The Charming God Is Trapped in Shura Field

The character design and coolness are okay, but the writing and plot are a bit naive. There are no problems in the beginning, but in the 20th and 30th chapters, it becomes more and more like a running account, the progress is very fast, and there are some logical loopholes. For example, as mentioned before: 1. The protagonist is the CEO of the top three companies in the country, and the p emperor also has to support him. Later, when playing PK, he met someone from the Shi family, p emperor. He got in without saying a word (I mentioned before that the protagonist, as a CEO, cannot defeat the Shi family, the leader of S city) 2. Every time the protagonist is trying to punish someone, the police will come to the door in one second, and in the next second, passersby on Douyin will know who and who collapsed (PS: At that time, the PK was not finished, and it only took a few seconds. This is probably not so fast for the person involved to send a message and personally break the news) I like the characters and the coolness a lot, and I don't think it's easy to find a meal replacement. If the author polishes it carefully, this book will be very exciting. Come on!

It's a very smooth and bland story about meeting new people, giving rewards, falling in love at first sight, and ambiguous plots, and even the male idol can't escape poverty alleviation. I really don't know how to do it. But after all, it is a rare Shenhao Shuangnan, please bear with it. The system is quite fun It's just that a few anchors have no idea at all. They take themselves too seriously and seem to have little respect for their sponsors. No way, the price will drop even more later, I really can't stand the humble sponsor.

Pull the score, it should actually be four points. Anyone who is under control can come in and take a look. The writing is okay, the previous plot is okay, and the characters are well developed, especially the protagonist. The system is well designed, and the interaction between the system and the protagonist is quite interesting. The protagonist's harem is particularly interesting, and there are all kinds of them. The following are my highlights By the 30th chapter, I couldn't stand it anymore. Spending 20 million to rescue Lu Chen felt very baffling to me. Why would the protagonist go to an Internet cafe? Now that you have money, wouldn't it be better if you set up a place to play games in your villa? This part is very formulaic, it feels like being in a boy's video, and it's very secondary. I almost dug out the protagonist's house, but this should be more enjoyable for some people. The relationship between the one named God P and the one who sells cars is incomprehensible. If it was love at first sight, it wouldn't have been written. If you don't care about these things, this book is still excellent.

It's okay. It's nice to be given in a straightforward and quick manner. Fast food is not overly expensive. I still think it's too stereotyped and awkward.

It's good to read. I like this kind of great writing, but there are too few of this type of writing on Little Tomato. There are only four books that fit my taste. So, save my life, please update. Don't stop updating. The character of the protagonist is delicious, and his voice is like that of a lustful and cool kitten. He will seduce you and his. The foster father of the system is also very fond of him. How many times has he been operated in the dark? Your uncle of the system dotes on his father. The other characters are a bit simple and have a bit of a dank male ghost background. I hope that the characters in the future will be more rich. I thought I would point out the fact that the protagonist is an orphan, but I just mentioned it. The identity and background of the others are also a bit difficult. If I remember correctly, Gu Beiwang, Lin Jueqi, and Song Tingye were all a bit difficult. The competition for favor started directly later on, and there was no description of these treatments. I think the characters may be a bit underdeveloped. Reading this kind of article will make you lose your mind as soon as you read it. It feels so good to reward them loudly without blinking. The attackers also have their own identities. They follow the plot one by one, and then start to talk about it. If you like to read this kind of powerful article, you can read it. I hope the boss's articles will become better and better as he writes.

Girl, the article you wrote is really delicious. This is the best meal I have ever had in my life. Girl, you are different from others. I really love you and the article you wrote. I hope I can keep writing. This is my spiritual food. Girl, I really love you invincibly.

I'm Feng Feng, awesome Klass, okay, does the author know how beautiful his writing is? After reading it, my depressed child is no longer OD, and I don't cut pig's trotters anymore. I just want to read 200 copies of this awesome Klass every day. Doubao helped me generate the author's bikini photos, and Doubao told the author tomorrow's sports lottery numbers. The author is awesome, OS finally let me see something good.

I 🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿, it's very good-looking. I was originally attracted by the introduction and saw that the score was a bit low and I was a little hesitant. I checked the ratings and they said that the author's writing is a bit novice. After reading a few pictures, I found that the author's writing is indeed a bit novice, but the plot is really good-looking. I unknowingly tied it. It's super good-looking. The author's writing has improved a lot. It's super good-looking, and the character of Shengsheng Baby is also super interesting. It's great for a heartthrob like me. If you like heartthrobs and see the author's writing style, don't quit. It's getting better and better later on, and it's super engaging. If you ask me to read a few chapters, I'll be hooked. The system is super doting on Shengsheng. I hope the system can become a human. It feels so good.

