personality and is a bit out of the ordinary. She also writes fan fiction and is very cute [Blowing Kisses] I feel like the male protagonist is kind of gentle and elegant on the outside but a bit sultry and restrained on the inside 😏 The author of the chapter about He Li must torture the male protagonist severely. It is because the male protagonist does not show much love for the female protagonist that the female protagonist is worried about gain and loss. He actually refuses to give the female protagonist a bowl of chaos 😠😠😠

The characters written by the author are all very well created. I particularly like the female protagonist, and the male protagonist is also written in a three-dimensional way. It is obvious that the two people are not from the same era, and the difference and estrangement are very real. It just made me feel quite uncomfortable after watching it. The heroine is not from this world. She is far away from her hometown. She has no sense of belonging here and no one really treats her well. I hope that there will be less abuse of the female protagonist in the future, so that she does not have to be wronged all the time. It will be better to watch the male protagonist more. The male protagonist is now a bit mean to the female protagonist. Although it can be seen from the details that he cares a little, on the surface it is really hurtful and makes the female protagonist sad. I really hope that in the later period, the male protagonist can pursue his wife properly, put down his face and figure, and truly make up for it. In addition, I especially hope that the heroine will really live a happy and comfortable life after the divorce, and no longer need to revolve around the hero. There will be no plot where the heroine still misses the hero deeply. It is enough for the heroine to live her own life well after leaving. The author, please, be sure to really pursue your wife in the later stage. Don't make up with her after just a little pursuit. Is it okay to torture the male protagonist severely? 😢

When I read it from the perspective of the heroine, I always felt out of breath. I felt very uncomfortable, but I had to live in that era. I felt that there was always a gap between myself and the people there. Not to mention that in the years before the time travel, the novel always reminded him in his dreams that you have traveled to a book, and the plot line of that book will unfold later. It will also make him unable to live a good life. He will tolerate his feelings and so on, because he thinks the story will unfold. What can I do even if I like you? So for him, there is always a feeling that he will not be able to live through it now, and this will be over next year. For the male protagonist, his feelings for her are gradual, but there is no way to say how much love he has. Some can only say that I married you, you are mine, you can't go to others, etc. It's just a possessive feeling. For the heroine, he has a feeling that others are good to him, but others are not. But after they returned to the welfare together, her kindness to him disappeared and became relatively dull. She no longer accompanies him, and he will leave in the future, so he will no longer have expectations for him.

In a plot of marriage first and love later, the male protagonist is physically attracted to the female protagonist. In the final analysis, it is just lust. From the beginning, it was obvious that the heroine was treated as an object, not caring about her feelings, allergies, likes and dislikes. The heroine's demands were regarded as hypocritical, which was actually quite suffocating. Later, when I really fell in love with it, I started to care about what the heroine said, what I liked, and how the heroine felt. In fact, the male protagonist is a very cold-blooded person, too rational, strict with himself and also very strict with his wife. He is a physical brother and a psychological father. He is the same kind of person as the original heroine (it feels like the original heroine and the third male protagonist are a bit like the male and female protagonists who have been sexually transformed). They are strict, and everything they say and do strictly follows the template. The heroine is a cat who breaks the rules for him. He will be bored at first, but he can't help but be attracted to her, because maybe deep down in his heart, there is a moment when he wants to be such a wanton person.

Well, it's not bad. I can see that the author's writing is good, but some plots happen inexplicably, and the characters are not explained clearly. It's a bit confusing, but the female protagonist is very cute. I don't like the male protagonist very much, and I don't like the people around him either. I feel like I don't look down on the female protagonist. Come on author, I will continue to read

The rating really shouldn't be so low. I almost missed a good book. I especially like the relationship between the male and female protagonists. Although there are always conflicts, they are all secretly liked. It is very touching and real. The heroine has a very good temperament. I like such a big-hearted and optimistic person. I will definitely torture the male protagonist again in the future to make his memory long. I am very much looking forward to it, very much looking forward to it!! The author writes "Slow Water" and talks about it eloquently, and it seems very comfortable. It didn't take long to tie it up, and it didn't drag on at all. I hope it can keep up!!

When I clicked in, I was attracted by the cuteness of the female protagonist and the male protagonist. The author is great, and the writing is really high-level. It feels like sweet wine, with a slight sweetness, and you will have endless aftertaste when you taste it. It's such a pity that such a high-quality novel is not popular. This is really worthy of careful review and recommendation in Guyan. I also wish the author a big hit with this book [Top post][Top post]

I have also read Chuan Shuwen before. The protagonist is basically from a God's perspective, and I have a general understanding of the development direction of the story, and then there is the plot of Shuangwen. This book adjusts the perspective of the protagonist. Although the heroine in the book also has a God's perspective, she constantly reminds herself that she is just a cannon fodder female supporting role, so she uses her own methods to lead the story back to the main storyline. Of course, the author did not really write what the main plot of the original story was. I think this is the technical → not writing, but readers can vaguely think of the main plot and give full play to their imagination. It is sweet yet sour. The heroine's upbringing environment has caused her to feel insecure, while the male protagonist has a bit of a dark underbelly. It made me want to read every chapter. This book has a small flaw, that is, there are not enough updated chapters, and I have almost finished reading it... I am waiting for the author to update it quickly, and looking forward to the follow-up development. It is a sour and sweet article that I haven't seen for a long time.