Sky Curtain Inventory Tomorrow's Ark Starts from the Land Tour

The author's third book [Eating Melon] is actually written by Fang Zhou Laodeng, and Bilan is the later one [Shy] (Anyway, please give it a thumbs up [Send Hearts] The author writes novels to gain emotional value~)

Highly recommended to join the other extras! For example, "Rhode Island Source Stone Chronicles" only talks about daily branch plots, does not include grand and complicated geographical settings, and does not talk about the overall situation of Terra. It only focuses on the stories of small groups of characters. I only like to read the character stories and rush into it. I don't want to dig into the heavy worldview, there is no obscure research, it is all a lighthearted and sunny way to supplement the personal settings of the characters and short stories. It is a must-read for character parties.

The writing style in the early stage is stable, and the proportion of original movie viewing and movie viewing discussion is similar, and it does not seem to be laggy. Starting from the fourth volume, the writing style has been changed. The content of Land Patrol has been sharply reduced, and the reviews of each work have increased sharply. Adding four to five short comments at the beginning of each comment seems too cluttered. It doesn't make much sense to keep it, and it's not painful or itchy to remove it. Then, there were too many reviewed works, including movies, TV series, animations, and games, which were too complicated. There is also only one character in each work delivering a lengthy rant. In one sentence, Land Cruise has 4-5 short reviews and 4-5 long reviews, which is simply more frequent than tomato ads. The proportion is seriously unbalanced, 1/5 is considered good. The story that could have been written in two or three chapters was suddenly stretched to four or five chapters. Movie watching is not just about the one-way interaction between on-screen and off-screen, but also the collision of ideas and the interweaving of ideas between characters off-screen. It's not a long talk by one person. When you're reading a work, do you always talk so much that you can't stop talking? Comments need to be discussed, rather than writing a paper and then sending it to the tutor for comment. It doesn't matter if there is more than one tutor. There is no communication between the tutors at all. I was originally hesitating between three stars or four stars, but in the end I decided on four stars. I hope I can figure out my own style in the future, and I hope I can grasp the ratio between the original work and the comments. Conclusion: May your future be as bright as a star✧.

Let me ask you, when are you going to talk about pre-civilizations? After all, pre-civilizations were a bit too powerful. What is a sarcophagus? The full name is a home repair device from pre-civilizations? What do you mean they can pull stars away? What do you mean they have star maps of billions of planets? I can only say that the more I posted, the more curious I became, how did they send it?

It feels like the views would be slightly better if there were less repetitive comments about other worlds.

It's good, but could there be less "this reminds me of..."

Writing style: [Like] Narrative: [Like] Update speed: [Like] Mundo: [Like]

Overall, it's okay. The main problem is that Xiao Sanyue keeps crying. In just a few chapters, Xiao Sanyue is described as crying no less than three times. The two geniuses were surprised and these reactions were a bit strange. Other places are good. The theme of writing about Arknights is worth giving it a try. Personally, it feels good.

Good book, a rare viewing experience, keep up the good work, the author [blows a kiss], will you write a story about Dayan in the future? Approximately how many updates a day, what time is it usually updated? [Blow a kiss] [Top post] [Blow a kiss]

Although there are some minor flaws, it's not a big problem and it looks good.

Highly recommend reading this book.

Rare Ark movie viewing book, looks good

When to write an introduction to Sakaz

When will our Ursus unlucky bears arrive?

Nice! ! The author writes more

Very beautiful, very beautiful

As long as you keep updating I'll do anything.

Finally, there is a novel about watching Arknights movies, but I don't know if it will reach the end of the world.

Not bad, although there were a few I didn't want to see, so I skipped them

It's still pretty good [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's really strange. I didn't expect there to be Arknights fans who write about traveling in the earth.

Among the few Ark canopy stories, it is already the best, but it is still recommended to write about the reactions of the characters in the works that you are familiar with.

It's an extremely rare viewing experience of Arknights, and the writing is pretty good.