You Are a Pirate, and You Are Mad at the Young Master for Eavesdropping on My Thoughts!

The male protagonist has a group of younger brothers who follow him and are brave and invincible. The female protagonist needs to bring her own rare treasures, she needs to be very capable, and she has to climb from the bottom to the male protagonist step by step to assist him [laughs] The male protagonists in male videos are not so happy, okay? Xiao Yan has to slowly become stronger step by step. The male protagonist in this book comes with all the favors.

After reading a few chapters, the writing style is so familiar. Every sentence and paragraph is so familiar. Is this article an AI article? ? ? I saw a lot of articles with the same style on 🍅. An AI article from a studio? They are so similar. The writing style, sentence expressions, and even the meaning of each sentence are very similar, with a similarity of 95%. However, what is worthy of praise is that the plots of the AI ​​novels that have appeared in recent months are still good, the characters are also okay, and you can continue to watch them. The female protagonist is the male protagonist's big blood bag, and the female protagonist is not willing. The female protagonist will feel aggrieved.

Super pretty! Show me the menu and I'm hungry [cry][cry] To sum up: this book should be called "I Give Doflamingo a Goldfinger Wife", and it should appear on a male channel rather than a female channel. Originally, it seemed that the heroine's survival as a bottom person was quite interesting, but what kind of food did the heroine cook for Dover, so that Dover could read his mind? ? ? Is this still a female channel? All the trump cards are exposed. It's really frustrating. The heroine has lost her wits again at this time. She thinks it's impossible to read minds. She thinks it's because Dover has a tacit understanding with her and is on the same channel. I didn't see the emotional line at all. I couldn't imagine how two people could fall in love with each other. Dover just used the heroine as a tool and a nanny. After becoming the heroine, he would think wow! This man is so domineering, so smart that he actually has the same brain wave as mine. Then a hero comes to save the beauty and they fall off a cliff together. Then the two of them spend a few days and nights together with a deep love. In the end, is the heroine willing to become Dover's tool? [Laughs] I read the introduction again, and the last two sentences are that the heroine is a queen, and she even has to ask the hero for a piece of land. She has no real power at all, right? Don't you think this is very pampering? ? Complete male video

It looks good. Ming's character is more in line with the original work. He is a tyrant with a strong desire for control. He is moody and domineering. He eats the heroine's food and mutates into a mind-reader (I don't know if it is a private design, because the comment section said that Princess Otohime can do this. I haven't remembered it since I watched it for so long). Anyway, he can further control the overall situation! And the heroine is very smart, she came from the end of the world, she is kind and sharp! In order to survive, she pretended to be transparent at first and looked for opportunities to escape. Unexpectedly, she was completely exposed by her mind-reading skills. It didn't take long for the smart heroine to find out that Brother Ming had mind-reading skills (Brother Ming never thought of hiding it). In my opinion, it was a public pull [laughs] It's quite touching. But I didn't bring it in. I watched it as a spin-off of One Piece. I saw many people in the comment area saying that the author abused women and couldn't stand the perspective of the female protagonist. To be honest, I'm a female and I think it's okay [face covering]. After all, the background of One Piece is like this, and so is Ming's character. The heroine has not been abused at all. Isn't she just cooking? She didn't know what the special effects of the food she cooked were. She was a slave before. In order to survive and live a better life, everyone couldn't bear to cook? She wants to escape, why can't someone else catch her? It is said that the male protagonist is teasing the female protagonist, but the original Ming Ge is so bad. The author wrote about the heroine beating Brother Ming violently. If he dared to write it, I would not dare to read it [face covering]. In that case, I would not be able to relate to the original work at all. Besides, if I were to write about a super girl, I wouldn't be writing a pirate fanfic, right? It's better to wear it on Brother Ming's boat! You must know that One Piece is an anime with a fairly complete social system. I think Pirate World is just a hot-blooded show, so adding a little romance to the mix would be okay. I'm not saying that the heroine was mind-reading. The problem is that Brother Ming never concealed his mind-reading ability. Later, the heroine also restrained his thoughts. I think this kind of publicity is quite good. The heroine didn't have to suffer much, she was a slave in life, and she didn't have much force value. Goldfinger is still auxiliary, almost the same as sugar. If Goldfinger was a force of force, pressing down on Dover and beating him, I would feel like the world of One Piece has been shattered. No matter, I think it looks pretty good anyway, everyone has different tastes.

