Football: Contract with Messi, I Am the King of Barcelona

Running in both directions, it's not the kind of mindless cool article, it's very suitable for fans of the Champions League to read, it's so enjoyable [laughing], when will An Niu come out, let's compete for her favor [laughing]

The writing is quite good, but I feel that the language can be optimized. Many dialogues are only four or five words, and it ends in five or six words. It is cold and cold like a robot dialogue, without emotion. For example, if you write about imprisonment, the author may write it. One person said it, and then the protagonist said, I know that I can add some adjectives and onomatopoeia. This feels like it can make the characters more three-dimensional. My humble opinion, my humble opinion. And when writing actions, you can write more vividly. There are many dialogue scenes that I can't imagine in my mind.

The writing is quite good, but can you not write about the national football team and directly benefit Argentina?

I have caught up with the latest chapter. The subject matter is relatively new, and there is no system that makes you invincible all at once. You can see the growth process of the protagonist, and you use your brain to play football. Except that I personally feel it is a bit bland, the rest is very good. Finally, as long as you don't join the national football team to the end, even if the Champions League is played as the World Cup, don't join the national football team. The more I read, the more I feel. He is a tough guy, calm on the court, and can kill with one hit at critical moments. It is indeed the first football article I have read so far. A great book with potential, highly recommended.

It's nice to look at [note], it's really hard to find such flesh-and-blood characters in Tomato nowadays! ! ! Come on, author, I will give you a gift after I finish the college entrance examination [laughing][laughing][laughing] (I have a weak question, is there any emotional line?) I downloaded it and finished reading it today. It's real, I didn't just read it for a while! ! !

Niu Mochou·Niu Mochou Don't worry about the cows in front of the mountains. The sound of the flute breaks through the river. Don't worry about the reeds and cows on both sides of the bank; There is someone sad deep in the hookah. Don't worry about the cow, don't look back, Looking back, everything in this world will come to an end. The road ahead is long, don't worry, Just use the setting sun as a wine pot. Don't worry about the cow, get on the lonely boat, The fishing fire in the boat illuminates the cold current. Jiang Feng doesn't care about Niu Mo Chou; Just blow people to the ferry. Don't worry about the cow, leaning on the tall building, The galaxy upstairs is as cold as a hook. If you ask this question, don't worry about it. Worry about not being able to tie the boat to the end of the world. Don't worry about the cows, crossing the barren hills, The remaining stele on the hill has the inscription "Half Rest". Don't worry about weeds and cows every year; He looks sad when he is away from others.

A very good book. The atmosphere in the locker room is very good. Please stay in Barcelona and grow up with Messi. Together with Messi, you can become the legend of Barcelona. I have a small suggestion, that is, you can add a little description of gastrointestinal activities. It's good to read. I love reading it!

Without further ado, I give it five stars.

I really like the daily interaction between the two people. The sometimes stubborn and teasing dialogue makes me, an old bookworm, smile knowingly. Especially when the male protagonist is entangled with the identity of the other person, he wants to fight together, but does not want the other party to make a regretful decision. This makes the farewell to this World Cup no longer so speechless. Argentina fans have also understood and accepted from these 20 years that the team does not have to win the championship to be glorious. It is not easy for the team members to try their best to stumble to the end. Although the end is not perfect, their efforts and dedication are worthy of their pride and shouting... By the way, can the author do it faster? It only took me a little over a day to read the latest chapter. It's so painful to wait for the new chapter [crying]

Ranked among the best new football books recently, I hope the author can keep it up in the future. The emotions are written in detail, and I urge you to update more. The latter part of the plot personally feels repetitive, maybe because I have been watching it intermittently, but it is not as engaging as the previous one, and the plot is not very fulfilling.

The first part was pretty good, but after 300 chapters I couldn't understand the author's train of thought. However, the first 300 chapters were indeed written very delicately, but I couldn't stand it anymore. The flaws are not concealed, so I give you five stars. Cheers, author.

Is it possible to transfer to Argentina?

A good-looking batch. It's really suitable for fans of Messi, the world's number one football player. He can do anything.

Good looking, one of the few people writing about Messi on Tomato must support it

The subject matter is very good. There is a lot of brotherly love, but it is a bit ink-stained. I feel like this rhythm will require more than 5 million words to be written. Okay, okay, I'm scared of you

Nice setting, keep it up [Like][Like]

It feels like the protagonist has encountered a lot of adversities, and they all come around in the second half [eating melon] The pressure was too heavy and there was no big win. To win, you have to attack and fail many times, and you have to move the progress bit by bit to succeed. It's a bit slow, and one game lasts for more than ten chapters. Moreover, the protagonist's right leg has been injured for a long time. It is a bit poisonous to not actively cooperate with the treatment of his right leg, and to pay attention to Ronaldinho's injury without treatment.

It looks great. Can I play in the World Cup with Messi?

Please, please, please, please choose Argentina for the national team [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] I would like to make a suggestion. Next season, the protagonist should not have to keep his foot injured [face covering]. Also, there is a lot of writing about daily life off the court. It is too long.

Yes, one of the best football articles I have ever read.

Just let them be together forever. The author is great

The writing is actually quite good, and the characters are quite vivid. People who watch football like me can also appreciate it, but why is it that the quarter-finals are playing against Milan and the top four? Then the tactical analysis of Arsenal was repeated again and again. The tearing feeling is getting stronger and stronger

I want to ask if there will be a female protagonist later [Thinking] Whether there is one or not, I will pursue it.

Very well written. The environment is far more important to the development of football than obscenity. There are also teams in Asia that have become stronger due to the environment. The root of domestic football rookies is that there is no environment for development.

This rare food can be regarded as fairy grass in my heart. I must support the author.

The football article about mutual achievement feels quite novel.

It is rare to write such a delicate plot and the writing is smooth. Very good, hope it continues.

Developing Football Novel [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

It smells a bit like AI, but it's okay

Rather than friendship, I want to see the protagonist slap the Chinese Football Association in the face