I, the Son of Jiedushi, Had My Legs Broken by a Merchant?

It's really good. I remember reading a book called "Doukai" written by Lao Zhu before. It was comparable to it, the writing style was solid, and the emotional line was much brighter (and slightly dry) compared to "Doukai". But there are some areas that need improvement, that is, there are too many evaluative and descriptive words. For example, when writing about the customs of the Tang Dynasty, it should be written in the context of the story, rather than a large section of descriptive words similar to popular science. Firstly, it is too stiff from a literary perspective, and this This condescending attitude will also make readers very uncomfortable, and deletion will not affect the plot at all; secondly, from a historical perspective, it is full of cheap Internet stereotypes from the last century, which the author himself regards as a guide, but makes people who know more about these histories laugh. To put it simply, it offends both those who know history and those who don't. People who don't know think it's too troublesome for you to nag, and people who know think what you say is wrong [laughs and cries]. Writing novels is about trying to reduce the author's own sense of existence, and throwing the reader into the world you weave for him to experience. In fact, what I said in the second paragraph has nothing to do with book reviews. The main reason is that I haven't seen such a refreshing book on Tomato for a long time, and it can be read with some brain. I feel it and I don't know what to say [Like]

Okay, you don't need to pay too much attention to those who have bad reviews. Those people should like to watch movies without female protagonists. Having a female protagonist is a sin. That should be the case. There are also some who pursue historical rigor. Let me put it bluntly, this is a novel. If you pursue rigor, why don't you watch 24 Histories? Some of you can watch it, pure and simple. For the sake of being dark and wanting to read something with guaranteed quality, why not go to other platforms that require money, but come to this free platform. Generally speaking, this book is not poisonous. If you feel that if you flirt with a woman a little, even if you lick it, then this book will be extremely poisonous for you.

It's really good. I'm a long-time fan of your books, especially the one you wrote about the deep brotherhood between Xiao Huan and Xiao Ke. This is the first time I see brothers getting along like this in a novel, instead of the relationship like the Xuanwu Gate Change written by other authors. Your book is also good. Others don't understand the characteristics of your novels, but they can't appreciate it. This one is still about unconditional trust between family members and the big villain until the end. Come on author!

A rare high-quality fictional historical novel! The author's narration is at the level of the previous fine novels from Qidian. As a 20-year-old bookworm, I really like it. I hope the author will continue his work and not give up halfway. Don't read some of the comments, they are just like watching mindless skits.

After reading this book, I was reminded of the story of Anzhen Mountain and Shi Siming in the late Tang Dynasty

The writing is really good, and the story of the domineering warriors in the late Tang Dynasty is very interesting. This reminds me of a book about Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms that I read before. The quality of the tooth soldiers in that book dropped below zero. Although it was very realistic, it still felt a bit uncomfortable. This book is just right. [Cover face]

Five stars for encouragement, it's not easy for the author. I quite like reading this kind of story about hegemony with a bit of intrigue. To be honest, the protagonist is quite open-minded, but it is more stable to play it slow and steady. It can be seen that the author will not let the protagonist suffer. As long as the villain doesn't really threaten the protagonist, I don't think it's okay to let the villain do his thing.

Five-star support. The author is really knowledgeable and has popularized a lot of historical knowledge. He is very rigorous in this aspect. Writing a book is also a matter of thinking. It is not a mindless article, and it is very comfortable to read. If you don't like watching it, you don't have to watch it. Don't let those of us who like it watch it.

I really think it's pretty good. The comment section is full of people talking about turtles, but I think it's quite comfortable and there's no uncomfortable and aggrieved plot. What can a turtle man say about this? So what does it mean to not be aggrieved? I don't understand.

It's a very nice book. You can get a big picture view online, and you can also learn some historical knowledge. It may be a little bit toxic in the early stage, but it serves the plot and does not affect the overall situation at all. Don't be dissuaded by the low score.

I don't know why the rating is so low, I just saw the updated place in one go. Didn't feel any poison. I suggest you turn off comments when reading the novel. Read it subjectively and don't be misled by some bad comments in the comments.

It's okay, but it's a bit poisonous not to kill Liu's mother and daughter. Don't tell me that life is worse than death. Killing decisively is a male channel.

It's very good-looking, but there may be some minor flaws, mainly because the settings of some female characters are a bit varied, which may affect the reader's perception. The main line of struggle for hegemony is still very good-looking, and you can write more about the struggle for hegemony.

Personally, I think it's pretty good. It's one of the better ones in Tomato. I've read other historical-themed novels in Tomato, and they feel more like keeping a running account. This one is generally okay, and there aren't too many logical errors. I hope the author works hard [Like] [Like]

The writing is quite good, but the male and female aspects are a bit weak. The female protagonists have no characteristics other than beauty and gentleness. On the contrary, Gu Xixi and Ma Linfeng's wife wrote well. The battlefield settings are well written.

It's very well written, it's refreshing but not mindless, it's interesting, it's not devoid of historical cheese either, it's a very good historical fiction.

Come on, author! I quite like this [laughs]

It's beautiful, I wish I could write more, but it's not enough. (๑•̀ㅂ•́)੭✧

It's very good. The writing is also very true. The historical references are also accurate. The content is very interesting. It's a very good novel.

It looks good. Strategically, we should first unify Hebei. Hebei has always been a land of fertility, then go to Shandong and Hedong, and finally go to Henan to fight Zhu Wen. Also, if the system is broken now, it should be diluted or canceled. One star less means that if the game is broken now, when the time comes to summon an army of characters, it will poison me to death.

Not bad, you can check it out when there are more updates

The writing in Tomato is pretty good, it's not poisonous and it's quite refreshing.

I'm not feeling aggrieved, and I don't have any bad points at the moment.

It's very interesting to watch, with a lot of historical details, and the protagonist is not brainless, and the tricks aren't too big.

Support support, must support.

Very well written! Love to watch!

Tomato is one of the few people who wrote a good book about the late Tang Dynasty

I'm not the author, please update it quickly, it's not enough👀

It's so well written, please give it a thumbs up to the author

Yes, it can be seen that the author is knowledgeable and knowledgeable.