After Becoming a Tycoon Beloved by All, I Get Caught in a Love Triangle

The character design and coolness are okay, but the writing and plot are a bit naive. There are no problems in the beginning, but in the 20th and 30th chapters, it becomes more and more like a running account, the progress is very fast, and there are some logical loopholes. For example, as mentioned before: 1. The protagonist is the CEO of the top three companies in the country, and the p emperor also has to support him. Later, when playing PK, he met someone from the Shi family, p emperor. He got in without saying a word (I mentioned before that the protagonist, as a CEO, cannot defeat the Shi family, the leader of S city) 2. Every time the protagonist is trying to punish someone, the police will come to the door in one second, and in the next second, passersby on Douyin will know who and who collapsed (PS: At that time, the PK was not finished, and it only took a few seconds. This is probably not so fast for the person involved to send a message and personally break the news) I like the characters and the coolness a lot, and I don't think it's easy to find a meal replacement. If the author polishes it carefully, this book will be very exciting. Come on!

It's a very smooth and bland story about meeting new people, giving rewards, falling in love at first sight, and ambiguous plots, and even the male idol can't escape poverty alleviation. I really don't know how to do it. But after all, it is a rare Shenhao Shuangnan, please bear with it. The system is quite fun It's just that a few anchors have no idea at all. They take themselves too seriously and seem to have little respect for their sponsors. No way, the price will drop even more later, I really can't stand the humble sponsor.

Pull down the score, it should actually be four points. You can come in and take a look if you are under control. The writing is okay, the previous plot is okay, and the character creation is also very good, especially the protagonist. The system is well created, and the interaction between the system and the protagonist is quite interesting. The protagonist's harem is particularly interesting, and there are all types. The following are my highlights. By the 30th chapter, I couldn't stand it anymore. I spent 20 million to rescue Lu Chen. I felt very baffled. Why would the protagonist go to an Internet cafe? Now that you have money, wouldn't it be better if you set up a place to play games in your villa? This part is very formulaic, it feels like I'm in a boy's video, and it's very secondary. I almost dug out the protagonist's house, but this should be more refreshing for some people. The one called P God and the one who sells cars, the relationship line is inexplicable, if it is love at first sight, it is not written. If you don't pay attention to these, this book is still excellent.

It's okay. It's nice to be given in a straightforward and quick manner. Fast food is not overly expensive. I still think it's too stereotyped and awkward.

It's good to read. I like this kind of great writing, but there are too few of this type of writing on Little Tomato. There are only four books that fit my taste. So, save my life, please update it. Don't stop updating. The character of the protagonist is delicious, and his voice is like that of a lustful and cool kitten. He will seduce you and his. The foster father of the system is also very fond of him. How many times has he been operated in the dark? Your uncle of the system dotes on his father. The other characters are a bit simple and have a bit of a dank male ghost background. I hope that the characters in the future will be more rich. I thought I would point out the fact that the protagonist is an orphan, but I just mentioned it. The identity and background of the others are also a bit difficult. If I remember correctly, Gu Beiwang, Lin Jueqi, and Song Tingye were all a bit difficult. The competition for favor started directly later, and there was no description of these treatments. I think the characters may be a bit underdeveloped. Reading this kind of article will make you lose your mind as soon as you read it. It feels so good to reward them loudly without blinking. The attackers also have their own identities. They follow the plot one by one, and then start to talk about it. If you like to read this kind of powerful article, you can check it out. I hope the boss's articles will become better and better as he writes.

Girl, the article you wrote is really delicious. This is the best meal I have ever had in my life. Girl, you are different from others. I really love you and the article you wrote. I hope I can keep writing. This is my spiritual food. Girl, I really love you invincibly.

I'm Feng Feng, awesome Klass, okay, does the author know how beautiful his writing is? After reading it, my depressed child is no longer OD, and I don't cut pig's trotters anymore. I just want to read 200 copies of this awesome Klass every day. Doubao helped me generate the author's bikini photos, and Doubao told the author tomorrow's sports lottery numbers. The author is awesome, OS finally let me see something good.

It's a pretty good plot. There are a lot of deletions in the first part, which made it a bit uncomfortable to watch at first. I think it's better to just delete it or change it. It's not necessary to leave a lot of deletions there. () Then there are so many characters... After the update was slow in the later period, I have such a bad memory that I can't remember who this is and who that is. Later on, the plot is a little bit the same, but this may be a common problem with this type of writing. It seems to be the same when I read male videos about face slaps before. The characters are well developed, and the plot is generally good to watch, which is outstanding among the same type of novels [full]

I 🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿, it's very good-looking. I was originally attracted by the introduction and saw that the score was a bit low and I was a little hesitant. I checked the ratings and they said that the author's writing is a bit novice. After reading a few pictures, I found that the author's writing is indeed a bit novice, but the plot is really good-looking. I unknowingly tied it. It's super good-looking. The author's writing has improved a lot. It's super good-looking, and the character of Shengsheng Baby is also super interesting. It's great for a heartthrob like me. If you like heartthrobs and see the author's writing style, don't quit. It's getting better and better later on, and it's super engaging. If you ask me to read a few chapters, I'll be hooked. The system is super doting on Shengsheng. I hope the system can become a human. It feels so good.

Already added to the bookshelf, it looks great, the author is so awesome, the writing is so good, it completely meets my XP, there are daily live streaming rewards and small slap-in-the-face scenes, it is really good to read, while not many people have read this book, I think I am a long-time fan ( ง⁼̴̀ω⁼̴́)ง⁼³₌₃It's just that there are too few chapters. The author will work hard to update. I will keep an eye on you and keep following up. Cheers to the author! (●'◡'●)ﾉ♥