How Will Aihong Rescue Pianpian During His Second Week in Prison?

The writing is clean and crisp, and the characters are distinctive. The prisoner's mobility is amazing. Pianpian is not a vase, she is very charming. It's a pity that this book seems to have average data. In my opinion, this book has several main points of dissuasion: 1. The first chapter is too long, a full 40,000 words. If it is divided into five or six chapters according to the sections inside, it will be easier for readers to get into trouble. 2. The title is not distinctive, and it can easily make people think it is a novice. In fact, the writing and plot of this book are much better than those popular Aihong fan books, but the title suffers. 3. People are not used to the heroine changing her name. Although Pianpian's name change "No Regrets" fits the characters, it does not have an advantage in communication studies and can easily create a sense of strangeness in readers' minds. If 1 and 2 are improved, I think this book may have better data. The above is just one family's opinion and is for the author's reference.

This 471,000-word novel is full of sincerity! The characters are delicate and vivid, the descriptions are penetrating, the details are gentle and heart-wrenching, the plot is compact and exciting without being unfinished, and the writing skills are so solid that the more you read, the more immersed you become. Highly recommended! An absolute treasure of good writing.

The writing is excellent, I think it is a first-rate fanfic among the second creations, the details are just right, and the plot progression is logical and not abrupt [Like] Overall, I felt quite good reading it. The writing style is very comfortable, the details are described carefully and just right. The author has polished it with great intention. The plot advances very smoothly, and the logic is online. There is no abrupt feeling of forced advancement. The characters are also very close to the original work. It is a good article that can make people calm down and read it slowly.

The author's writing style is so excellent [please update]

The writing is very good, elegant and neither humble nor overbearing

The writing is quite good, but why it's not popular [laughing and crying]

It is indeed very well written and I look forward to Lianyan Lao Fang and Pian Pian successfully escaping. Author, how did you let them be found? My heart is beating like Pu Pu, can I escape? Is it hopeless to write like this? Please update it soon!

It's really well written, but it makes me feel uncomfortable when Lin Pianpian changes her name and keeps using her new name [face covering]