After Being Picked up by Qian Daoliu, I Became the Trump Card of the Enshrinement Hall

The plot is good, but the names of the sixth and seventh offerings are wrong. The sixth offering is called Qianjun, and the seventh one is called Jiangmo.

It's just that some of the plot content doesn't quite fit in. Why is there a mobile phone? Will the soul beast sacrificed to the heroine in the later plot be resurrected? Overall, it's quite good-looking. I hope the heroine doesn't have an emotional relationship with Tang San. I like this book. The author pays great attention to his health.

Change the names of the four, six, and seven worshipers

Damn it, didn't the first chapter say that Tang San wasn't born yet when Yin Xi was born? Later, it was said that Tang San was practicing turning over at this time, and then it was said that Yin Xi was three years older than Tang San and Ning Rongrong. A few chapters later, it was said that Yin Xi was the same age as Ning Rongrong. But apart from these, the plot is still very good I read Chapter 10. Chapter 10 said that Ning Rongrong was under six years old, but it was clear that Ning Rongrong was already six years old and had awakened his martial spirit. Um... Why can a person grow from a five- or six-year-old child who has not yet awakened his martial spirit to an eleven- or twelve-year-old boy in a few days?

Can there be more emotional scenes with the male protagonist [Adoration]

It's good to read. The author will update it soon [cry][cry][cry]

Nice! Inspire the author😊

Super invincible and beautiful

It fits my reverse version of Douluo Dalu very well.

Although there are a small number of errors overall, it is super invincible and looks great. I hope the author can adjust his physical condition and update more. Thank you ๑•́₃•̀๑