"Doflamingo Becomes King", "One Piece and His Mobile Warehouse Cook Blood Pack", "My Life Dedicated to My Lover", "On How a Woman Uses Her Super Powers to Assist the "Emperor"", "Hey! As the male protagonist of a female channel, I am "surprisingly" doted on by the author! 😊" "Chapter 1, the clown fighting with the air" "The domineering pirate loves hard"

The characters are very unique, and the writing is also good. Some people always think that the female protagonist is too much to suppress the male protagonist, which is not good for the male protagonist. . . Is there a possibility that this is a fanfic? Doflamingo is already here and what else do you want to do with a bicycle?

To be honest, it's not a loss to invest in, the setting is not magically changed, the female protagonist is strong and smart, and getting along with the male protagonist is natural and logical, there is no such plot that she falls in love without thinking and then fights to death. It's super natural, if you don't like to see the miserable life of the female protagonist at the beginning, just skip it. It's really super, super good-looking ヽ(；▽；)ノ For those who have bad reviews, please go out and go right to Feng Aotian's column. This is not a brainless strong one or a brainless fall in love with the heroine, and it is a spin-off! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! It's not an idle idea! ! ! ! ! ! !

In fact, I think it's pretty good and pretty good-looking. Now is the time when the heroine is struggling to survive under Doflamingo. Because it is from the perspective of the heroine and she is very smart and powerful, so I like the heroine very much🥰. In the latest chapter, Dover captures the heroine, so can the heroine torture Dover in the future? It would be better if there is physical abuse as well, not just emotional abuse. Dover holds all the heroines in his hands and laughs at her jokes, which is in line with the character, but I don't want the same for the subsequent heroines. I must beat Dover, Susu! I read the current book review on a whim, and you guys are going to impose novel restrictions like this. This is the theme set by the author. The heroine is used as a blood bag. That is the bargaining chip for the heroine to have a better life on the ship. You have a feeling that you are restricting the creation of novels in the name of loving your daughter. Shouldn't most people just write book reviews if they see content they don't like? Why are you still verbally attacking the author? There is no respect for people at all, and the words are so violent. If you don't like it, just leave, but you insist on verbally attacking others from the commanding heights. Really no quality at all.

It is a very good article for me who has read One Piece. Teacher, please ignore the people who say that your writing is like AI. It is a very interesting article. I think it is very interesting and the food is very delicious. None of them have read One Piece and do not understand the world view and rules in it. I think what the teacher wrote is very consistent with the logic of One Piece. In the Age of Discovery, slaves are the lowest existence. Mumu relies on her own skills and abilities to reach home step by step. The process of becoming the highest member of the family is very consistent with the logic of the big maritime world. I don't think it is like AI. The teacher should have also watched One Piece. The story that blends the world of One Piece and the real world is more suitable for Chinese babies. Ignore those who just want to watch the heroine take off. After all, everyone has their own Hamlet. Come on, teacher, you can just produce food at a high speed with peace of mind. I love you, tweet.

Well, the heroine's character is the best I've ever seen in Tomato. The whole story line is also very logical. I understand that this article is very well written, and I am not saying that what is said below is not as good as a male video. But I have to give the author some advice. The female protagonist has no goals and objectives of her own. She really seems to be a hardworking worker supporting logistics. And then her interaction with the male protagonist is too high, giving people the feeling that serving the male protagonist is her only goal. I think we can arrange for the heroine to successfully escape once or for other events to allow her to find what she wants to do. The top priority now is to find out the core of the heroine. Where will the heroine go? This issue must be made clear. I think we've written enough about where the heroine comes from. We can't fall in love with this man every day. How can this man understand the heroine's heart? Of course, if it were just a romance novel, I would also think this book is already well written.

