Something’s Off About the Girls of Yunjing

The writing is really good, quiet and natural. At first, I thought it was ordinary campus life. The author arranged a proficiency system for the protagonist. When I saw that there were props in the system mall and I could walk in the air for five minutes, I felt something was wrong. Later in the book, the characters also mentioned the word environmental change. Then, the positioning of this book is very clear, the flow of the rise of genius young people with super powers. Friends who are interested should not miss it, but there are relatively few chapters.

The advantages and disadvantages of a daily novel that is too fluent are all reflected, and the president's part occasionally becomes very literary, which is a bit disdainful, but this advantage is that it is so sweet, being a sister, a mother, a teacher, and a girlfriend at the same time. Wow, it's so perfect, Sister Wen 🥰 🥰 How should I put it? The president is a little too arrogant, and my impression of it is declining. Then it is a common problem in daily harems in the city. The protagonist's emotional intelligence is always high and low. There is no big problem, but there is nothing to say. Alas, I have entered a stage that I don't like. If life is just like the first meeting, the president is so cute, arrogant and arrogant, this is really not charming, I don't know how to win, you sister Wen still manages it, but 100 chapters of ambiguity are good, 200 chapters are quite sweet, and 300 chapters are already boring. Alas, it is inevitable.

The writing is quite good, the daily life is dull but not boring, and it is attractive. I really like the character of the protagonist. He is calm, enthusiastic and generous, and his behavior is measured. But the length is too short, not enough to read. At present, there are quite a lot of descriptions of the protagonist's growth, which I think is quite reasonable. After all, the heroines are not simple characters, and ordinary people will definitely not be able to catch their eye. However, I suggest that the author can add more interactions between the protagonist and the heroine. If it is too slow, I am afraid that too few people will read it. If the author doesn't write 🤦 It doesn't matter if it is slower, you must keep writing 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢

Alas, how can it be written so well? I haven't seen a book like this for a long time. The writing style is natural and smooth, and the characters are very, very personal. I feel that the author is very good at starting from daily life and starting from points to depict those very detailed pictures. I just don't know how far the emotional line will go next, but I still have great confidence in the author's writing style and am looking forward to the following content. Come on, Ha Jizu, if you update more, book friends will do anything.

A very comfortable daily perspective that gives people a strong sense of immersion without appearing obtrusive. The characters of the male protagonist and Wang Shu are well-shaped and can truly feel the emotions. The daily style reads with a light sense of refreshment. Although the protagonist is said to be an orphan and a reincarnation, it does not seem artificial, and the system's presence is not strong. Overall, it is good. There are also shortcomings. It may be because the book has just been opened and there are too many characters but a lack of depth. The initial impression is lacking. The protagonist has few male friends and lacks an impression, which only creates a one-sided image. The above content only represents my personal views and is for reference only. Don't blame me if I am right or wrong.

The author is so capable, his writing style is top-notch in Tomato, the characters are described delicately, the plot is reasonable, and the progression is orderly, very perfect. I just can't write about the eldest lady losing a dog [sneaky laugh] [sneaky smile] I want to read [sneaky smile] 😳

It's a very light and bright novel, and the scenes of getting along with the little loli are very heartwarming. [Sending my heart to you] However, this book has too many cold-blooded female protagonists. I feel like I don't know who the heroine is if I read it quickly. Especially the one who is Japanese or someone else is so ex, even Jiang Jiang becomes more and more uninterested as I read 😫. However, the overall character is still very good. The male protagonist is comfortable and gets along with friends. The writing is also good 😊 I hope the author will get better and better [Sending my heart to you]

It starts out like a love story, but it also writes something of its own, and the writing is good. In addition, the author is good at writing mature women, and Su Nianqi is just right 👍

Tranquility, calm daily life. There is no pretense, the character of the protagonist is really comfortable, accustomed to calmness, and enjoys peace. It looks good so far (*≧∪≦)👍🏻.

Why do I feel that Su Nianqi is also one of the heroines? The more I look at it, the more I feel