Zenless Zone Zero: The Stars

Brother Zhe, who has good writing skills and is able to take the HIA route, I would like to call him a strong "Zhe"

There are many problems, the most important one is the perspective issue. Most of the perspectives of conventional novels revolve around the protagonist, and a few are group portraits with multiple characters. But only a handful of people can master scheduling, and this book doesn't. It's hard to imagine that the protagonist can go ten chapters without appearing, and the stories of the other characters are not sophisticated enough. Let's see where the chapter skip rate is the highest. Most readers are looking at the interaction between Zhe and other female protagonists, and their positioning is not clear. It's a bit of a miracle that this book has survived to this day.

The character creation is okay, the writing is concise, but the text density is high, and there are too few daily descriptions, and the emotional descriptions are not delicate enough. It will make people read stiffly and look very tiring. 3 Points for passing, +1 to encourage four stars, it still has great potential. Zzz can also be considered as a second-generation potential stock. There are many out-of-band characters, and the plot is easy to develop. I am optimistic about the author. I have read 50 chapters. According to objective evaluation, the core of the second creation itself is nothing more than two points: to make up for regrets and collect favorite characters, such as a large number of original Bengming fans, and secondly, the plot and emotional lines are the core of the original novel. The setting of this book has potential, but at almost 100,000 words, it only has preliminary contact with Evelin, and does not advance any emotional lines. The main plot is also written in a riddle, and Zhe, as the protagonist, is not even described as much as the old sister. This is really difficult to read. I hope the author can improve it. The main plot on the surface is to advance the plot, and the hidden plot must be integrated into the heroine. Don't you know what everyone wants to see? [Pouts] The character interaction is not bad, but it's really not interesting enough. Come on

..., The author can completely write something original. From a book perspective, it is a good book, but the new enemy created by the second generation is too biased; Zero Zone itself is a desperate apocalyptic background. In the case of human beings already showing weakness, and the background revealed by the game now, instead of writing about how to face the current situation and prepare for the future, it will further strengthen the praise meeting... I personally don't like this kind of rhythm, but the author's content is good, keep it up (I didn't read it for long because I mainly listen to books) But the author clearly stated that a large number of them were set privately, which deserves praise.

Zhe: Why do you suddenly express your admiration for me 😠?! Zhou Li is not like this 🥺! We should let the mediator know what he wants from our door. If the servant agrees, he will send an envoy to hold the goose to accept the offer. Then ask the servant's surname, trip, date of birth, and title of Ciwei, and then the family will strictly hold a banquet for the envoys, serve the wine and recommend the preserved meat, and treat each other with courtesy [you taste it carefully]. You should go to the ancestral temple and ask for divination by burning a tortoise. If you get a good omen, you will send the wild geese to tell you [currently working on the manuscript]. He even sent envoys to offer Xuan Qi bundles of silk and leather skins as hires, as a gift to accept the conquest [stunned]. Then he told the auspicious date to stay in the humble house and asked for permission from the servants 🙂. After all the rites have been prepared, at dusk of the wedding day, you will first receive the order of the honorable king and the honorable man. Then you will wear the rank robe, ride in an ink chariot, and follow the second chariot and the servant's book. The servant's parents held a banquet in the family temple, bowed to each other and went to the hall, and then the king paid homage to the chief inspector and placed the wild geese on the ground 😄. The servant followed the king down the stairs and left the house. The king took the servant's hand and boarded the chariot, and personally drove the wheel for three turns. Then he was given the title of Sui to the charioteer, and he took the chariot back to the house to wait for him 😎. When you arrive at your gate, you will bow down and come in. They will sit on mats across from each other, eat and eat in the same prison, and carry the same people [admiration]. How can you express your sincere thoughts 🤔 now?! Is there such an example in Zhou Li? The servant dares to accept your fate! [Notice]

The content is good, the writing has improved, but the pacing needs to be adjusted.

The writing is okay, but the pace of the plot is a bit rushed. I don't know why Zhe has become stronger at the moment. It's pretty average among Tomato's Zero Zone fans. You can read it.

It looks good, the author must stick to it

After reading Chapter 24, Brother Zhe's role is too little.

Is there a female protagonist? If so, who is it?