After Becoming Zhang Qiling's Younger Sister, I Ship Couples and Protect Them

I think the writing is very professional, and it can be seen from the words. She likes Tomb Raiders Notes and Evil Black Flower very much. The writing is very delicate, gentle and natural, especially the description of her traveling from Changbai Mountain to the ancestral hall and becoming Zhang Qiling's sister. There are also a series of descriptions and narratives. I feel that she likes Tomb Raiders Notes very much. Zhang Qiling and Wu Xie may even become a kind of spiritual sustenance for her. But I subjectively think that these things may only need to be written in one to three pages. Personally, I prefer to read plot-oriented ones, such as Wu Xie just entering the Blood Corpse Tomb, or Qinling, a series of plots with Xiaohua, getting to know the blind man, and Siguniang Mountain. I hope the author will add Zhang Wanwan to these plots. Sometimes when I see some plots, I will block the knife for Zhang Qiling, Wu Xie, etc., Etc. I have never seen these before. I am very confused because there are too many emotional descriptions. There is very little plot. It should be possible to mix plot and emotion together, but sometimes the author may not be able to contain his emotions while writing. I can understand that I can feel it between the lines. She really likes Tomb Raider Notes. If some plot elements can be added, and there are some sweets and other secretly poked by Ping Xie Hei Hua, the score will definitely be 9.0. Of course, this is also my subjective feeling. Some of my personal suggestions 😳😳😳

The first time Kuroka met was probably during the time in Devil City. The blind man was called to fetch the pieces of the plate. Then Xiaohua competed with him. The first time Wu Xie and his brother met probably happened around the corner when his third uncle asked Wu Xie to see the Dragon's Back (this is based on the content in the original work). Chapter 15 Inside Wu Xie. An Ning should have been lost in the Snake Marsh Ghost Town, while Pan Zi died in the Zhangjia Ancient Building. Then normally speaking, Fatty should have lost the clouds, not Wu Xie. I haven't finished listening to it yet, I'm sorry.

It's so cute and I love watching it. The heroine uses a magnifying glass to knead the cp. Black Flower 99 is so beautiful.

It didn't take long to watch ① It's a bit boring. There are too many descriptions of the heroine. It's all about her monologues. The heroine's fighting plot is only for the protagonists to block the knife. From time to time, a knife will be used. ② There are also some parts of the characters that are not done well, so it is written as (Jiang Zhang Wanwan) ③The timeline does not follow the original line, and the single plot description is average (it describes a lot of the brother-sister relationship between the heroine and the younger brother. Although it feels like it is foreshadowing, it is always interspersed with saying that they are brother and sister. Basically every chapter has a chapter of their brother-sister relationship), and there is basically no original plot. ④Obviously, I have never written about Fatty before, but when I arrived at Banai Yuncai, I suddenly collapsed with the feudal clan. I have never been to Qixinglu Palace, how did I recognize Fatty? ⑤In the era of the original work, there were cars and mobile phones. I don't know why they used horses, carriages and flying pigeons to deliver messages. It made it look like ancient times. I stopped watching it and gave up.

The writing is quite good, but I remember didn't we meet Heihua earlier? And didn't their story line, the Third Uncle from the South School, have a separate story? And doesn't Zhang Qiling have amnesia? How could it be possible that he would always be here in the Zhang family?

More than half of the book is about my sister and Zhang Qiling, how awesome they are, and I have been writing about thank you, thank you, thank you hundreds of times😌 I wonder if it is a cp fanfic. I don't know why, but inexplicably, I started to prefer it. The emotional line was written for me! There are a lot of repetitions and the tone is very much like it was written by AI😇

The writing is very good and the plot is exciting, but there are always some repetitive content from the previous ones. I hope it can be changed a lot and I look forward to the follow-up development.

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The author's writing style is very good, but he always emphasizes the heroine's mission. I think it's a bit middle-of-the-road.

Each CP is lively and interesting, and the author's writing style is also very good.