Three Kingdoms: My Father Is Lu Bu, and I Break Out of Xiapi from the Start

Was it transferred from an AI article or another platform? The writing is very good, but why do some places always fail to connect, or the plot suddenly appears?

The author's writing is good, but I have a small suggestion. Some paragraphs are a bit too long. You can break them up, otherwise it will affect the reading experience. Come on, great writing and content, it will definitely become popular.

The overall writing is good, the writing style is quite smooth, and the plot is generally smooth, but the author, have you forgotten some small details? The first time Lu Lingqi's mother Yan Shi and Diao Chan said that they escaped through a secret passage in Xiapi, and the second time they said that Yan Shi was captured by Cao Jun on the day Xiapi city was destroyed and imprisoned in Xudu. Diao Chan bribed someone to release him, and Yan Shi came to Zhang Zhang. Reunion in Lingcheng, Diao Chan is in Jiangdong. The third time Cao Ren and Xia Hou Dun surrounded Zhang Ling with 50,000 troops. Lu Lingqi wrote a suicide note and said that Yan Shi was imprisoned and Xu Du's whereabouts were unknown. I haven't read the rest yet, but where are Yan Shi and Diao Chan? Jingzhou surrendered and Cao Jun surrounded Zhang Ling. How many troops were there in the city? It was said before that it had 13,000 combat troops, but later it was 8,000, 7,000 I went to confirm again. Chapter 100 already said that 110,000 Cao troops faced 10,000 defenders. Now after so long, it has become 7,000 troops, and there is also food and grass. At the beginning, the siege could last for a few months. Later, with the occupation of rice, so many fields were cultivated, several granaries were built, and the city expanded. After two times, why did a hundred thousand troops besiege the city with food that could only last for about ten days? Didn't you already know that Cao Jun was coming back, and have you been making preparations? Are all your granaries empty? You haven't been able to hold on to Pi City for a long time, right? Did you forget what you wrote? Don't you remember what you wrote earlier?

It's written very carefully, no, but, not counting, but, no, but too much

So far, the detailed descriptions are relatively clear and the logic is rigorous. It is better than most Three Kingdoms novels and is worth recommending! The author describes some of the weapons of this era in great detail and has done enough homework. Unlike some time-travel novels, which are all over the place at the beginning, without knowing whether some things are in line with the era at that time.

To be honest, this half of the novel is not exciting enough, but the details are well done... The ending is not finished yet...

The writing is very good and the plot is gripping. I want to read it in one sitting. Too many punctuation marks

Well worth a look, looking forward to the next update! The details need to be further improved. Jingzhou is gone. Where did Liu Bei go? There should be about 10,000 soldiers in front, why did it change to 7,000 🙂

Until now, I feel like I still lack a civil servant. Every day, the heroine has to do things and plan things by herself. She feels so busy [pouts]

It's been a long time since I've seen such exquisite Three Kingdoms novels. Good review.