[Two male protagonists] [Shuangwen] [Light infrastructure] [Ancient tribe] [White-skinned macho attack]
Su Mu traveled through the wilderness and killed the white-skinned and muscular savage Bai Heng as soon as he opened his eyes! I thought it was a romantic relationship, but I didn't expect that this savage would pamper him to the heavens, hunt and protect him, and even cut off his arm for him without retreating!
The witch priest was betrayed and the two were exiled by the tribe? No problem!
Su Mu used his modern thinking to build infrastructure, make traps, and stockpile supplies, while Bai Heng relied on his brute strength to fight off ferocious beasts, torture enemies, and protect loved ones!
Everyone in the world is afraid of Bai Heng's ferocious nature, but only Su Mu knows that the tenderness and possessiveness of this white-skinned tough man belong only to him!
Reader comments
Not bad, but!
The author is a big lie. The introduction says it is a cool novel, but it is actually abusive and extremely frustrating. The protagonist is not a scumbag at all, but is constantly being abused by disgusting villains and natural disasters! Also, I think the protagonist is a bit like a holy father. I don't know what he will look like later on. I haven't finished it yet.
I really cried, not because I was sad or because I was moved, but because I was angry. To be honest, when I saw the attacker behind me being swept away by the flood, I was expressionless and numb. I even thought that the character Ah Ye who appeared in the later period was going to replace Gong. I always wondered if I had read the wrong article and kept reading the introduction.
Author, why don't you change the introduction first and remove the word "Shuangwen", otherwise you will trick many people who like to read "Shuangwen" into it. Generally speaking, "Shuangwen" is enjoyable from the beginning, not endless torture and frustration, but don't tell me that you understand "Shuangwen" to have a happy and sweet ending.
Hey, I really can't think of how to write the next one to make it feel good. A good article is called a good article when it outweighs the frustration. It stomps the frustration hard on the soles of the feet, instead of counting the 56 enjoyable chapters from chapter 1 to now on one hand. It's not abusive at all, but it makes the scumbag keep jumping on top of the head. It's super frustrating.
So! Let's change the introduction first. Author, the article you wrote is not in the category of cool articles. Change it to slightly sadistic or bitter first and then sweet. Those who like sadistic things and can tolerate it will like it. But if you mark it as a cool article, those who like to read cool articles will treat this article as a cool article from the beginning. If they don't like it in the end, they will think this article is very bad [I'm about to cry]
In novels with a barbarian style, idioms and classical Chinese written expressions frequently appear in the mouths of barbarians in an imaginary setting, often causing drama. The villain's portrayal is not three-dimensional enough, and it just comes out one by one.
Not bad, but! The author is a big lie. The introduction says it is a cool novel, but it is actually abusive and extremely frustrating. The protagonist is not a scumbag at all, but is constantly being abused by disgusting villains and natural disasters! Also, I think the protagonist is a bit like a holy father. I don't know what he will look like later on. I haven't finished it yet. I really cried, not because I was sad or because I was moved, but because I was angry. To be honest, when I saw the attacker behind me being swept away by the flood, I was expressionless and numb. I even thought that the character Ah Ye who appeared in the later period was going to replace Gong. I always wondered if I had read the wrong article and kept reading the introduction. Author, why don't you change the introduction first and remove the word "Shuangwen", otherwise you will trick many people who like to read "Shuangwen" into it. Generally speaking, "Shuangwen" is enjoyable from the beginning, not endless torture and frustration, but don't tell me that you understand "Shuangwen" to have a happy and sweet ending. Hey, I really can't think of how to write the next one to make it feel good. A good article is called a good article when it outweighs the frustration. It stomps the frustration hard on the soles of the feet, instead of counting the 56 enjoyable chapters from chapter 1 to now on one hand. It's not abusive at all, but it makes the scumbag keep jumping on top of the head. It's super frustrating. So! Let's change the introduction first. Author, the article you wrote is not in the category of cool articles. Change it to slightly sadistic or bitter first and then sweet. Those who like sadistic things and can tolerate it will like it. But if you mark it as a cool article, those who like to read cool articles will treat this article as a cool article from the beginning. If they don't like it in the end, they will think this article is very bad [I'm about to cry]
In novels with a barbarian style, idioms and classical Chinese written expressions frequently appear in the mouths of barbarians in an imaginary setting, often causing drama. The villain's portrayal is not three-dimensional enough, and it just comes out one by one.