HP: Severus' Lake Stars

The teacher has a description of the Black couple. The Black couple I have seen in many articles before are very, um, facial expressions? Walburga, who is always crazy, always pure, deeply in love with her children, and very controlling. Even if she becomes a portrait, she is always screaming and insulting, and her sickly husband has no sense of existence. The teacher wrote about Walburga's perspective, saying that she was not like this from the beginning. Crazy, she used to not like this family, so she was partial to the eldest son and heir, like her, the talented Sirius. The environment drove people away like this. She must have thought about changing something, such as a qualified heir, or not having a child so early. Although only a little bit, Orion also showed his ability as a qualified family head in addition to being weak and gentle. The teacher wrote about the other side they may have and should have, which is more vivid, fuller, and more humane (insert a sentence: Can Narcissa be perfect? Integrate into the family to the fullest) As for Malfoy, the Black family should also value their families? It's just that it's too secretive, and at the same time it's too restricted by the thoughts brought about by the environment, and it's really hard to see from Sirius's perspective? (I'll apologize if I don't understand correctly.) Anyway, come on, teacher! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's a great read, and I look forward to the update every day. My favorite part is the part where I investigate whether Sirius betrayed the Potter family's location, re-investigate what happened when the Predator was a student, and take the Predator to court. It was really exciting to watch. What makes me most uncomfortable in the original work is that the things that happened in the Predator's school days have never been formally and fairly tried. Although the foursome died young, were imprisoned, fell into poverty, and lived an ignoble life, it seems that fate secretly showed the price, but in the eyes of the public, they are still They are heroes without stains (except Peter), especially those who were favored by Dumbledore did not make any outstanding contributions. Instead, the SS who suffered all the bitter consequences and grievances in the werewolf incident is the sharpest knife. It is really ironic. Although some HP articles with backgrounds in the sub-era will mention these things, and they will bring an apology or compensation, but it is too late...

Looking forward to the author's update. I wasn't looking forward to this couple, but it turned out to be surprisingly good. It's good that the author doesn't start writing from the first grade in a monotonous way. Although I also like the school days, I have read too many. I really like the author's anti-bullying and criticism and punishment of the robbers. Walburga's later character design is very vivid. In many fan stories, she is a crazy woman. In this article, she is just a person who wants to escape and pursue freedom. Write more extras [top post]

It's so beautiful🥺Men are menstruating when they see it🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow out of the corners of the mouth, Yancheng Qiantang River tide😱So handsome😘It's God, it's roses that light up my darkness The life of darkness made my world meaningful😊I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It made me realize that God does exist. I was so cute that I shed tears. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression😋 is plants.

The love between the protagonists is mutual redemption, and the author felt very good at this moment. And I also like how the author expresses his views on black magic here. I think it's very fair compared to the original work. There's no intention to be shady, there's nothing wrong with either party, although there is some OOC. But it still feels great, and Snape has a very good ending here. There is a kind of person in despair who finally finds the hope of his own life.

The author's description is very good, whether it is the interaction in the early stage of the academy or the analysis and processing of the plot, they are all performed very well. The only flaw is that the plot progresses too fast. One second it was a sweet interaction in school, and the next second it progressed directly to getting married and having a baby. I feel that the process of falling in love could be written in more chapters.

It's not enough. Severus in big letters is so realistic that I couldn't help but stay up all night to finish reading it [crying] [adoration]

Come on, I will always follow you [Adoration] [Adoration] The writing is very good. Can you update 10 chapters? The original version is not enough [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

The characters are very full and vivid, and there is no OOC caused by over-emphasis on the author's will. It is a very good fanfic.

I can't say it, it's so attractive, the character creation is very consistent with the original work, it's excellent!

I really like this pair of cps, so cute