A Stranger Lost in the Bamboo Forest

There are no redundant adjectives, no stiff old jokes interspersed, and the text is as plain as water. This does not mean that it is boring, but you can read this novel to reset your reading state after reading those exaggerated novels on Tomato. The writing style is similar to Zhang Jiajia, but the emotional output is reduced. Rather than the author's own moaning, I feel that this kind of simple storytelling is more in line with my own aesthetics. The more important point is that this book so far is neither a stallion novel nor a lily novel. It is said that the purple old woman in this book does not seem to care about her age very much, which can be regarded as a return to the original design, but in this case Yuyuko should care more about her age. It is really a pleasure to watch the interaction between the male protagonist and Ling Xian. There is no grand confession, only a long and gentle companionship. Which man doesn't want a lover who is waiting for you to come home at the door with warm tea (I know this book is a harem novel with multiple female protagonists, but the male protagonist and Ling Xian really satisfy my fantasy of love).

It's very bland, not the kind of blandness that has no taste, but the kind of blandness that makes you slowly read a literature book under the shade of a tree. It's not a comedy that will make you happy, it's not a hot-blooded drama that will make your blood boil, and it's not something else that will make you have a strong emotional reaction, but it is the kind of book that will make you calm down and read it.

I'll go, it's so beautiful that I forgot to care about it

I've seen a few of these rare Touhou fanfictions before. They seem to be called Touhou Virgos or something, and there's also the Jielu Man. This one is also good-looking. The character design is a little different from the previous Touhou ones, but it's better, more everyday, and not too loud. It's pretty good. Come on!

There are too many chapters in Eastern literature. I hope the author can give the characters a good ending. This book is smooth and clear in terms of logic and emotion. The slower emotional rhythm can describe the characters more, and the multi-perspective description is also well mastered. There will be no sense of fragmentation, but a more complete narrative. The summary is smooth, warm, and the pace is moderate. It is a good book [please update]

Aside from the sense of confusion that comes with being in first person it doesn't hurt, especially Marisana.

It's so delicious. A stranger in the bamboo forest, maybe I will never forget you in this life.

It's not bad so far. When writing fan fiction, you should post posts with your favorite characters. Unless you can change the future, don't write about the past

There is a light mood in the plain style, and the melancholy atmosphere is a bit like love and waiting, which is the reserve of a girl, but when will we fast forward to Tie Tie [Thinking]

The writing is very good, looking forward to the follow-up

The writing is good, keep up the good work!

At present, it seems to be slow to gain momentum, which is quite good [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

A very nice oriental novel

The writing is quite good. It feels similar to that Touhou Fantasyland. The author is capable, but the updates are slow. Please write faster for me [angry]

The writing is okay, you can read it

Very nice, slow-heating type Discuss the shortcomings of this book and give some suggestions to the author Disadvantages 1. The protagonist's character is not obvious. The current chapter does not clearly highlight the charisma of the protagonist. Coupled with the limitations brought by the first-person perspective, the protagonist's character is not very full, which can easily affect the sense of substitution. 2. The reasons why some heroines fall in love with the protagonist are not obvious. Love, Jue, Qin Xin's process of falling in love with the protagonist is a bit inexplicable, and the protagonist feels like a succubus. Suggestions 1. The author can try to write a few extra chapters at the end of each volume. The focus of the extra chapters is to supplement the setting, portray the protagonist's character, and the heroine's daily heartbeat [love]. For extra content, you can try to write about the following aspects: (1) From the perspective of the heroine, write how the heroine fell in love with the hero. For example, the second volume can be devoted to four chapters respectively about love, sleep, heart, and the journey of Suzu-sen from seeing the male protagonist as a stranger to slowly becoming fond of the male protagonist. (2) Write about the exciting daily life of the heroine and the hero together, such as dating (In addition, I don't recommend that the author spends too much time writing extras. As for the reasons, everyone understands) 2. If you want to accept another female protagonist in the future, you can try to switch to the female protagonist's perspective to describe how the new female protagonist is moved when she meets the male protagonist. 3. Describe the character of the male protagonist more. Specifically, it is necessary to highlight the differences between the male protagonist and ordinary people to reflect the male protagonist's personality charm. 4. . . . I hope the author will take great care of his health. After all, the author's daily update time is really too hellish! ⌒꩜ᯅ꩜⌒ Finally, I hope that the author will take my suggestions rationally and make this book better and better✌︎ ॑꒳ ॑✌︎

Not bad, just don't cut it

Personally I think it looks pretty good

Promise me, the author, that you will definitely write it down. [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates]

A very good novel, it makes my brain spin [eat melon] [laugh evilly]

Support support support, faster, faster, faster So far, the latest chapter is worth reading, but it's a bit sparse.

Well, it's interesting to write. The main character is Bu Long Aotian, and he seems to have a warm feeling.

Come on, big brother who writes about Che Wan

The way of writing in the third person and the first person looks weird, but it's oriental, so it's five stars

It's very interesting. The protagonist gradually establishes a connection with everyone in Gensokyo.

Full marks, very nice oriental fanfic