People Are Super Cannon, so at the Beginning, Let the Cannon Sister Be Red and Warm.

Although starting from Chapter 5, I can tell that some parts are written by Mr. Blue Whale DS, but the overall rhythm is well arranged. Those who like super cannon fan fiction can give it a try [Chigua] Not bad, I agree.

It's pretty good to watch, but the main character's abilities don't feel like time-stopping, but like Kaguya Horai's Eternal and Moment expanded from 0.01 Seconds to 15 minutes.

It looks good, but why does the protagonist not feel like Time Stop, but like Quicksilver? How can he still speed up his actions during Time Stop?

It's neither routine nor passionate, nor does it stop from time to time. My bottom line is three points, plus one purely because this is one of the few people alive who writes about super guns.

It took a little time to stretch my hips, but I still really like the emotional line of this book. The more I watch, the more tired I am. I can't write anything else except the interaction with the heroine.

It would be better if he updated 10 chapters every day [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's very good, the logic is smooth, and it has the flavor of the original work.

Stop talking nonsense, Sister Gun, compete well! ! !

Ok ok ok

It's beautiful, very warm, come on! ! ! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Like posts]

It's really well written, and I know how to write love plots very well. Can the author summarize the character of the protagonist? I found that the protagonist is calm most of the time, and his tone is bland, but he also likes to joke (such as playing pranks during breaks), and sometimes he will say something similar to complaining. When it comes to relationships, I found that the purpose of using emotional value as a cheat is also to write the character arc of the protagonist? From the beginning, the protagonist deliberately teased Mikoto for points, but later he became attracted and started to really get involved in the relationship between the two? I also want to write a book, and I found that the character of the protagonist is quite good. It would be great if you could briefly summarize his character. I would be very grateful.

Okay, it looks pretty good so far

One of the few super cool articles

The best evaluation is the simplest words

It's okay, but the protagonist's ability is still lacking, and it can't be regarded as a true stop of time.

Good looking. Love to watch. Update soon.

Come on author, look forward to the emotional line between Kuroko and Uiharu [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The writing is so good, the emotional lines are so delicately drawn [Like]

I don't know why the rating is so low. Although the previous description is a bit down, but the description is very detailed, the rating feels a bit low.

Teacher ds, why did you write the sweet daily articles in a spy style? [Crying]

Hey hey hey, the score is so low [face covering]

It is very well written, especially the complicated love relationship between the protagonist and Misaka Mikoto.