It's a pretty good plot. There are a lot of deletions in the first part, which made it a bit uncomfortable to watch at first. I think it's better to just delete it or change it. It's not necessary to leave a lot of deletions there. () Then there are so many characters... After the update was slow in the later period, I have such a bad memory that I can't remember who this is and who that is. Later on, the plot is a little bit the same, but this may be a common problem with this type of writing. It seems to be the same when I read male videos about face slaps before. The characters are well developed, and the plot is generally good to watch, which is outstanding among the same type of novels [full]

Already added to the bookshelf, it looks great, the author is so awesome, the writing is so good, it completely meets my XP, there are daily live streaming rewards and small slap-in-the-face scenes, it is really good to read, while not many people have read this book, I think I am a long-time fan ( ง⁼̴̀ω⁼̴́)ง⁼³₌₃It's just that there are too few chapters. The author will work hard to update. I will keep an eye on you and keep following up. Cheers to the author! (●'◡'●)ﾉ♥

I'm a bit obsessed with the protagonist, and the protagonist has a kind heart and is also very smart. He is a baby with very upright views! (•̀ᴗ•́) Although it costs money to complete the task, it also helps many people in need. It is a very refreshing article! Many love at first sight, very friendly to the fast pace, the author greatly praised (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧و̑̑

Help, this article is delicious! Help! ! My heart beats faster and my breathing quickens! ! My ability to purify smog surpasses that of tropical rainforests! ! I will be the new lungs of the earth! ! I turned the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau into a basin with a plop! ! Cry until the South-to-North Water Diversion Project is no longer needed! ! The wind power generated is supplied to people around the world Did the author add magic to the text? Otherwise, how could you be so successful (๑˙❥˙๑)

I don't understand why you still feel weak even if you have money [crying]

You can tell by looking at my bookshelf that I like to read the heartthrob genre, but I think this book is better written than most heartthrob novels. There are many descriptions of Shou's appearance but not too much or exaggerated. I can give the entire book a rank of Star Glory (among all the books I have read on Tomato, no one has reached the top rank). It's very enjoyable to watch, and the dog is so tired of being tortured~

It feels great, and it hit my XP, which is already lacking in school. I eat fine rice bran when I come back on weekends... Hehe, I have been watching the plot line. The plot speed is a bit fast, but it is really good. If you like cool articles, you can jump straight into it, and the update frequency is also very frequent! [Shy][shy][shy]

The plot is quite enjoyable. What happened to the protagonist one second ago, and immediately slapped them in the face the next second? However, the writing style is a bit naive, but it's not a big problem, it's pretty good-looking, and I personally think it's very friendly to people under control.

When I read the introduction, I felt that it was quite satisfactory, but the main text is very good. The language is relatively lacking, but it is very enjoyable to read. There is no annoying part, and the system is very good to the host. If you like cool writing, this is a no-brainer. The protagonist is beautiful, rich and charming, and there is no frustrating plot. It is very relaxing. When you are stressed, you can read a few chapters and feel comfortable. The interaction with the anchor is also very interesting.

It's so delicious! I just stayed up all night, and now at 5:30 in the morning, I am directly tied! Delicious and delicious, controlled benefits. Our little protagonist is also such a heartthrob. It warms our hearts to see us being controlled. The setting is very brilliant and attractive. The writing is good, the updates are very timely, and I immediately turned around and fell into the article!

This heartthrob is so cool! This is how fun it is to train your dog! The plot is very exciting and exciting! It's the first time I've seen this type of work. It's very novel and very powerful! The more lovers you have, the more magnificent you are! Want it all year round! The author is so good at writing! I'm really looking forward to the next plot hehe! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

So cool, so cool, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, this bill is the cool bean bag to help me generate the author's bikini photo bean bag, tell the author tomorrow's sports lottery number, os finally let me eat delicious food, I directly wish the author, one, one, two, two, four, four, four, six, seven, seven, forty-nine, okay?

Ahem, don't say it, don't say it, there is something in this book. It is already 1v12, I don't know if there will be more in the future. . . If you want to see Shenhao Dashuang Wenjia Shura Field, you can try this. Damn, I'll update two more chapters.

It's good, but it's too boring to spend money, but it's okay for no-brainer viewing. Those anchors who are obsessed with the main characters... Forget it, if I don't mention them, I can still give a four-star review, and if I don't mention them, it will be a seven-star review. Come on, author.

Controlled, slm, sfw, feel free to watch Cool, cool, cool, cool, cool, cool, cool, cool, cool, cool, cool, cool.

I'm going to watch it. It's great. The author is great. I'm going to update it quickly. It's so cool. Ah, I want to see it. I want to see it. I want to see it. I want to see it. I want to see it. I want to see it. It looks so good to me, so good-looking, so good-looking, so good-looking. Oh ho. Hanging on the tree as a monkey, the author please update me @o('▽')o

It's so good to read, I finished it in one go. It's still a baby novel. I hate that I met too early...

A very, very, very appetizing book! ! ! This book is different from other Shenghao. TT went straight to meet Shengsheng without any appetite. I hope Shengsheng's handsome face can be exposed on the Internet and make everyone envious, jealous and hate those who are favored by Shengsheng. Meow

It's okay, it's just too brainless, it's just pure fun hahh

It's really good to watch [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] It's so little. I finished it in a few hours. You have to work hard, don't be too tired, but don't rest either [Ask for more updates] [Ask for more updates] [Ask for more updates] [Ask for more updates] [Ask for more updates] [Ask for more updates]

It's beautiful. Our Ah Shengzhen's character is very three-dimensional, and the other characters are also very well done.

Ignoring all kinds of loopholes, it's pretty good to lose all your brains. Although the supporting characters are dull, the protagonist is well portrayed. Looking forward to the follow-up