I Am the Son of a Military Governor, and a Merchant Broke My Leg?

It's really good. I remember reading a book called "Doukai" written by Lao Zhu before. It was comparable to it, the writing style was solid, and the emotional line was much more refreshing (and slightly dry) compared to "Doukai". But there are some areas that need improvement, that is, there are too many evaluative and descriptive words. For example, when writing about the customs of the Tang Dynasty, it should be written in the context of the story, rather than a large descriptive language similar to popular science. Firstly, it is too stiff from a literary perspective, and this This condescending attitude will also make readers very uncomfortable, and deletion will not affect the plot at all; secondly, from a historical perspective, it is full of cheap Internet stereotypes from the last century, which the author himself regards as a guide, but makes people who know more about these histories laugh. To put it simply, it offends both those who understand history and those who don't. Those who don't understand think it's too troublesome for you to nag, and those who understand think what you say is wrong. Writing novels is about trying to reduce the author's own sense of existence and throwing the reader into the world you weave for him to experience. In fact, what I said in the second paragraph has nothing to do with book reviews. The main reason is that I haven't seen such a refreshing book on Tomato for a long time, and it can be read with some brain. I feel it and I don't know what to say👍

Okay, you don't need to pay too much attention to those who have bad reviews. Those people should like to watch movies without female protagonists. Having a female protagonist is a sin. That should be the case. There are also some who pursue historical rigor. Let me put it bluntly, this is a novel. If you pursue rigor, why don't you watch 24 Histories? Some of you can watch it, pure and simple. For the sake of being dark and wanting to read something with guaranteed quality, why not go to other platforms that require money, but come to this free platform. Generally speaking, this book is not poisonous. If you feel that if you flirt with a woman a little, even if you lick it, then this book will be extremely poisonous for you.

Five-star support. The author is really knowledgeable and has popularized a lot of historical knowledge. He is very rigorous in this aspect. Writing a book is also a matter of thinking. It is not a mindless article, and it is very comfortable to read. If you don't like watching it, you don't have to watch it. Don't let those of us who like it watch it.

It's really good. I'm a long-time fan of your books, especially the one you wrote about the deep brotherhood between Xiao Huan and Xiao Ke. This is the first time I see brothers getting along like this in a novel, instead of the relationship like the Xuanwu Gate Change written by other authors. Your book is also good. Others don't understand the characteristics of your novels, but they can't appreciate it. This one is still about unconditional trust between family members and the big villain until the end. Come on author!

The writing is really good, and the story of the domineering warriors in the late Tang Dynasty is very interesting. This reminds me of a book about Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms that I read before. The quality of the tooth soldiers in that book dropped below zero. Although it was very realistic, it still felt a bit uncomfortable. This book is just right. 🤦

There are nearly 300 chapters, all of which are well written. The plot is smooth, the narrative rhythm and the arrangement of exciting points are very comfortable. There are no bad points. The only possible flaw is that the chapters from the perspective of the non-protagonist are a bit long. It is recommended to update it to make up for it🍉 The only reason why this book was criticized is that as a traditional cheating historical text, it attracted many readers at the beginning for the explosive killing of female pornographic girls, and it failed to provide the fast-paced and exciting point of constantly pinching ants that is common in this genre. I can only say that this opening gimmick is a matter of opinion. I think this book is already considered a good cheating history article on Tomato, and the results should be good if it is not done like this. Of course, the results at the beginning were not good and the book may not last until the day I read it, so I can only give up 🤷‍♂️ All in all, the book is still very good. I don't think the plot arrangement so far is poisonous or illogical. I hope the author can maintain confidence and keep working hard. Many people will still like to read the content you wrote👍

I have read the latest 219, which has 500,000 words. I have read two books by the author before. Although the book on rebellion is gone, this book starts from the female channel and cuts into the struggle for hegemony. The plot is really unreasonable at the beginning, with merchants threatening Jiedushi and so on, but I It's normal to think that it's a female channel. The Song Dynasty had already taken away the military power and then released it over a glass of wine. The other plots were okay. The male protagonist was not a eunuch and now he owned a state. I liked this kind of hegemony story and started to develop Jizhou.

A rare high-quality fictional historical novel! The author's narration is at the level of the previous fine novels from Qidian. As a 20-year-old bookworm, I really like it. I hope the author will continue his work and not give up halfway. Don't read some of the comments, they are just like watching mindless skits.

The writing is quite good, but the male and female aspects are a bit weak. The female protagonists have no characteristics other than beauty and gentleness. On the contrary, Gu Xixi and Ma Linfeng's wife wrote well. The battlefield settings are well written.

After reading this book, I was reminded of the story of Anzhen Mountain and Shi Siming in the late Tang Dynasty