[Gender Bender + Cultivation + Comeback + Multiple Heroines] Ling Tian was born into this world eighteen years ago with every protagonist debuff stacked against him: no spiritual root, a broken engagement, a missing bone, and a ring picked up after jumping off a cliff. A textbook good-for-nothing from the start.
Then one day, Ling Yueyao, the Taiqing Holy Maiden, accidentally fell victim to an aphrodisiac poison. They spent a night together, and she left with a promise to meet again in three years.
Before he could even savor the memory, a white-haired celestial maiden fell from the sky and shoved a “Chaos Immortal God Seed” into his body.
Then he became her.
Ling Bingyue looked at her own stunning 175-centimeter figure and fell into deep thought. “Brother, I can’t take you to conquer the world anymore… but at least you got to have one wild night before you left.”
The one who awakened inside the ring wasn’t some old geezer, but the white-haired celestial maiden and master, Xuan Xi, so beautiful she took your breath away.
“Master, is there any way to get my manhood back?”
Xuan Xi didn’t answer. She just blushed.
At long last, he met a fellow transmigrator, but the guy wanted to kill him.
“Odd stays odd, even stays even.”
“Five-finger Heart-Piercing Sword.”
“I, Ling Bingyue, am determined to become the strongest under heaven.”
Xuan Xi: “What do you want to do once you become the strongest under heaven?”
Ling Bingyue: “Why, take in lots of harem… I mean, make lots of good connections, hehe.”
Although your writing is average, I can barely give you five stars because of your hard work 🙂
Author, when you write articles, you have a habit of constantly describing something. If you keep writing about tiger fangs in the article, it will not make people feel the cuteness of the heroine. You can try it and write it occasionally, which will give people a different feeling.
It looks good. It's awesome how the loser changes and becomes strong. Okay?
It's beautiful, I like it the most. I hope the author will continue to work hard to update it, at least 5 million words. Then a second, third, etc. Movie will be released, and it will become popular. The more words there are, the more traffic will be, and the more traffic, the more money will be made.
Dude, if your main character is a woman, it would be better if you take less risks. It happens too often.
The female fighting version is upgraded, super beautiful
The author's college entrance examination results should be out, right? [Chigua] How many points did he score? The book's formulas are very classic. It can be seen that the characters are all average, and the dialogues are quite human-machine 🤔. If it feels better, I suggest the author do more research. Not long after Lu Chen appeared, the protagonist's identity as a time traveler was revealed. I thought there was a scene where he stabbed a fellow traveler in the back 🍉. Finally, if you really want to write a good book, I suggest you read more books of the same type.
The system and Master's AI are completely exposed. It is recommended that you read it and make slight changes after the AI is finished.
The plot rhythm is pretty good, but the writing and details may need to be polished, but overall it's pretty good. It feels like reading an ancient novel... (Why does it feel like every chapter has a sense of "I will definitely come back") It feels like... Every chapter has a cruel talking point, regardless of the situation. Your AI traces are a bit heavy
It's a little bit poisonous, but it's harmless. The villains are stewed in chaos. Currently, there is a destiny villain (Yi Zu😵) and a protagonist-shaped villain with a system (roadside one😂)