Will All Members of Dingmei Luren Also Be Bai Yueguang?

It's pretty good. It can be seen that the heroine is trying to create a detached feeling. Some small details of the supporting characters are also written in. However, it feels a bit too much. The constant emphasis on the heroine's indifference results in a lot of repetition in the plot and dialogue. The look and feel is not very good. Some other aspects can be used to supplement it.

It wasn't just them who fell in love with the girl, but me as well. Although the introduction is beautiful, it doesn't spend much time describing what it's like to be attracted by appearance. Of course, I also like that kind of thing, but inevitably the image of the protagonist is very superficial. But Lin Su, it's been a long time since I've seen such a gentle little person who is light and a little dazed, and I'm so excited. I finally fell in love with the charm of the cold-faced cuteness. A_A I didn't say anything, but I was attracted by Lin Su's cuteness. The girl's image really jumped out of the page. I haven't seen such a charming and three-dimensional protagonist in a long time. The girl is like a gust of wind, gently blowing across the faces of pedestrians, only running towards the destination. After you are attracted by the gentle wind, you try to meet the wind again by chance on its journey. Well, that's what happens to men and women who are attracted to girls. The very charming little sister is like a cute little human machine in the first world. The outside world is harassing her (trying to compete for her attention). The younger sister has been quiet for many years (counting money). No matter how the plot develops in the outside world, she just works hard in her own direction. It is natural for them to be curious about the strength of their sister! Moreover, the supporting characters are also very interesting, and everyone feels like they are alive. It's quite rare nowadays. Many characters are black and white, but the world often doesn't tolerate so many extremes. In the second world, although Wen Yining is the villain of the original novel, he is really a very charming person. He is the kind of teacher in the school who although the requirements are stricter, but he teaches sincerely and speaks out when there are problems. If you choose a tutor, he should be quite popular, because I want to choose hhhh. Moreover, the content of the description magnified his personality charm infinitely. There is a saying that people who work hard in their own profession are really charming. The charm overflowed during the review and explanation! But in fact, his charm comes from the author's writing, and his literary knowledge is very solid. I can already imagine my gentle and wise elder sister whispering in my ear (puppy drooling jpg.) Overall, it is a very delicious article. Ordinary daily life can easily become like a running account, but the author grasps it very well and makes people read. It is especially delicious! It also made me eat the holy feast on tomatoes! It feels so good! The only shortcoming is that it is not enough to eat, and I still want to eat! (Pull up) (Shake vigorously) (Trying to shake out the saved manuscript)

The content is quite interesting so far, but the writing style is lacking and could be improved. By the way, the author went a bit too far in writing the point where the heroine is mediocre. It's really not obvious in the heartthrob aspect, it really feels like a passerby. If you watch too much, it will become a bit boring.

I feel that the villains in each world are more attractive than the protagonists. Ling Yuan in the first world was more impressive than Escape and Who. The article repeatedly writes about his confusion when he logged into the game later and stood in the game square. It was really touching [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] Wen Yining in the second world is even more like a fairy. Compared with him, the original male and female protagonists are just passers-by. God among gods [shy][shy]

This book is amazing and deserves to be seen. The writing is really very good. "When a writer picks up a pen, has he ever thought about whether the person he wrote about would ask him a question if he stood in front of him. "Why do you suffer for me?" " "I wanted to call you, but there was no sound when I opened my mouth, probably because the sycamore leaves fell too loudly. " Forgot to say. Still relatively good. Basically, there are no poems that disobey women. Although it is not female-oriented enough, it is still acceptable. At least a lot of gender-neutral words have been given back to women. The heroine has a strong sense of subjectivity and will not be forced. There are quite a few female roles. Maybe it touches on the theme of heartthrobs, with male and female roles split equally? The author's writing skills are very good, very good. Then the characters, characters and plots are all pretty well written. It's really a relatively high-quality quick travel article. Especially nowadays, there are many fast-paced games, which have a very strong fast-paced feeling, where you hit the counterattack in the face, and then fight with the protagonist or the original characters. This one is just a casual one, very warm, plain and beautiful. After I fell in love with it, I felt that the heroine was great and so cute. In each world, I interacted with some women, and those girls were so cute, I remember them all.

After watching the first world, I came here to review it. It was really well written, using a white description method but not boring at all. Being poisoned by short videos and impatient, I actually finished reading it word for word, and the text automatically entered my brain. The character of the heroine is very attractive to me. She is calm, does her own thing, and will not participate in unnecessary bad things. Each character is well drawn and has a unique personality and style of doing things. Maybe it's because the pace of real life is too fast, so I yearn for the slow-paced life in the article, especially the travel articles are so well written. Although they are all about small things in life, I can feel the smell of human fireworks from them. The first world is one that I will watch over and over again. In the end, I just want to say that the author is really awesome.

As I get better, I didn't like the world of e-sports when I first started watching it. I felt that the supporting characters in it all had evil intentions, especially the male characters, which was inexplicable. The second world is just so so. But the one about the Third World and the Republic of China was very good, and people who watched it felt soft. The writing of the next few worlds is not very good, there are always rats and mice mixed in, which is disgusting, and some supporting characters are particularly annoying, and they are not suitable for the protagonist to control, because generally the original heroine is more prominent than the heroine, and the relationship line is always determined to bring the two heroines together. Later, the supporting male and female protagonists also began to respond, and the soft-hearted god came.

