[Pokemon] + [System] + [One heroine]
Qian Ming transmigrated to a parallel world filled with Pokemon. There are countless Pokemon here, but in this life, he is nothing more than the son of an ordinary worker.
Fortunately, he has an intelligence System.
[There is a Mega Stone in the secret realm ahead;]
[There is a special Feebas in the Wei River;]
[At the center of the secret realm lies a mysterious power that can grant people psychic abilities;]
With the System’s foreknowledge, Qian Ming finds opportunities at every turn and helps his Pokemon grow stronger!
But then he discovers that his Pokemon are powerful because of him.
He is like an Exp. Candy, able to speed up their growth.
From then on, he surges ahead!
Gym Leader...
Elite Four...
Champion...
Standing on the podium at the final Masters tournament, he declares:
“The reason I’ve achieved what I have today is that I can help Pokemon grow!”
The System only helped a tiny bit!
The plot is pretty good. I feel like the heroine appeared but didn't go to the same university with the protagonist and I'm not sure about it. Goldfinger only has information but no other functions, so it's not very strong. The protagonist didn't know the information and gave some items to his friends or sister, which is pretty good.
The writing is okay, but there are some typos. It's best to look back and correct them.
Five stars are given first. The writing is good so far. Keep up the good work and update more. I hope you won't use AI in the future (AI can be reported)
Although there are still some shortcomings, it is already very good
There is no problem at the moment. It would be better if there are some plots that are not cliche to give people a little freshness.
I feel like there could be more emotional scenes, but there are a little less emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists.
The protagonist has a master! Will the heroine have a master? Who is the heroine's master?
I don't know why, but I always feel like the author used AI to write it. You can write a book by yourself, don't use AI. AI books are a bit uncomfortable to read. You can practice and learn by writing a book by yourself. You can also stop reading to accumulate. Being able to write a good work is a very proud thing.
I really like this book, it's very well written!
It's bland, pretty good, you can watch it