Naruto: from Invading the Land of Waves to Unifying the Ninja World

It's written in my heart. What I like most is that the protagonist's outlook on life becomes more righteous as he goes further back. He is the kind of person who is kind to his own people and tries to save others as much as possible. If you can't save it, give up decisively, innovate in various ways, and don't follow the original plot. If it were based on other Naruto stories, Madara wouldn't have written it until he died. The author, Madara, has already joined Mitsuhide's ninja school. It means that you can do whatever you have the strength to do. If you don't know how to tell, you have to wait for the plot to kill you. Mitsuhide is a happy ending plot. If the protagonist dies, he has to find a way to resurrect him. However, no one has died so far. I have read the latest chapter of the two of them. The author has laid a lot of foreshadowing. It seems that there are not many bad reviews. The score is just not high. I think the biggest reason is that the author does not have multiple female protagonists. The author has now figured it out and may add multiple female protagonists. Of course, it may be that there are too few people who have read it. I think others have thousands of comments, but this author only has more than 200. However, I personally feel that the author's writing is pretty good. The various foreshadowings are pretty good in fan fiction, but the development is too fast, and it may not be long before it is over. It cannot be very enjoyable to read, and it cannot be full. Another point is that the author has asked for a lot of leave. Someone in the family is sick. I hope the author can resume updating as soon as possible, and the family can recover soon. Everything is normal, the whole family goes well, and everything goes well.

The number of ninjas in Chagakure Village must be at least 10,000. Establish a musical armed force, similar to the Iwagakure Demolition Force and the puppet army of Fuyakure Village. Chakra version: Eight Sounds of Heavenly Dragon, Eight Sounds of Heavenly Demon, Music of the Blue Sea Tide, Sound Wave Kung Fu of Heaven and Earth, Lion's Roar Kung Fu, Seven-stringed Invisible Sword, Phaseless Sound Gang, Seven Evil Piano Sounds, Demonic Sound Array, Three Movements of Divine Sound,, Including illusion, sound waves, physical skills, sword skills, Divine weapons: Heavenly Demon Qin, Black Iron Flute, Demonic Knife Thousand Blades, Tianyi Sword String Drinking tea requires rhythm, musical instrument combination, the special operations force of the country of tea Cultivate your own psychic beast holy land to teach magic, iron-eating beasts, cattle tribe, killer whales, eagles Capture or buy from Konoha: two-tailed, three-tailed, four-tailed, so that each of the five major countries has only one tailed beast, and the seven-tailed beast of the Long Kingdom

It looks good. I like water escape and psychic beasts very much. I feel that the development of water escape in the plot is too one-sided. I hope more water escape can be developed to attack and defend, gather information, sneak in, escape and assassinate, change the shape of water needles, water knives, water arrows, water cannons, water scattering bombs, change the nature of water escape to use medical hydration techniques, etc. The author uses his imagination, and then collects various psychic beast blood inheritance limited specialties. Psychic beasts with special abilities, such as Cerberus Chameleons like the Psychic Beasts of the Animal Realm, and even man-made Psychic Beasts. The Telephone Bugs and Digimon created by the author are quite good. The Telephone Bugs can be numbered and must not be exported. They develop technology, ships and trains, Raiyin Village Chakra Cannons, Hashirama Cells, etc., Study aerial ninjutsu, and develop the air force. There are very few in the ninja world. Several people can fly, use large-scale ninjutsu in the air, like a bomber, take advantage of each bloodline limited family, and can harvest the Spider Clan, the Blood Pond Clan, the Makigaki Clan, all have potential, and I like the character of Mikaki Kisame very much, recruit more civilians, Namikaze Minato, Jiraiya, Orochimaru, it would be great if Orochimaru was born in the land of tea, put that Those who have the ability are inhaled, Hidan after Kakuzu and the like, to promote an idea, just like the Will of Fire Stone, the system can give a Navy Six Styles, and those breathing methods such as Water Breathing can be promoted without destroying combat power. After saying so much, I hope it will be helpful to the author, why hasn't it been updated [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] We must develop intelligence, whether it is in an underground money exchange or we must build our own entertainment city, make it a famous entertainment city, casino, and romance in the ninja world, build it into an intelligence center, invite those famous people to come to the treasury, collect their money, and give it to others. Ninja Village is a stumbling block. Get a few tailed beasts. If you can't get the Nine Tails, it's better to get the Seven Tails. The other tailed beasts can be used as you like. Develop the economy more, open a factory, make military food pills first and then cans to make two waves of money. Make kunai ninja tools and sell ninja swords and ninja tool bags. Storage scrolls, clothes, vests, forehead protectors, etc., All kinds of food, drinks, and some special features, such as the hot springs in the country of Yu. In the country of tea, you can make tea into special products, such as tea that restores physical strength, wakes up, and even restores chakra. Some high-end teas are specially provided to daimyo, kage, and various big shots. The price must not be low. It is also good to give it to Hashirama as a gift. Hokage-sama drinks this, and you can become like Hokage-sama if you drink this [laughs]

