After transmigrating to a parallel world of Douluo Dalu, Lin Fan binds the Destiny-Snatching System.
First objective: take Tang San as his disciple before Yu Xiaogang can.
With Tang Hao sunk in drink and despair, I’ll be both mentor and father, teaching him the true essence of the Mysterious Heaven Skill.
When the Clear Sky Sect betrays Ah Yin, I’ll expose the truth and make him hate his biological father.
When Tang Hao marries again and has another child, I’ll promise Tang San: “Once you become a god, I’ll help you bring your mother back to life.”
After the inheritance on Sea God Island and the hunt for the Deep Sea Demonic Whale King, I finally bring Ah Yin back to life.
Seeing the trusting look in his mother’s eyes, Tang San falls to his knees and begs, “Master, please marry my mother and become my real father.”
Consumed by jealousy, Yu Xiaogang joins forces with Spirit Hall to have me killed.
Bibi Dong comes after me in person, while Tang Hao seeks redemption in his final moments.
And as I hold Ah Yin’s hand, I smile at Tang San, now a Sea God:
“From this day on, I, Lin Fan, am your one and only father.”
[Mentor protagonist + snatching destiny + father-son love and hatred + one heroine]
Watch Lin Fan plan his every move, win Ah Yin’s heart, teach Tang San, and ultimately become the most unconventional “father” in the Douluo World.
The young author gives himself a five-star review, hehe
I think it's pretty
I think it's good to look at it as a parallel universe. What's the relationship with Wuhun Palace in the future? Are they still enemies?
It looks quite comfortable and natural, the plot is not abrupt, and it is not a brainless novel, but some details need to be more rigorous.
It's really good, but it looked awkward when I first accepted Tang San as my disciple. After I became a disciple, it became more normal. Your book is contradictory in many places. The male protagonist and the seven stars are pretty well portrayed, but some things are really too contradictory. We don't know whether this novel was written by AI or you yourself. It's not easy for me to give you five stars if I write a novel.