Needless to say, it's great. The characters fit the original work, and the male and female protagonists are well matched. Anyone who has watched One Piece will fall in love with it without thinking. For those who haven't seen it, you can take a look at the general background. This world is extremely cruel to ordinary people, and there is no place to settle down. The heroine's own combat power in the end of the world is completely incomparable in the world of pirates (the comparison of combat power is very exaggerated). For those who say that the heroine gives gold fingers and acts as a mother to the hero, I want to say: the heroine is positioned as a support staff with zero combat power on the ship. If you want to gain a foothold on the ship, you must build something. It is the same as working part-time. You can't want generous treatment and do nothing at the same time. This is impossible in any world, right? Then Dover's position in the original work is that everything useful should be taken for himself, and the transformation of the chess piece into his wife is extremely delicious [send heart] The first long review is dedicated to this book, I eat eat eat eat eat eat eat

It's really good, I like it very much! ! ! ! Attached here are 5🌟I hope you won't be fooled The plot so far is completely reasonable, but I'm a little worried about whether there will be misunderstandings later and I'll start to get mixed up. After reading the comment section, I really begged you 💦Finally, I found a person who is willing to produce food. Please stop trolling (;´༎ຶД༎ຶ`) If you don't want to watch it, you can just abandon it. No one will force you to watch it by pressing your head! ! ! ! The child is really hungry

Very nice, recommended. I've always liked Brother Ming, and it's great to be won by the heroine bit by bit. Ming Ge's character is very close to the original work, and there is no character breakdown. The plot design is also very interesting. It's really not easy to conquer such a tyrant man! Seeing that Brother Ming can't handle the heroine's dancing, I can't hold my mouth shut, okay? [Laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] However, after watching it more, I felt that the heroine's setting should be richer. She can't be so nervous when others are in danger, she just thinks about how to cook and what to buy... The style of painting is too fragmented. It's time for her to slowly accept this pirate group and fit the style of others more closely. Finally, I hope to be kind to the heroine, and my subordinates should quickly learn how to cook. Don't let her cook all day long, cook when she is injured, or cook when she has no energy. She has too strong a tool-like attribute. Let her do something else and live her own life. And what's more, the Dressrosa Mingo team just shouldn't be too cruel, otherwise I feel like the heroine won't be able to accept it.

It looks good. I like it. The plot is smooth and the writing is not childish. The heroine is very smart, but I didn't expect that there is a bug on the opposite side and can read minds. I feel that the heroine will stand up straight away if she knows this. The heroine is 95% exploited. I can't stand it.

This is my second book review after an update. Generally speaking, men are strong and women are weak. In the world view of One Piece, this kind of relatively ordinary force is worth the weight of the heroine. There is nothing we can do about her weakness in the early stage. It may be a bit uncomfortable to watch, but I personally think the portrayal of the heroine is very good, and It's the only one that I've experienced watching One Piece in terms of pulling power. The emotional line didn't feel weird, and I found it very enjoyable to watch. As for the AI flavor mentioned in the comment section, objectively it's a little bit, but it doesn't affect the reading. The overall plot is still very interesting to watch, and it's obviously the author himself. But I'm still curious about whether I'll write about Doverdy.

