My Brother Is a Yellow-Haired School Bully and He Is Reborn

I have been following the novel for a long time with high expectations. I have to say that the story framework originally had great potential, and the foreshadowing and character creation have begun to take shape. Unfortunately, the current reading experience continues to decline. The pace of the book is already draggy, and it has become even more sluggish recently, with traces of water injection visible to the naked eye. A large number of chapters seem to be of sufficient length, but when you look inside, you can't find any effective plot. Irrelevant chats and repetitive inner dramas fill the page, and the main plot is almost at a standstill. The conflict that readers have been waiting for has been delayed again and again, and the suspense has been delayed in mid-air. Instead, unrelated branches have continued to expand. It's hard not to suspect that the author is using trivial plots to squeeze out the word count, and updating it by elongating daily life and repeating emotional descriptions. Blindly piling up words but unwilling to promote the core plot slowly consumes the readers' initial enthusiasm. No matter how good the setting is, it cannot withstand endless procrastination and watery chapters. I sincerely hope that the author will face up to the pacing problem, cut off redundant and empty content, and concentrate on advancing the main plot. Don't let down the foundation of the story itself, and don't waste the remaining patience of readers who have been following updates all the way.

One slap for the fake daughter, two slaps for the fake daughter, three slaps for the fake daughter's parents, those two old men can't carry the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms [angry]

The author writes well, the plot is reasonable, interesting and fascinating, the writing is compact, and the writing style is very mature. But the creation of the villain was so successful that the fake daughter's family was really irritating, and I wanted to go in and slap them. The biological parents also gave me two slaps🤲

First of all, the writing is great! This book is the background story of the real and fake daughter! Secondly, people who watched it were really angry! Also, which one is more important, blood or companionship? This is really difficult! Let's just wait and see who comes! This book is probably about bloodline being important! Make random comments! Once again, I want to emphasize that people who watch this are really angry. If you like cool writing, I don't recommend reading it, at least not now.

It's pretty good to watch, but it's too frustrating. It makes people uncomfortable watching it, but it's understandable. After all, it's been a relationship for decades. If it doesn't work, then the parents shouldn't have it anymore. I haven't seen how good the parents are. I hope the author keeps updating for free every day [Start] Hundreds of updates [staring] [staring] [sending heart]

I don't know what the classification is, but I think this book is a good book. I wonder what those who think it is not a good book think it is a good book. In terms of perspective, maybe there are two perspectives of brother and sister? I still take on the role of the male protagonist. I hope there won't be too much content about my grandpa's company in the future. The male protagonist will stick to the Internet and he can also write a lot of content. If there is too much business, I will definitely not give such a high rating because I am tired of watching it. My sister's cp feels like the neighbor is sinking.

Well written, tightly plotted, and very creative. That Ye Yanyan is so irritating, I wonder if the author has experienced it personally [laughs]

? I'm not going to put it bluntly, I've been a bookworm for eight years but I still think it's so familiar and looks really good. It's not enough to read at all. When I went back to check it out, the book review was only 5.7? You must be impressed, I really think the subject matter is very novel and it's really cool for his brother to show off. I thought it was because I came early, but why is it still so low after so long? Isn't it enough? So the author wants to try to update 100 chapters so that the popularity will skyrocket [laughing][laughing]

If you read this book from the perspective of the female protagonist, you will feel uncomfortable, angry, and not at all happy. But if you read it from the perspective of the male protagonist, it can be regarded as a small and enjoyable book (I read it from the perspective of the male protagonist from the beginning)

Fits my stereotype of female videos

I think it's okay, I'm going step by step, why is it only 5.5 Points [laughing and crying]

The overall look and feel of the novel is female-centric and slightly group-like. The plot is very coherent and looks relatively comfortable. I deducted one star because I felt sleepy after watching it for a long time. The plot is interesting and the foreshadowing is a bit long, so I need to watch it patiently (I can't find my old account).

I don't know why, but I actually quite like his brother and Shen.

Still an interesting rebirth article

It's quite good, but I don't know why there are some low-scoring reviews, which brought the book's score down. But if you, the author, don't update ten times a day, the majority of five-star reviews won't mind giving you a bad review. @Coffee does not work

Super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super (♥∀♥)

This is the perspective of male videos

Looks pretty good, just a little lacking

I rarely give perfect reviews for novels, and I don't bother to do so. The author's writing is very good and the characters are vivid. He always makes a few typos to prove that he is a real person. A bit interesting

Very good, well written, wonderful and close to life, I can finish it in one go

It looks good and feels very real, not like reading a novel

The rating of 5.8 Is still high, I'll put it bluntly, but I've been following the update for so long and I'm addicted to it, I love it so much😋

It's pretty good. I feel like I'm not a human machine.

It looks good, the front part is good, but it's a bit fast at the end.

It's beautiful, why is the rating so low?

It's quite good. I feel like it's almost finished. I found that the rating is very low, so I quickly gave it 5 stars.

This name is so girly that I wouldn't even read it if I hadn't read it several times. It seems worth recommending

Very nice, warm atmosphere

It's looking good so far! Like

It's beautiful, I can't get enough of it