So far, it's okay. There aren't any huge logical loopholes. It can be regarded as a somewhat resourceful Naruto farming story. As of Chapter 40, the protagonist still shows a certain degree of city government, and the opponent's psychological description is also there. Most people are still somewhat three-dimensional. It doesn't appear that you are a villain or a villain, and villains also have feelings for family and country. Fortunately, I am currently reading chapter 55. It is indeed getting better. It can be said that it has made great progress compared to the previous ones. The industrial assembly line produces detonating talismans. In addition, the ghost lamp clan actually collaborated with the enemy and betrayed the country early. Is this author writing about werewolf killing? It's really fucking [laughing and crying]

The writing is really good. The story of Naruto's farming is quite good. Although there are flaws in the front, it is tolerable. The Mingxi Fortress bombarding Konoha in the back is very enjoyable. The pace is really fast. The protagonist is set up as a sinister benevolent man who gives generously to his own people but suffers from skin cramps when facing outsiders. At present, the protagonist has occupied the Kingdom of Rainbow. I would like to make a small suggestion. Author, please don't write all the villains as tragic characters. I know you want to give them a life. The odd number is not suitable in Naruto, but it is not suitable in Tomato. Your villain is either Qi Tongwei or Taierzhuang, [face covering] Another one is to add more updates, give me more updates, destroy the Kingdom of Water, unify it as soon as possible, and then go to fight the fourth war, and can you write about the Uchiha overlord? Leave a whole body for Hashirama, he is a good man after all. [Cover face][cover face] It's so fierce, and I didn't get frustrated at all during the whole process. The protagonist is too invincible. You can learn from other people's outlines and learn how to be literate, otherwise it will be difficult for you to reach a million. You only have 400,000 and you will dominate all the tailed beasts. Bombard Konoha, what will you write next, and fight in the parallel world? If you attack Otsutsuki later, you may encounter the Dragon Balls or Queen Kesa by chance, but it will be very interesting at this time. Okok has a fast pace. I have conquered the five major countries soon. Is that Otsutsuki the one in the sky? Is there any blog post about the author? I quite like this handsome guy. When will the author's small dungeon start? Fast forward, fast forward, to the small dungeon. If possible, you can add two heroines. Tsunade, Konan, Terumi Mei, you are all emperors. You can add these three. The protagonist can always set up a blood inheritance trap, the corpse veins, the reincarnation eye, the reincarnation eye, and the immortal body are all within your reach. After defeating the Kingdom of Water, it's time to go to the moon and the small dungeon, right?

Brothers, let me tell you something. I am not going to follow the original plot and follow the timeline. Wait for the Valley of the End and the Fourth Battle. That is no different from salted fish. The current trend is to follow the path of the Spring and Autumn Overlord, first integrate the ninjas into overlords, and then follow the path of the First Emperor to unify. Later, you can consider going to the parallel world of the original work to fight Otsutsuki and Madara. With the protagonist here, if Black Zetsu has the opportunity to enlarge Tsutsuki, it must be the author's stupidity. Isn't this just pure stupidity? This is my first time writing, so please forgive me for any inappropriateness. Finally, I wish you all a happy family and all the best. To be honest, I suffered the disadvantage of writing a novel for the first time. The combat power was too high at the beginning, but it became a bit more fun later on. It didn't have the difficulty of slowly getting stronger like other novels. Although the supporting characters here are all smart, the protagonist is too strong and will flip the table if they disagree with each other. After I killed Byakuren, I considered whether to finish it, but I thought that I would not finish it if I wrote it normally, because now that the ninja world has emerged, the Kingdom of Tea cannot be settled in peace. Feel free to write for a while longer. The current problems are: first, fan fiction, there are few original characters, and I am slowly introducing them. Second, it is too fun and there is no crisis. This cannot be changed. The main problem is that there is no outline. The third point is that maybe having too few female protagonists is also a shortcoming. No matter how poorly written the instructions are by others, as long as there are more female protagonists, everyone's tolerance will gradually increase. The fourth point is that my description of the war is too correct. Many people skip the chapter here. What everyone likes to watch in Naruto is the battle, not the war. I hope the next one will be better, come on.

