The Ancestral Person Is My Father, and I Am Now His Grandson?

Will the protagonist awaken the abilities of the people of the motherland? ? ? ? I'll watch it again after I wake up. It's obvious that you won't be able to do this in the drama.

The writing is okay, but can the protagonist inherit the superpowers of the people of the motherland? That way he would be more handsome and stronger.

The author's writing is very good, and he wrote out the interaction between the family relationship with the people of the motherland that I thought about, but I think the protagonist should not be too rigid if he wants to imitate Fang Yuan's personal personality. It is better to have his own personality, come on

The protagonist traveled through time and became Ryan. His skills are not the same as before, and it smells a bit like the original form of massacre. The contact with the people of the motherland also fully describes the desire for family love of the people of the motherland in the original work, so it is not considered OOC. Among the new fan novels of the Black Robe Pickets, this is one of the new ones worth reading [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart] The character of the protagonist is a bit like a human machine. He records, observes, analyzes and thinks. At this stage, the protagonist is still very invincible. Although the writing is not good, it seems to be in a state where it is basically difficult to kill, so it still looks very cool. There are no ugly poisonous points so far. There is a small climax in the 20th or 30th chapter. The battle scenes are very immersive. The protagonist belongs to the kind of situation where time travels but does not have a good understanding of the world, so I have not had much contact with the protagonist group so far. There is no OOC so far. Situation, among all the fanfics of the Black Robe Pickets, this one looks pretty good. At least the game between the characters looks very comfortable, and there is no sense of being mechanical. Although it is not a mother, it has not completely abandoned morality. The simulated rational analysis does not look particularly abrupt, and the description of the supporting characters is not bad (*σ´∀`)σ

Although the author said before that the protagonist is very CS, he has never done any bad things. He just took the initiative to kill a blind spot, which is nothing in the world of black robes.

First of all, it depicts the character's relationship very well. It adheres to the original character setting and captures the core of the superhuman character of God. However, it does not overly mythologise itself like other black robe fan fiction. Instead, it writes the growth process of the protagonist from an ordinary person under surveillance to a superhero, and plans Walter as the son of the motherland. But it is undeniable that there are some poisonous points. The protagonist's front foot is still hiding obediently, and the back foot kills the blind spot when he arrives at Walter's company. The contrast between the front and back is too great. Secondly, the heartbeat, expression, and gun-raising movements are portrayed too frequently, which affects the sense of immersion. But these are minor problems. So far, the story plot is smooth, the character setting is clear, and the shortcomings of insufficient writing power do not affect the overall excellence of the work. Five stars.

I read the only comment and was still thinking about why it is different from the people of the motherland. What kind of super power is it? After reading it, it is good. It is equivalent to the protagonist absorbing the blood of other super humans to copy and evolve. It is not bad. It is written by the author. Let's continue reading.

No matter what, he must have laser eyes and the ability to fly. This is consistent with his status as a son.

It looks good, five-star praise, but what are these recent pictures saying? ? I have only watched some videos or plot explanation videos of the Black Robe Pickets on Douyin. I beg the author to write more about the protagonist. The protagonist only appeared in the last few paragraphs of the latest updated chapter. I really,,,,,,

Hurry up and add the hot wire and flight, and you can also have a great COS.

Blood self-healing + devouring growth will make the protagonist full. Wait for the latest compound No. 1 To be released, and then the protagonist will trick his grandfather later.

The smell of AI is quite strong, but its flaws do not overshadow its advantages. Brothers, stop looking, the people of the motherland have been stabbed to death by crowbars [crying]

It's definitely a good book, okay, I just think it's very good, uh, if nothing else, it should be an 8 or 9 out of 8. A very good book. If nothing else, it can only be said to be a good book. Brother Shui, you are awesome!

The best Black Robe fanfic I have read so far. After reading the ending, I was eager to find a Black Robe novel. This book is pretty good. Burn incense, eunuch

The writing is good, but why are all the superpowers I inherited gone? Why not write an original character?

We all had super hearing in the beginning, so why not continue to awaken Azu's ability?

The details are quite impressive. I read this book very slowly. It is different from other fast food articles.

Yes, it's a rare black robe fanfic. The overall portrayal is quite consistent. I look forward to more updates.

It's not bad. It's not that the Holy Mother is decisive in killing, but there is the original owner's mother who is a slut. The rest is perfect, and when will we get someone with the same ability as the motherland?

The writing is very good, but the other characters feel well-written with the support of the TV series plot, but the protagonist grows up too fast and feels like the character is thin.

It's pretty. It feels so good. Started to pull,

It's so beautiful. Take a rest.

Sorry, but so far so good.

Boss, why are our ratings so low [crying]

I don't understand why the rating is so low, but this novel is really good, and I feel so sad that I can't read it until the end. Very nice.

I like this theme very much, it's good and beautiful

The writing is very good, especially the fight scene with Ryan. I feel it is one of the best plot designs among black robe fans. It's just that there are too few, not enough to see, and it's discovered too early.

It's really strong and suits my taste. The plot is quite smooth, but the inexplicable attack on Ryan is a bit abrupt, but the killing is very satisfying.

Not bad, but it might be gone

It's pretty good. It's rare to use your brain and ability.