Collapse of Iron: Let the Unknown Story Be Sung Again

The last book ended in a hurry, and I didn't have time to describe many beautiful things. I thought I would never write another novel about Xi Lian, but I later discovered that Xi Lian has become an obsession in my heart. Even if I write it, not many people will read it or support it, but my heart tells me that you must continue writing. This is the most trivial thing I can do.

I have been a writer for several years. After reading this book, I couldn't help but express my conclusion directly. It is purely hand-written, not AI writing, and has no AI flavor; the writing is above average in terms of Tomato, but sometimes it is good or bad, and overall the writing is improving; sweet writing, joyful daily direction, reunion writing, not abusive; the love line goes in both directions, not a crematorium; there is no destructive character OOC, so you can eat it with confidence Disadvantages: The worldview is not integrated enough. The author has a worldview, but does not make this worldview come alive (this is purely because I am too demanding). Slightly embarrassing, it often gives me the feeling of being happy with myself. Overall, this is a very good article. This data is purely a platform issue. I hope the author will not be discouraged and continue to make progress.

I came here from the author's last book. The last book was very good, but unfortunately I couldn't get a good result. The new book came out as soon as it opened. Although it is only updated once a day, it seems that the writing style of the first three chapters has made some progress compared with the previous book. At the same time, the subject matter of this book is also very novel. I hope the author can write better, come on! I read it from beginning to end and changed the title several times. It's hard to hold on to whatever I dream about, but the writing is really good. Moreover, I stretch easily, relaxly, relax, comfortably, freely, leisurely, leisurely, comfortably, comfortably, comfortably, happily, comfortably, relaxly, calmly, calmly, calmly, lightly, lightly, lightly, lightly, leisurely, leisurely. Be relaxed, be relaxed, be joyful, be happy, be relaxed, be relaxed, be relaxed, be worry-free, be effortless, be easy, be hassle-free, be relaxed, be worry-free, be leisurely, be joyful, be relaxed, be calm, be indifferent, be tranquil, be gentle, be stable, be relaxed, be relaxed, And I'm not a dead person, not a robot, I don't have a disability certificate, I don't have depression, I haven't been thrown into the freezer, I'm not a puppet, I'm not Xingtian, I'm not a terracotta warrior, I don't have facial paralysis, I'm not a wooden man, I'm not a blind man, I'm not an alien, I'm not a model, I'm not a paper man, I'm not suffering from ALS, I'm not micro-celled, I'm not under anesthesia, I'm not a corpse, I'm not depressed, I'm not. Anxiety is not mental illness, it is not bipolar disorder, it is not discomfort, it is not a vegetative state, it is not insensible, it is not incomprehensible, it is not a clone, it is not cosplaying Louis XVI, the mouth is not sewn shut, it is not blind, it has a mouth, it is not lying, it is not a puppet, it has a head, it has an upper body, it does not wear a mask, it is not a bomb, it is not a faceless man (end of power generation)

"So, at the end of this page..." The reminder lights up in the readers' eyes again. "The 'author' and the 'reader' have fulfilled their destiny, once again. " "Or maybe they're not the only ones fulfilling their destiny. It's just that I can't remember clearly. " "In the boundless darkness, for no reason, a voice always lingers in my ears..." ""A good book is a process of constant updating, and in all of that, urging updates is not a pity." ""Reply"... Such a familiar button. " "It's also in every book on the shelf, consistently. "

Each of the author's detailed depictions of pictures and characters deeply pulled my heart, and I was attracted unconsciously. The introduction and content of this book fit perfectly. So when can I write something sweet?

Listen to me, I was originally number one, but because this old tomato swallowed my review and the author started crying and fussing in the group, I had to delete it and repost it. I also want to mention that when I was reading the new book, you wrote Chapter 5. Your first book was finished, and I was still writing. Your second book was opened, and I had already written the second part. Why are you so lousy? Also, when will you pay back the two bills you owe me♪! ! ! ! @ Foolishfufu also wants to write a novel

After reading all the chapters so far, overall I feel good The only bad thing is the title of the book. It seems that there is no desire for people to click in, and it has nothing to do with the content. It might be much better if I change my name for the subsequent book test.

It's beautiful, the author wrote it very carefully, but it seems like he's about to starve to death.

Not bad, good, good book, good writing style, okay, okay Hurry up and write a review, don't let the author get offended

I won't say too much or too little. I wish the author's books will be read by more and more people, the data will get better and better, and there will be more and more requests for more, and it will become popular as soon as possible [Love] [Love] [Love]

(Save money: it looks good, writes quickly, and adds money.) As a historian of fiction, I should write you a new piece of propaganda here. But if you don't want it, then I can only hope that your articles will be better, your posts will be more frequent, and your money will flow across the river~

The characters are very emotional

Good-looking, love to watch, watch more

Needless to say, greatness, [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Hao Chi, highly recommended Boss, stop checking the cards, we can't hand them out in class (

The author's writing is very good. I have to keep writing. When will I be able to update two chapters a day? It's not enough...

Needless to say, this book, the previous book, or the new book are all good. Anyway, this one is so sweet to me [laughing]

The protagonist should be a pioneer who lost his memory and thought he was a time traveler. To be honest, I would be very accepting of this setting [Thinking]

The overall tone is more everyday. I don't know if it's a characteristic of Mijia (fandom). A daily book can have knives.