A Thunderbolt, I Am a Super-Dimensional Plunderer and Cultivator

This setting is very similar to a cartoon I watched many years ago. If you shoot a laser into the picture, things can become reality.

It's creative, not stupid, and it's quite interesting. Looking forward to the author's continued updates [laughing][laughing]

Creative and worth reading!

It's okay. The idea can be a little bolder. Come on.

Does it look good? My answer is it looks good😄

Ahhhhhhhhhhhh okay

It's really good, but it's a little rushed at the end and a little short.

The writing can be clear and well-organized.

The initial setting is well written, but it is possible that there is no comprehensive plan and can only be ended hastily. But it's still good enough to have some fun and pass the time.

It's great. It's easy to see the whole thing with your head opened.