The Gods' Foolish Game: He Returns with the Script Again

I was convinced, read a few of them and made comments 😄. Here are a few problems I found (the order is in random order, I will write the one that comes to my mind) 1 So how did the 6 people mentioned earlier become seven in the next chapter? Moreover, anyone who has read the original book knows that there are 6 people in the trial, so the seventh person comes? 2 Trials don't happen once every 7 days, why do they happen once every 3 days here (if it's because it's the first time and it's very special, I didn't mention it) 3. According to the original book, the maximum should be plus 20, so correspondingly, the maximum should be minus 20, otherwise it would be unfair. So according to this logic, the minimum is at least 920 points (because of the settlement at the end of the month, anything less than 1,000 is s). So where did the more than 800 points come from? 4 As mentioned before, you are about to participate in the first trial, so where did the uneven scores come from? 5Why do non-believers appear at the beginning of a game of faith? I can understand it through special means in the later stage, but the same as above, why does it happen in the early stage? (The author said that this person does not belong to any destiny, so that means he has no faith) 6Same as Article 3, why does the road to the gods add 72 points at once? (One additional point here: When the original author Cheng Shi saw the 20 points added to the Road to God, he said that he had never seen so many points added, up to 17 at a time. I did not copy it, but this is the meaning, you can check it) 7 Isn't Xie Yang a believer in [war]? What is doomsday financing? I remember that the original text didn't have this thing (I didn't mention the private setting) 8 "The fourth dungeon is about the third month after the game starts." Same as the second article. The fourth dungeon is the end of the first month. Why are there three months? 6,,, (,,,, It's been a long time, but the contradiction is so obvious, and this is the first time I've seen it, and shouldn't I read the original text when I'm writing about it? Many points are easy to find, and I don't think it's that bad, and some parts are mentioned several times in the original text, so as long as you don't just read and skip, you won't be confused. Too messy The last time I saw such a mess, I was out of work and found an AI to write an article (it was not published!!! It's on any platform!!! It's just for my own reading!!! (><)) And then showed it to me and never used it again 😄 So, could you please give the author a big response? At present, I think this article is as weird as AI My above statement can only be based on evidence, whether it is my own experience or the experience of people around me. I can refute it, but I will not accept pure accusations without evidence. Thank you. The same is true for the 8 questions. As long as there is evidence, whether it is a personal creation or the original work, I will accept refutation as long as there is evidence and reason. Thank you.

Really, I have never seen such outrageous fan fiction, let me talk about the problem. Every point I give is the lowest one on Tomato. It makes me heartbroken. 1. The character is seriously OOC, I don't recognize this character! Cheng Shi's original image should be humane, with a bit of cleverness in his humor, but someone who can remain calm and rational in important situations. The Cheng Shi here is a completely different image, with only calmness and rationality left, and he can easily go back to his previous life. Even the different Cheng Shi in the parallel universe is not like this. 2. Worldview: I suspect that the author has not read the original work. Over 800 points in the first trial? Is it yin or not? There are 6 people in one trial, 7 here. Destiny should not appear in the Land of Hope, Destiny is the god of the current era. The NPCs in the trial here know their fate, which is impossible. A trial can add up to 20 points for the Road to God, and a maximum of 3 points for the Ladder of Audience. The 72 points and 5 points in this trial are also impossible. It is possible that the person who can talk to Cheng Shi in his mind is not the lips of Yu Xi, but the deceiver. Deception can only communicate with Cheng Shi through Liangshen. It's impossible to have a conversation directly in your head. Xie Yang's Doomsday Rongjin is an ID name, not a destiny. The destiny is the god he believes in. There is no god named Doomsday Rongjin! 0221 Is not an organization either! I wonder what the hell is an observer? What the hell is a lifeless path? 3. Typos, existence becomes Cunzhuang. In summary, as a fanfic, the characters are OOC, the plot is outrageous, and the worldview is seriously inconsistent! The logic doesn't make sense! One star is the bottom line for Tomato, but it is not the bottom line for this article! A few more points. The number of people in the special trial is fixed at 6 people, but here it can be not only 7 people, but also single people. As mentioned at the beginning of the original book, only praying can produce a single-player trial, and it is simple and low-risk. There is no single player in the special trial. Cheng Shi's most famous lie, Yesterday, was also perfectly invisible...