Looking at the review now, there are no obvious logical flaws. The rhythm is okay so far. The protagonist has a great victory over the Kingdom of Water, and the Kingdom of Whirlpool is also a hero who knows the current affairs. Looking forward to the subsequent plot with Uchiha Hikari. Okay, okay, the author's Taneda story touched my heart, and the fighting is also good. Uchiha Madara has now joined the protagonist group. Basically, everything that the protagonist can change has changed, instead of just sitting back and watching the plot develop, letting them die individually. Mizukage Byakuren was removed from his post, and a samurai became Mizukage. Is that okay? I feel that the author is very innovative and the writing is quite good.

The third time I saw someone with a famous name written on it, the aura was actually not that big. It was quite my own imagination. After reading so many books about Naruto, this is the second novel that I want to finish. Please try your best to write it, okay? I really want to know the story behind it.

It looks good, a bit like the one from Kingdom of the Night next door.

Support, support, it's rare to come across a farming novel that I like, it's just so fun and not challenging at all, I feel semi-invincible. Now one heroine appears and another appears, I don't know if there are multiple heroines. The writing really gets better and better later on. It's a pity that this book is not good in the early stage. If you can't get up, you won't be able to get up later.

It's okay. What can be seen with the naked eye is that the writing becomes more and more interesting later on. It feels like a different person has changed. The later part is really good. Although there are some small flaws at the moment, they are still bearable. I think it is a pretty good Naruto farming novel. If you haven't read it, you can take a look. Basically, the author can improve every ten chapters. I feel like this, I don't know how other people feel. Not bad, not bad. The author has added more. The three views are true, be kind to your own people, and be jealous of your enemies [smirk] [snicker]. It is so well written. I like the farming story. I would like to give you a suggestion. The second heroine can be arranged. She is already an emperor. It is not fast enough.

The Red Hokage, at least, was creative. If you keep at it you will definitely get results. After reading dozens of chapters, I discovered some problems. As the leader of a country, does he really have so much time to care about the ninja school? No matter how much a monarch values ​​education, he can't stay with these outstanding students all day long, right? If you are a village leader, no problem. Because there are only so many things to deal with. But when you run a country, this is a bit taken for granted. Moreover, they are all original characters, so there is no feeling when reading them.

Not bad, very good-looking

The minimum for a living author is four stars [laughing] five stars if you write well.

I have a sense of déjà vu as if I was reading an AI novel. Although it's good to read, it's a bit awkward.

A good hegemony story. IQ is online and not stupid. After seeing the latest chapter, Uchiha Madara defected and immediately found the protagonist. In the end, he became the vice principal of the ninja school, and he can also write a farming story. I have read the latest chapter so far. The protagonist is really decisive in killing and not sloppy. Bosses like Mizukage are killed at will. In other chapters, the number of words is still low. This article is too fast. I have read 400,000 words so far. I have basically started fighting against the entire ninja world. I just don't know how many words the author will write and how the next copy will be opened. Otsutsuki has already shown his face. Should we consider adding Dragon Ball or Super Seminary plots in the future [laughing] [laughing] Also, should the protagonist marry Tsunade? Now that Tsunade is about to be born, is there any hope for the Terumi clan around you, Terumi Mei? Then I suggest speeding up the timeline. It is only 10 years since Konoha, and the protagonist has already accepted the Uzumaki clan, the Terumi clan, and the Uchiha clan. Naruto and Sasuke must have been born in the land of tea. .

Okay, I hope there will be a story about traveling to other worlds in the future.

It's interesting to see it from another angle

I have read Chapter 22 so far. This novel can be listened to and written very well. Let me give five stars in advance to encourage the author.

It's very good, the plot is step-by-step, and there is no double-standard tone or words.

Good-looking, imaginative, not outrageous [eating melon]

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It's okay now, I'll see if I need to change my review later.

The author really listened to the advice, five-star praise

It's okay. I don't know if it's because I just started reading it or something. I can't see any big problems. Maybe it's because I haven't read the basic novel and thought it was pretty good. Okay, okay, it looks good, the main features are that on the one hand, the protagonist has a good outlook on life, but on the other hand, he doesn't follow the plot. Anyway, I have never seen Madara follow the protagonist in 200,000 words.

It's quite good. I finished it in one sitting. Now I can keep watching it every day as I follow the updates.

It looks pretty good so far. The general logic can be ignored and the minor flaws can be ignored. I hope to maintain the status and write a different Naruto founding story in the future.

It's okay, it's pretty good [like][like][like][like]

It's pretty good. The plot is quite smooth.

Unique idea, excellent