I Started Out as a Chaotic Species, but I Turned into a Beautiful Beauty

Although your writing is average, I can barely give you five stars because of your hard work [smile]

Author, when you write articles, you have a habit of constantly describing something. If you keep writing about tiger fangs in the article, it will not make people feel the cuteness of the heroine. You can try it and write it occasionally, which will give people a different feeling.

Dude, if your main character is a woman, it would be better if you take less risks. It happens too often.

It's beautiful, I like it the most. I hope the author will continue to work hard to update it, at least 5 million words. Then a second, third, etc. Movie will be released, and it will become popular. The more words there are, the more traffic will be, and the more traffic, the more money will be made.

It looks good. It's awesome how the loser changes and becomes strong. Okay?

The author's college entrance examination results should be out, right? [Chigua] How many points did he score? The book's formulas are very classic. It can be seen that the characters are all average, and the dialogues are quite human-machine [Thinking]. If it feels better, I suggest the author do more research. Not long after Lu Chen appeared, the protagonist's identity as a time traveler was revealed. I thought there was a scene where he stabbed a fellow traveler in the back [eating melon]. Finally, if you really want to write a good book, I suggest you read more books of the same type.

The plot rhythm is pretty good, but the writing and details may need to be polished, but overall it's pretty good. It feels like reading an ancient novel... (Why does it feel like every chapter has a sense of "I will definitely come back") It feels like... Every chapter has a cruel talking point, regardless of the situation. Your AI traces are a bit heavy

A little bit toxic but harmless The villains are stewed in chaos. Currently, there is a destiny villain (Yi Pawn😵) and a protagonist-shaped villain of the system (roadside one😂)

Pretty good, just a little lacking

Good-looking, but not enough

The subject matter is perfect!

The female fighting version is upgraded, super beautiful

The system and Master's AI have been completely exposed. It is recommended that after the AI has finished writing, you can read it and make slight changes.

When will Meow System Man go offline? Will there be other time travelers after the finale? [Sneaky laugh]

Well, it feels very interesting.

Super pretty Super pretty

Personally I feel it's okay

It can be good-looking, super good-looking

Very nice, please update soon. . . [Adoration]

Let me ask, will there be a male body behind me [laughing evilly]

I hope to see the ending, and hope that those vows and promises will not become regrets

The writing is okay. It's pretty good. The writing is good. Please update it soon.