Becoming a God in the World of Beasts: Starting from Accepting a Slave Girl

Finished reading Chapter 45. I have been searching for history for an unknown amount of time, and after a long time, I found a readable novel. It is relatively good, but there are two shortcomings so far. 1. The portrayal of the protagonist is not very good. The so-called flesh and blood, has been completely forgotten in the previous life? Not to be idealistic, anyway, I think the protagonist should have a big love and a sinister character [smirk][snicker][eat melon] 2. Strength performance, this article currently has no development, only slow work to cultivate feelings. Money, status, and strength are very vague. They are easy to obtain but not easy to obtain. To be honest, this shortcoming is a big flaw. I don't know how the author handles the on-base plot, whether it will add points or subtract points. The author should not write about yandere. For now, the protagonist is not a dog-licker, and it is not a depressing and pure redemption story. Stopping at chapter 54, I don't recommend reading this if you want to read some cool male videos. Let's re-evaluate it. The female channel has a strong female character and a weak male. The third person has no perspective. It's almost like he writes a diary. The protagonist is of no use after being reborn. He has been restrained and has no development. How much knowledge can he learn to contract and exercise. If it were a redemption novel that started with a Western fantasy novel, it would be equally slow-burning, but it would be infinitely better than this one. Moreover, it would be written from the perspective of the protagonist, describing how the protagonist develops, develops, and grows. This novel may not have been a male novel from the beginning, and the possibility of it being written by AI cannot be ruled out. It is just a framework that was input. The content is empty, and the characters have no emotions. It is like a machine, expanding according to the designated route, and no writing style can be seen.

After being a Shennong for so long, I finally got a good new book [crying] Just take a look, there are almost no poisonous spots! The author's writing style is good, but I feel that the writing is a little bit raw, but it does not affect the viewing experience, so you can rest assured [shy] the author's control of the characters and rhythm is excellent [send heart] you can completely watch it [laughing] I hope the author will continue to work hard [Blow a kiss] From now on, the power generated for love every day will be yours.

It's beautiful, the heroine is well written, especially Sang Leng, it really poked me

(The following is just my personal opinion) If you read it, it's okay if you don't use your brain. Logically, there are some loopholes. If you treat it as a mindless and cool article, it's fine. And the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is a bit baffling. The female protagonists have a crush on the male protagonist because of trivial things, and the portrayal is not deep enough. It makes it feel like the female protagonists are deliberately trying to please the male protagonist, which is a bit boring to read. But I feel that the author is quite careful, and you can feel it when you read and feel the plot. It's just that some small details were not done well. I hope the author will continue to work hard and finish this book. I believe the author can still do it. This book is not bad (early stage) [Like][Like][Like] I just ask the author to give a stable performance and not to have any explosive plot. I feel that if I don't pull it back, the writing may be a little off, later on. There should also be less modification of memory. If you are not very receptive, you will faint.

It's very beautiful, I recommend [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

Not much else to say, just two words, beautiful Well, for personal reasons, this subject matter is really good-looking and fits my point of view very well. It's not brainless or brain-burning. It looks very clean and comfortable.

There is a shortage of books. A very nice book. I watched more than 60 pictures in two hours. See the end. Overall, there are no serious problems. This is a book for me who is short on books. I will keep chasing you.

Feeling good so far Just this memory tampering is a big poisonous point. The author will not read the readers' comments at all and is immersed in his own creation. My score was higher before, not to mention being tortured by others (I was tortured wherever I went). As mentioned in the previous article, the orcs on my side are very strong and almost wiped out the human continent in the previous life. Now I don't know where an A-level telepathic orc came from, and changed the memories of everyone except S-level and below, including the passerby protagonist, who still has no ability to resist. There are too many flaws. For example, the protagonist's mother didn't leave him anything. How do you know that he has a token behind him to enter the royal library? Also, even after collecting so many high-level orcs, he still can't resist anything. What's the point of collecting? Many people don't know whether the author wants to write a foreshadowing or something, and for some reason they don't come back. Due to the current situation of the protagonist and the update speed, it is impossible to keep up with the return of Foreshadowing Circle. I was quite looking forward to this book when I first updated it. However, after saving it for more than a month, I read thirty chapters, all of which were about being tortured and deflated by others. In addition, with the update speed, I have no desire to continue reading.

It's nice and comfortable to watch. It's progressing very quickly.

I'm so happy to see that the male lead is just me.

Every female protagonist has her own characteristics, and the male protagonist is very gentle. Come on, author [cry] [cry] You must keep reading, I like to see the redemption [Adoration]

It's quite cool, the lightning protection awareness is full, the protagonist is not holding back, the tsundere of the eldest lady is also well portrayed, and the character is a very cool and arrogant character. If I have to talk about a shortcoming, it is that the combat system is a bit strange, and the combat power relies entirely on the contracted orcs.

It's quite good-looking. The male protagonist is really affectionate and righteous. Although he wants to take advantage of it, he is also sincere. This kind of description is really awesome and very sweet.

This is a good book, and the author must keep it up. The male protagonist doesn't have a great performance, and some parts of the plot are untenable, but it is still relatively smooth, the writing style can be improved, and the plot can be designed with more effort.

It looks good, but it's a bit difficult to modify the memory. And updates are too slow

It's very good. It took me more than 5 hours to read it. The author should update it soon [laughing][laughing][laughing]

A good novel doesn't need too much explanation [please update]

The characters are well drawn and the plot is superb, you can check it out.

It's quite normal... Nothing unusual about it, it looks good.

If you like beast girls, you can check it out. Anyway, it pokes me, and it looks very comfortable.

It's a bit short, but the content is quite exciting. The routines are old routines. There are many similar books, but the writing is pretty good.

Very nice to look at. It's a very traditional power-up story, and the protagonist doesn't have any modifier-level plug-ins.

It's so beautiful, it's not enough. The pace is also quite fast. Quite a lot of heroines

Thank you for the author, it's very beautiful [like] When I watched it, it was only a few thousand, but now it's 60,000.

Although there are some flaws in the front, the back is really cool to look at.

As far as I'm concerned, there's no big problem. It's easy.

It looks great, but updates are a bit slow [smile]

Sri finally got the money, meow, Hao is optimistic about the book, meow!

It's pretty good to watch, but sometimes there are too many emotional details with pets, which makes it a bit hard to watch.

It looks great. It would be better to update it soon.