After the Cool Beauty Heartthrob Mission Failed

Forced love is not the same as rape [laughs]

Now that I have seen it, I think it is generally good in all aspects, and the plot setting is attractive. I am looking forward to how it will develop in the future. But now I think its biggest problem is that the details are not appropriate. Some places are omitted, which makes the plot connection not smooth. At the same time, some places are too detailed and seem cumbersome. The large number of detailed descriptions continuously stretches the plot line, stretching it from concise to slow. The introduction was cut off at the end, and it was very difficult to read. It required me to read carefully and rationally imagine certain plot lines that were improperly omitted and cut off. It was very difficult. After reading for a long time, I no longer had the patience to read the detailed descriptions word for word. Maybe I'm not very proficient in arranging the writing properly to make the writing flow smoothly, but this is not a flaw. It will get better over time as I write more, so I'm still looking forward to whether it will get better in the future. Overall, this plot setting struck a chord with me, and I still want to continue watching.

A very nice article~it smells so good! Finally, all I can say is, Dada, I wish I could meet Haitang!

Currently, it is the Tomato CRRC car with the highest detail and speed. So delicious [admiration]

It's obvious that AI was used to expand the word count. You can read it in Shuhuang

It's fun to eat, but it's just a bit undetailed and makes me feel bored easily. But my mother-in-law is so happy that I can't hide my faults. Unable to accept the intrusion of forced love Awesome, the author is making great progress, it's so cool. . . My mother-in-law has the most detailed description of tomatoes I have ever seen. .

Very beautiful, the stupid beauty is very innocent, super, super, super beautiful, the reward is huge. One hundred chapters will be updated in one day.

Mainly draining the kidneys, but delicious. It is recommended to catch up on updates early to avoid deleting the plot later. Delicious, love it!

I go, is this what I can see on Tomato?

So delicious, so awesome [Shy][Admired] It's earth-shattering

It's super invincible and beautiful, and the author's writing is also very awesome! How should I put it, the description of the environment and so on, the description of the scenery is penetrating, and the artistic conception is natural [note] the characters are also very three-dimensional and vivid [blowing kiss][please update][please update]

The author's writing is really good and the character creation is great

It's really beautiful! [Blowing kiss]

Very well written by Klaas

In the first world, the villains Lin Yanzhi and Lin Xiaoran had a good fight.

It feels so good. I love it so much. Just a little too little I like the author Da Da Da and want to create a group again. It's been a long time since I've seen a book that's so enjoyable and so in line with my feelings. Wow, I really like Yan Zhi, this is the perfect match for me. This compulsion is also well received and loved. Although the force was a little bit more, there was no violent action against Yan Zhi. It's really suitable for people like me who should be considered "aunties from the underworld", but can't stand being hit by things or being physically harmed.

Well written, very fragrant Hurry up and update to the second episode of Return to the Previous World, I'm looking forward to it [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's so cool. It's like a fairy product.

This is the novel that God should read [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] Men look at it and menstruate, women look at it and they have a long hook, okay [admiration] [licking the screen] [admiration] [bird-eating masterpiece] [bird-eating masterpiece] [bird-eating masterpiece]

Immortal product! ! ! It perfectly solves the problem of matching meat and vegetables, with meat and vegetables, and balanced nutrition [Send Heart]

The author is very knowledgeable The character's personality is well grasped, and the main line of the script could be more clearly organized. The descriptions of the environment and food are very immersive! All in all, it was a pleasure to watch

It is also super shocking and delicious. It is suitable for a half-yin and half-yang woman like me. I must highly recommend it!

A must for lovers of forced love

What does it have to do with auditing?

It's so sad that the protagonist is treated like this [crying]

It's cool or not, but the writing is awesome. Let's meet in Haitang, okay?

It feels so good ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

A combination of meat and vegetables, nutritious and delicious, you can enjoy it

It was very well written and made me feel very happy! !

It's so delicious. The author will update it soon [Love][Love]