How Will the Warden Save Pianpian in the Second Loop of Mourning?

The writing is clean and crisp, and the characters are distinctive. The prisoner's mobility is amazing. Pianpian is not a vase, she is very charming. It's a pity that this book seems to have average data. In my opinion, this book has several main points of dissuasion: 1. The first chapter is too long, a full 40,000 words. If it is divided into five or six chapters according to the sections inside, it will be easier for readers to get into trouble. 2. The title is not distinctive, and it can easily make people think it is a novice. In fact, the writing and plot of this book are much better than those popular Aihong fan books, but the title suffers. 3. People are not used to the heroine changing her name. Although Pianpian's name change "No Regrets" fits the characters, it does not have an advantage in communication studies and can easily create a sense of strangeness in readers' minds. If 1 and 2 are improved, I think this book may have better data. The above is just one family's opinion and is for the author's reference.

Hello author! I spent about a week off and on reading this second novel. Although the title of the book is very unique🤭, it is no exaggeration to say that this is the most relevant and favorite book among all the second novels I have read. The excellent writing, the exquisite plot design, and the reinterpretation of the characters based on the original work are all great! Lao Fang awakens from a nightmare and begins to reverse the cause and effect, Bu Hui, who is wise and courageous after being deported, and Sister Yan'er, who breaks free from a desperate situation and is reborn, as well as Granny Liu, Wang Sheng, Da Dao... My favorite plot is the part where Fang Zhiyou understands Sister Yan'er's act of suicide and Bu Hui step by step plans a tacit action, and finally the three of them successfully escape and go to sea. It is a very exciting and exciting feeling! At the same time, the author did not dissolve or distort the historical background of "Ten Days in Yangzhou" just because he described the emotions of the three people. Only then did he realize that they did not stay in Japan in the end but grew up in their homeland, which was a very happy ending. Of course, the criticisms against Ya Ling are all very heartfelt. Hahaha, this person is really too naive to write a plot like the original. Of course, one little regret is that there are too few fragments of the happy life of the three. I don't know if the author will read the book review. Thank you again for creating such a great work!!! I wish the author a smooth life and be happy every day😄😄

It is one of the most unique novels written by Aihong that I have read. It is not as smooth sailing as picking up Pianpian, nor is it a single heroine like Tianyou Pianpian. The portrayal of Sister Yan'er and Buhui is also very close to the original work. The plot is full of twists and turns, and the dumplings at the end are also very real and emotional. After reading it, I feel like I have just finished reading the original work of Aihong, but the original one is regretful and uncomfortable. This one is a touch of sadness and relief after everything is settled. It was as if real people were telling their own stories, but I could no longer peep into their future lives. It made me deeply moved. I would like to thank the author again for letting me see the real original work, which soothed my wounded heart.

This 471,000-word novel is full of sincerity! The characters are delicate and vivid, the descriptions are penetrating, the details are gentle and heart-wrenching, the plot is compact and exciting without being unfinished, and the writing skills are so solid that the more you read, the more immersed you become. Highly recommended! An absolute treasure of good writing.

The writing is excellent, I think it is a first-rate fanfic among the second creations, the details are just right, and the plot progression is logical and not abrupt 👍 Overall, I felt quite good reading it. The writing style is very comfortable, the details are described carefully and just right. The author has polished it with great intention. The plot advances very smoothly, and the logic is online. There is no abrupt feeling of forced advancement. The characters are also very close to the original work. It is a good article that can make people calm down and read it slowly.

The writing is quite good, but why it's not popular 😂

The author's writing style is so excellent [please update]

The writing is very good, elegant and neither humble nor overbearing

Um, why is it that this book is so well-written but not many people have read it? Among many second-generation novels, I am one of the few who has followed it to the end.

Very good fan creation