Although this book has a name on the cover and feels full of tension, I laughed like crazy after reading the first 100 or so chapters. I thought it was a meaty article. It turned out that the heroine was simply stupid and didn't understand this aspect. A pirate fan like me who watched One Piece did not reject this kind of fanfic. I used to reject this kind of fanfic from the anime I like to watch. The main reason is that what he wrote has no big plot relationship with One Piece. I laughed like crazy. It's very good. I opened it yesterday and stayed up all night to watch it. I slept for about three or three hours, maybe three or four hours, because I had a phone call. Then I opened it and continued watching it. I highly recommend it. It's very interesting. The heroine is not the kind who relies on men. She is very intelligent and has a very strong personality. It's also very powerful. It's not a story about dependence. I highly recommend it. I don't know how it will go in the future. Anyway, I've looked at 120 or 30 pictures so far, and I think it's super interesting. So far, I think this book has a score of over 8 points, which is not worthy at all. I think it should be rated 9.9. The remaining 0.1 Is because the author has not finished updating it. The author updates it too slowly. Only three or four pictures a day are not enough to read.

I think both the stylistic description and the character creation are very detailed. Especially the heroine, because she lived in the apocalypse in her previous life, she is very cautious in her character. He is the kind of character who thinks three steps after taking one step. I think the description is very accurate and full. Another thing that really irritated me was that when I first watched it, I thought that the heroine fell in love with the hero first. From chapter 65, I could tell that the heroine was already a little attracted to her at that time. However, when the hero became curious and wanted to know more about the heroine, he should have been attracted. The ambiguity between them was so sweet that I twisted into maggots while watching it. I hope the author will make an effort to update it. Come on, come on! [Shy] Am I the only one who thinks the heroine's character is very cute? 😋

I think it is a novel worth reading, and the heroine's character has won my heart. Brother Ming's character is also very realistic, but I don't know if it's because I memorized the composition for the exam. Some of the content made me feel like I was reading a long-form composition? . Moreover, the sentence patterns of "It's not... It's not..." And "It's not... It's..." Are a bit too much and a bit boring (can this be said?) But overall it's a good read. There are more than 200 chapters and the author must continue to write more! !

The first half, before chapter 100, is better. It tells the story of the heroine, as a female slave on a pirate ship, surviving through her analysis and cooking skills and falling in love with the hero. The male protagonist has the ability to read minds and understands all the actions of the female protagonist. His actions are like catching a turtle in a urn. Stories are best when there is no love.

The writing is great, the heroine is also very witty, and it won't make people feel bored (because obviously some books are just beginning to focus on survival), but the heroine is made so stupid, which makes people feel very useless. Come on, I suggest the author to update it every day, quack quack

Although I know that the young master is not a good person, but... The interaction is a bit sweet [thinking] I like watching it! Looks good! It feels like the writing is flesh-and-blood, and the heroine is sober and not in love! Joker is very good at teasing~

In fact, I think the author's writing is quite good, but as the female protagonist, I feel that the heroine's life is particularly aggrieved. But from the background of the times and the environment at that time, this is an inevitable process, but I can't understand the male protagonist's mind-reading ability because the scope is too large and too broad. The author's inspiration is very good, and the ideas are also very clever. It's just that I simply can't accept the mind-reading aspect. I think everything else is pretty good.

To be honest, it's really good to watch. Dover is very close to the original work, and there is no OOC. The heroine doesn't know anything about One Piece, and she comes from the end of the world, so she is very cautious, but it is quite real, because One Piece is a world where the jungle is strong, and the relationship between Dover and the heroine is also very smooth. It looks good [Like]

I have read 66 chapters so far, and the author writes it very well! The plot is very compact and the emotions are very relatable. I am now waiting to see how the young protagonist is attracted to the heroine and falls in love! As for some readers who say that the heroine is a tool... I can only say that they are too impatient. The author's plot has not yet been laid out and the foreshadowing has just been laid. In the future, the writing will definitely get better and smoother! Give this book some time and it will definitely become popular. In addition, although it is the world line of One Piece, it does not affect your viewing at all if you have not watched the anime. The heroine is well portrayed, smart and not ostentatious! I really like it!

The logic and writing are both good, and Ding Shi Ding Mao Shi Mao Di speaks very clearly. I haven't watched One Piece, so I don't know much about the male protagonist. I just rely on my imagination. There are many perspectives of the heroine. If this book is about love, I think it is quite tight at the beginning. It is not about the pace, but it feels a bit serious. Maybe this is part of the plan. As for me, I quite like the narrative and the subject matter.

