[Soldier Boy + American Comics + No Romance + Thunderous Language + Antihero]
“Good luck, son.”
“I love you.”
“You are not God!”
“With great power comes great responsibility.” Watching Ben Parker die right before his eyes, Soldier Boy finally understood the true meaning of those words.
After Homelander shoved him into a freezer, he arrived in a strange world.
An ordinary old man taught him what home and the bond between father and son meant. Then, just as he decided to put his old identity behind him and start over, he watched the old man die right before his eyes.
“If this is the choice God made for me…”
Soldier Boy clenched his fist. “Then I choose to face Him!”
The author's subject matter is very good. I have read all the chapters so far, but there is one question. I have to tell you about the power. The setting of your car is three tons. But how is it possible? I asked him about his performance in the TV series where he overturns cars at will. I checked and found that with such power, he is guaranteed to have at least 8 to 12 tons of power. In the setting of the comic, I also checked this. He works with his teammates and can lift 36 tons of weight. In other words, if he can lift about 18 tons of weight by himself, his strength cannot be only three tons.
The writing is very good, and the taste of the soldier boy has not changed, and the author has mixed in a lot of things, but the sexy boy is a bit behind the version. Hurry up and strengthen it appropriately, so that the soldier boy dad can dominate everyone [please update]
It's well written, but the numbers are horribly low.
Very nice to look at. This is already the second black-robed fan I've met. One is from Deadpool. Now the second one is yours. They all have that flavor.
A very good beginning, does Uncle Ben have to die [face covering]
The black-robed picket team only had limited funds and insufficient performance. After the soldier was caught and tortured for forty years, he must have used all the methods he could think of. The suffocation and laser killing would definitely be used, but the soldier was still strong. His strength could not be more than three tons. Even if he didn't have speed, he would still have the strength to jump. Just a few dozen meters, otherwise how can we catch the sight of the bomb taking off and respond to the speed of a marathon? We have no money to show off and we end up like this. It's like the last episode where we beat the people of the motherland. The people of the motherland can only use laser eyes. They can't even break a board when they hit people. The laser eyes can't even penetrate a stone. This is the finale [awkward laugh]
Focusing on plot, this is the real superhero
How to say it? Bing Nan's character is more vivid than other fan works, although I still feel it's a lot worse.
The writing is good. Some of the characters about Spider-Man have the tone of the animated Spider-Man, and the characters are not OOC.
The author has taken suggestions, did not use AI, and did not write too much about the system.
The texture of the painting style is maintained.
The subject matter is actually good, and it's understandable to let AI help, but shouldn't it be checked more?
The author's subject matter is very good. I have read all the chapters so far, but there is one question. I have to tell you about the power. The setting of your car is three tons. But how is it possible? I asked him about his performance in the TV series where he overturns cars at will. I checked and found that with such power, he is guaranteed to have at least 8 to 12 tons of power. In the setting of the comic, I also checked this. He works with his teammates and can lift 36 tons of weight. In other words, if he can lift about 18 tons of weight by himself, his strength cannot be only three tons.
The writing is very good, and the taste of the soldier boy has not changed, and the author has mixed in a lot of things, but the sexy boy is a bit behind the version. Hurry up and strengthen it appropriately, so that the soldier boy dad can dominate everyone [please update]
It's well written, but the numbers are horribly low.
Very nice to look at. This is already the second black-robed fan I've met. One is from Deadpool. Now the second one is yours. They all have that flavor.
A very good beginning, does Uncle Ben have to die [face covering]
The black-robed picket team only had limited funds and insufficient performance. After the soldier was caught and tortured for forty years, he must have used all the methods he could think of. The suffocation and laser killing would definitely be used, but the soldier was still strong. His strength could not be more than three tons. Even if he didn't have speed, he would still have the strength to jump. Just a few dozen meters, otherwise how can we catch the sight of the bomb taking off and respond to the speed of a marathon? We have no money to show off and we end up like this. It's like the last episode where we beat the people of the motherland. The people of the motherland can only use laser eyes. They can't even break a board when they hit people. The laser eyes can't even penetrate a stone. This is the finale [awkward laugh]
Focusing on plot, this is the real superhero
How to say it? Bing Nan's character is more vivid than other fan works, although I still feel it's a lot worse.
The writing is good. Some of the characters about Spider-Man have the tone of the animated Spider-Man, and the characters are not OOC. The author has taken suggestions, did not use AI, and did not write too much about the system. The texture of the painting style is maintained.
The subject matter is actually good, and it's understandable to let AI help, but shouldn't it be checked more?