After Raising the Cub with Krypton Gold, the Mute Zhang Fed Me in Reverse

The plot is quite good, and you can see the author's doting on the younger brother, but the writing style is a bit immature, and the expression is too enthusiastic, and he feels a bit self-excited. I guess the author may be very young, and in terms of age or mentality, he is like a girl who loves straightforwardly and passionately (a bit middle-aged). His expressions are not restrained, and his true feelings are projected onto the heroine without reservation. I gave up the book. The more I read, the more embarrassed I become.

A very novel perspective, the encounter between two people from different time and space. It is warm and touching, and occasionally funny. I like it very much. Author, please update it quickly. After reading it, it is gone. I still want to read it. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

The author is a fan of Zhang Qiling [laughing]

Beautiful very beautiful, How could you not recognize Heixiazi? Why is Xie Yuchen so fierce? >O< Hasn't he always been gentle and elegant?

This novel is like the sunshine in spring, gentle and bright. Every line of text is full of poetry, making people unable to resist its charm. I was deeply attracted by it, as if I was lost in a beautiful sea of ​​flowers, full of joy and unable to stop.

It looks good, has a warm feeling, and the angle is very novel. The author will update it very quickly!

Because of a novel, I seem to have fallen in love with Tomb Raiders Notes

The big work is really great...

Bipolar salvation is here! ! ! ! !

Uh, it's very beautiful. I highly recommend it.

Very interesting and worth watching

Please write more articles about pampered little brother!

Very pretty, okay?

It's okay, but Xiaohua was a bit OOC in Chapter 20 [smiles]

I really, really, really like this little brother! When he is really pampered, he must be like this

It looks good. Can the author update it soon? [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]

It looks good, but a little bit I am the god who protects you. [Remember, there are people in this world who care about you, so stop bleeding casually! I can't understand it later

Very good, not bad. I suggest you watch it. Ah, no, you all should come and watch it.

So beautiful, the two-way preference of the gods

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. (‵▽′)/

Well, it was very beautiful, especially when Ling Yue came to Tomb Raiders Notes.

Nice! It's just a little short! Big more updates!

It's beautiful, very beautiful. This heroine is really raising Zhang Qiling as a child☺️

Great 👍, super doting guy, makes my heart warm when I see him

It's very beautiful. Author, if you have time then, I'll post more like this.

Very delicious and warm

It's a novel that really suits my taste. Now that I've seen it, there's not a single thing I don't like about it. Piece by piece, bit by bit, it touches my heart that I love Zhang Qiling.

Very beautiful, mutual redemption, novel theme, different heroine, different brother,

Beautiful! Like it very much

It's okay. I hope it doesn't end badly.