I'll go, the rice smells so good, it's beyond expectations. It's worth it even if you haven't watched One Piece. It's a good read. The characters of the male and female protagonists are both stable, and I can already feel the male protagonist's heartbeat. Hehe, rush!

The early stage is very good. The heroine has a calm personality and can handle everything under pressure, especially when she has nothing in the early stage. Being a chef is a job, a career, and the only chance to survive. It is understandable for me to seize it and work hard. At this time, the heroine's struggle is particularly dazzling; but in the later stage, especially when she is promoted to a senior cadre and the ambiguous period (?) Begins, she will look like a mother if she keeps talking about cooking. It is obvious that other abilities and values ​​have already appeared. Although the career choice of the heroine has always been [opening a restaurant], the feeling of opening a restaurant is very different from serving a single person or serving people on a ship (I don't know how to put it, who can summarize it, it is probably very unfree), but it is still like a servant, which makes people feel uncomfortable. And now the male protagonist's mind-reading ability can be turned off. However, the author's overall writing of this book is very good, and some of the plots are very tense. Based on the above, I decided to give it four stars.

It's so interesting to write! The pirate world is scary, disorderly and unreasonable to ordinary people. Only those who have the ability to experience it will feel that the pirate world is good. The first time I watched this, I remembered that Doflamingo was tall, hahaha, and he ate a lot. Every time I saw the description of the food, I felt greedy. The two of them also felt a pull together, "Teach me your writing too" Wuhu~~~

It's really beautiful. I stayed up late to tie it. I have never read One Piece, but the plot and logic of this book are very smooth and reasonable. The heroine is a logistics worker (or cook) in the end of the world who has space and healing powers. She has never been exposed to this pirate world, so those who have not seen it can feel free to watch it, it is like a new world view. This book is a survival food story in the early stage. As the heroine's status improves and her abilities are forced to show off, it becomes more macho and fantasy. During this process, the emotional line between the male protagonist Dover and the female protagonist developed slowly and slowly. It was very sweet, really sweet. The male protagonist is handsome, flirtatious, and deliberately flirts with the female protagonist, but our working-minded female protagonist just doesn't get it. From the male protagonist taking the initiative to show off his muscles to the female protagonist, to the two getting married and the female protagonist becoming pregnant, many funny and ridiculous things happened between them, which were very cute. While the relationship flows smoothly, you can feel the changes and enthusiasm of both parties at the same time. I really like this style. No one's character here is perfect, but the author truly interprets their lovability. Dover's sincerity as a bad person, Su Mu's superb insensitivity and heart-wrenching traces of apocalyptic life (emotionally), Monet's hesitation and admiration, baby5's lack of sense of need, and the kindness and growth of the little girl Martha... It's really not a loss to invest in. This novel allows people to experience multi-layered rich tastes, refreshing, sweet, bitter, spicy, funny, tender, realistic, fairy tale, incomplete and beautiful, delicious. Also, the author is truly the most prolific author I have ever seen, writing more than 8,000 words and four chapters a day! ! ! Dad, I love you! ! ! Please keep writing, it's so delicious

It's a very good article, and the characters are very restored. The perspective is always on Doflamingo's pirates, and there is less talk about the development of other forces at sea. Moreover, the female protagonist has no strength value and basically depends on the protection of the male protagonist. It would be great if we can give the female protagonist more strength. At present, it is regarded as a growth story. The original ability of the heroine will be gradually upgraded, and the mind-reading ability that was complained about will soon be blocked. The heroine can only heal others, and the ability that cannot heal herself will become a spiritual spring water that she can use. I just hope that she can add force. Without force value in the pirate world, it is too dangerous. In addition, I hope that the heroine can have her own life, not always being pushed around, and has no subjectivity.