Go Crazy! You Call High School Students Writers?

To be more serious, in today's society, the little match girl is not the type who is easy to become popular in the short term. It is the mainstream feature of modern "easy to go viral" content. Short videos and short-term hits on social media usually have: strong reversal, sense of satisfaction, shared anger or empathy (but it needs to be fast-paced), humor/meme, suspense, good looks/novelty, and practical information. "The Little Match Girl" is slow-paced, low-stimulation, and pure tragedy, lacking in reversal and excitement. Young people will easily forget the quiet, slow, and completely sad literary narrative of the original work. It is not suitable for "short-term irritability." But if its core emotions (longing for warmth, perspective from the bottom of society) are highly compressed, emotionally intensified, and transformed by reality mapping, it has the potential to become a hit. But! ! ! ! ! This is a parallel world where anything is possible! ! !

It must have been polished by AI. It feels like it was written by a real person, but it also feels like it was written by a human machine. It must have been written by myself, but it was polished by AI, right?

It's good to watch, you have to keep on reading [Blowing Kiss] is very well written. When I read it earlier, I felt that the writing was a bit immature and some parts looked strange. But I kept reading and I made great progress later on. Jiang Huan and Xu Xiaosi are both very cute, and they are not inexplicably targeted. When I first saw Xu Xiaosi, I thought it would be... He was the type who was particularly unconvinced and would trip up Jiang Huan. Later, he found a cute baby. Also, there was no cliché. Because I hated you, I just refuted and denied you. After Jiang Huan really got the first place, he was convinced and willing to bow his head and apologize. He didn't hate him anymore. He dared to admit his mistakes. In short, he was very good-looking, but not good enough😸

I like it. Jiang Huan and He Qing have a good fight. It makes me happy. Every time I see an article I like, it is serialized. I look forward to the follow-up development! I still think it looks good, but why doesn't the rating go up? I cried.

This book is generally okay, with some minor flaws in general, but nothing serious. For example, Jiang Huan was in his thirties in his previous life. The young man who traveled to a parallel time and space was relatively calm at first, but the transition to a more lively character later on was not very smooth. Later, it would be more in line with Jiang Huan's character to regard him as a more mature young man. In terms of advantages, there are basically no brainless plots, and the character development is okay. The friendship between Jiang Huan and Xu Qinghe probably satisfies the brotherhood of male readers and the claps of female readers. It also attracts female readers very well. However, I hope that the author will not use too much force in describing the relationship between the two people, which will lead to overexertion, because I think a lot of people are fighting. To be honest, when I saw Jiang Huan make an agreement with Xu Qinghe, the teacher later pointed out the possibility that Jiang Huan ignored it. I think it was well written here because it did not deify the protagonist too much. This kind of ill-thinking better reflects Jiang Huan's slow growth as an ordinary person. Because although he has a golden finger, he was just an ordinary person in his previous life, and his considerations were definitely not that comprehensive. Moreover, when Jiang was still working as a copywriter, he did not copy blindly, but took into account his own identity, experience and historical background when making deletions and changes.

I like it. I like this rhythm. I hope it won't turn into a soft harem in the future. There is really no heroine now. The text is also too cumbersome, but the plot is okay, but if it becomes so cumbersome later on, I feel bored easily.

After re-reading "The Little Prince", I found that the little prince traveled to various planets, met all kinds of people, and learned about love and responsibility while getting along with roses and foxes. We are always busy chasing utilitarian things in the world, but we have gradually lost the ability to perceive beauty. Those seemingly childish thoughts and pure companionship are precisely the most precious existences in life. May we walk through the long road of life, still keep the innocence in our hearts, and cherish every unique bond with our hearts.

Oops, it was so fun to read. The rhythm at the beginning is very good. Just keep this rhythm. Don't procrastinate too much and keep writing about daily life. I have read several books with this problem and finally gave up. I hope the author can maintain the rhythm at the beginning [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

It's very interesting. I hope the author will continue to make more updates.

I quite like it. The pace is neither too fast nor too slow. The writing is quite good. I hope the author can update it soon. I look forward to the follow-up articles.

The writing is quite good, but I feel uncomfortable watching it. I don't know what's going on [laughs] I can't tell. Come on, author.

It's super beautiful. It's rare that a copywriter is so detailed... It doesn't look like an online article at all. It's really beautiful. I really don't understand why the rating is so low. Please save the children.

Author, author, have you been drugged? Why is my Hart so soft?

After reading it, there are no bad points, the writing is very detailed, and the selection of works is good. I originally thought that Shen was the heroine, but it turned out to be a novel without a heroine?

The emotions are very delicate, and the places that should be enjoyable are in place (there is no female protagonist, so there is a male protagonist, right [laughing evilly])

Before writing Sherlock Holmes, could you please take out the book about the three golden giants?

At present, it seems that it should be a single female protagonist. The author has certain literary qualities, the overall rhythm is okay, there is no absolute bad guy, and the character creation is also okay.

If you pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger, you will turn into a real pig later. I have five thousand years of foundation and am afraid of being criticized by others. I am too cautious.

The true god has arrived. I really like it.

The author's own writing style is very good and delicate [adoration][adoration]

It's good, but there is a strong tendency to be boys at the moment. You can do whatever you want.

It's really beautiful. I believe the author is great and will definitely get high ratings☺️

It's very interesting to watch. It's not just because Jiang is the main character that he soars into the sky and cheats all the way. Teacher Wang's teachings are very profound and I feel like I have a vest.

I haven't finished watching it yet, it's quite interesting, and the main character gave me a very calm and calm feeling. The description of Wang Ming is also very true No... No! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Anyone? Why don't you follow? ! Author! Is the author here? ! [Cry]

There is a lot of daily content. What I see when I wait for the update every day is this content. It is difficult for people not to forget this book.

Don't give up on writing! Good looking

The author's description of the relationship between Jiang and Xu is definitely not to attract female readers. Am I sure this is a male channel?

It's okay. Isn't it 5.8? Why is it so low? The author insists, it will definitely go up later.

Come on, come on, it's already tied, keep on stocking up

Big cheers for the author! This book is sure to be a hit!