Hunter x Hunter: I've Unleashed Bankai, and You're Still Playing Mind Games?

In fact, I still want to give it 5 stars. After all, the pacing in the early stage is okay, and overall it is quite satisfying. Although the entire first chapter has too many complaints, it is still interesting. But now I am almost 120 chapters in. After going to the island, the complaints accounted for nearly 80% of the chapter, and after meeting the little fat man on the island, he said To be honest, this is not called complaining, this is just pure awkward chat. I obviously feel that the author has no work. I only read the first few dozen chapters of basically normal adventure-type fan fiction, which is embellished with humorous complaints and has its own stable rhythm and style. After being tied at that time, I am still looking forward to more from the author. It's new. It's a pity that the second chapter is really good. As of June 18th, when I wrote this book review, I haven't seen the latest chapter yet. But after arriving on the island, or the entire second chapter starting from the first time I went to sea, it was dominated by completely boring chat-style complaints. In my humble opinion, Judging from the author's writing style and the rhythm of the main plot, this book is more suitable for the traditional kingly passion-driven book. Of course, if the author really likes to write "complaints", he can read more about how the complaints-type comics and animations design their vulnerabilities. Even a poor imitation is far better than creating one behind closed doors. Of course, if the author improves the quality of his subsequent writing, I will add 5 stars to it. It's too watery. I've read Chapter 168 so far, but the follow-up doesn't make my impression any better. 50% Of one chapter is non-nutritious nonsense and 20% is riddles with unclear meanings. Of the nearly 20 chapters, only two or three are chapters that fully advance the plot. The rest of the time is filled with meaningless trash talk and unattractive words.

Super pretty! ´ₒ⦁⩊⦁ₒ`I don't know why the rating is so low. It feels so strange. The writing is different from other fan stories and more novel. Do readers nowadays prefer to watch clichéd plots?

Not bad, not bad. I don't understand why the score is so low. I should be able to get 8 points. Give 5⭐ some encouragement. Also, I would like to make some suggestions. Sometimes the dialogue can be a little less arrogant, especially during battles, which look very complicated. It doesn't look very good. There's nothing wrong with anything else, keep going.

The story is very novel, unlike other fan fiction that just repeats the original plot with modifications. After applying the world view, this book has introduced a new plot under the premise of conforming to the tone of the original work. It can be completely original. The plot unfolded a bit slowly, and only after reaching 200,000 words did some signs gradually emerge. It was obvious that the author was planning to write a very long story. The first plot was a bit stained, but after going to sea, the pace obviously accelerated. It should be here that the main plot really entered.

I think it can score 8 points. What he wrote is not an ordinary full-time hunter, but a full-time hunter with his own ideas, and it is also combined with the current Cassin Kingdom, which makes people feel very refreshing.

The pace of the first volume is a bit slow at the beginning. Friends who like this kind of Crusu theme must insist on reading the second volume. The daily conversations between Mi Ji and Bai Zhu are funny and annoying, and it feels like a barrage every time you follow it. The author's scene descriptions are very visual, and it can be seen that the author has been involved in hot-blooded comics very extensively. Although the story system is relatively independent from the main line of hunters, the writing style is very consistent with the style of ancient hot-blooded youth comics. I personally think it is very good-looking, and 6 points is a bit too low. I would like to give it a 5-star to encourage the author.

An immersive adventure, very close to the feeling of a shounen manga. It's so good! And there is one thing I personally like about this book, that is, the distance from the original characters is very appropriate. You can do whatever you want, and you can get along with them the same way you usually get along with your friends. I won't deliberately get closer to you or stay away from you because I've read the original work. The protagonist has his own path to follow, and his personality charm as a person of character is still acceptable.

The protagonist uses the skills of the God of Death! The nonsensical and funny character in One Piece! Come to the hunter world! As long as the author maintains the current writing style and plot rhythm, it should be considered a masterpiece.

It's well written, but all the events the protagonist encounters are dragged along, arranged by the "system", and arranged by the supporting characters.

It's nice to read, but the author is too short 😢😢😢