Legend of Mir: The World's Cataclysm

Just watch it without thinking, otherwise it would be pointless to dwell on the data. What you are looking at is the story, not the data.

Not bad, but there are too many locks to write about. Personal comments. Don't be unhappy, author😁

The main line of the plot is quite clear, and it has a story to it. As long as you don't write about people dying, for example, you actually enter the game to die, it should be pretty good.

There is no priority, the protagonist is invisible for several chapters, and there are a lot of supporting roles.

You are not slow heating, it is this kind of water

I can only say that it is too long-winded. Others can introduce the game in just a few sentences. The author has written four chapters. When I read the opening chapter and said first and second, I thought it would be enough to endure two chapters, but it is really a waste of time.