To be honest, I felt very unexpected when I first read it, because I have always been a person who likes fast-paced things. What I wanted to read was vigorous love, vigorous slaps in the face, and vigorous stories. But after I really read it, I found that this book is very different from what I thought. The heroine is really a stranger. She has her own thoughts and her own life. It's not the kind of story where you just want to escape the protagonist and the original plot, but live out your own personality and look. This is really good. It's a kind of tranquil feeling of long flowing water, which makes people feel very peaceful and comfortable. It's not the common routine of heartthrob novels that torture themselves first and then feel great. It's really a unique style. I recommend everyone to check it out.

I have been having a hard time reading the text during this period, and I can see that the writing is good in many books, but my heart is a little restless, and I always feel that it is almost meaningless. I flipped over and accidentally opened this book and read the latest chapter in one breath. I am not bored anymore, and my mood is also lifted. I am also very surprised - maybe it is a little bit like the right time and the right place? ? When my mind was wandering, I came across a light and comfortable novel. The setting really hit my liking. The design of the character and the writing ideas won my heart. I felt that it met all my expectations. I even realized that this was what I wanted the moment it was satisfied. It is beautiful, upright, and occasionally has funny cute spots. It felt like I was born to DaDa. Moreover, the writing style is really superb, the words and sentences are as beautiful as prose, and they are like those refined words and sentences that are full of profound meaning and shocking power. Every world has its own brilliance, and it doesn't feel the same or going downhill at all. It's an amazing article! The reading experience is excellent. There are calm expectations, shocking touches, sudden laughter, and evil smiles from being cute. I am very grateful [love] [love] [love]

Such a cute heroine, she exudes charm so lightly ദ്ദി˶ｰ̀֊ｰ́ )✧This is the most cold-faced and cute protagonist I have ever tasted. The description of the character's appearance is also very moderate. I like the treatment of the first world. There is no direct conflict between the female characters and no "tearing the mistress" plot. There is only a crusade against pure evil♂, delicious and delicious - ̗̀ ෆ(˶'ᵕ'˶)ෆ ̖́-

It's beautiful. The heroine is a girl who looks like a snowflake. She looks cold and cold. In fact, she is as warm as a snowflake. She is a very gentle person on the inside. The appearance is one of the sources of the heroine's charm, but it is not the whole heroine. It's like being stuck in the house for a long time in winter and seeing a light snow falling outside. She goes out and reaches out to catch a snowflake and breathes a breath of fresh air. There is a faint gentleness.

The author of loko writes really well. This is not the first time I have read this type of article with a wooden heroine, but the content really shocked me for the first time. I have only read the Republic of China period. To be honest, I don't feel at peace after reading it. I often read novels to see the entanglement between the emotional lines of the characters in the book, but this small world made me think about the difficulties of women, the independence of women, and the goodness of women. Rather than giving them a home, Lin Su gave them a second chance to bloom in life. In this world, women are interdependent and help each other. This fearlessness of knowing that this era is unfair to women, so they must work together to block the storm from the outside world, made me understand the rise of women's power today, and women are good. What impressed me the most was that Lin Su did not verbally encourage women who had been trapped by the old society. Instead, they explored their own ways, grew up independently, and gave birth to hope in life. The writing style is great, and it is good at highlighting the character's activities and psychology from the side. The brushwork gives me a light feeling, like a layer of fog, soft but it can leave water vapor for me to think, making me understand that the original sentence really does not need to be composed of many gorgeous words. Sometimes a few words can convey a person's inner transformation process, which is awesome, like using the pomegranate tree as a guide to write about its growth and changes. Isn't this a turning point in the thoughts of women who were once confined in the backyard. All in all, the author of loko is awesome, the writing is awesome, and the ideas contained in it are even better.

The author's words are like wind and water, delicate and refreshing, and the heroine Lin Su in the author's works is also like this. Although the storyline is light, it makes people feel as comfortable as taking a sip of summer sparkling water! I particularly love the third world, the heroine and the various "little people" in it. The heroine contributes to make money to redeem the women who are in distress and cages in the hero's backyard. The hero finally realizes the difficulty of the women in the backyard, dismisses the backyard, and abolishes the death contract system. What is the most touching thing? It is the heroine who gives the women in the backyard a home where they can stay, teaches them literacy, so that they can publish books and contribute articles; she allows them to stand up, no longer the prison birds who will die of old age and tortured to death in the feudal backyard, but become self-reliant and self-reliant subjects, and finally obtain the double salvation of soul and body!

The writing is very interesting. The setting of the heroine is a real stranger, but the heroine herself is not basic, she is too charming [Send Heart][Send Heart] The heroine is greatly influenced by the first world. Her way of speaking and working skills have a touch of human-machine feeling, and she has a cold-faced and cute feeling. Moreover, other people like the heroine and will not embarrass her or force her to do anything. Very good, it means that the author himself is a person who respects others very much [send heart] [send heart] There are some sentences in it that show that the author is very educated, especially the explanation of the story in the second world, which is very profound [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] It looks good and I will read more [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] I look forward to the author's follow-up works

The description of daily life is very delicate, usually written in the form of a running account, but this author wrote it with a sense of tranquility and lingering in the years. When looking at the first world, the heroine's detached character is also a characteristic. She separates herself from the close connection with the world, becoming a passerby and a traveler. The task is not heavy, and it feels comfortable and natural to read. I have read a lot of articles about fast travel and have memorized the templates and formulas. The blandness of this book is just a cup of tea for impetuous life. Although there are some flaws (the plot sequence could be more coherent and the emotional changes more delicate, this is probably because there is no outline), the flaws are not concealed. As a newcomer, it is good to write the book like this. I hope that the author's book will be seen by more people. This is my first long comment, hope you don't mind. 🌸ღ(✞╹◡╹✞)ற🌸Come on

The description of the game scene is quite good, which is a bit unexpected, but I feel that the heroine is a bit too cold. At first, she was cold-faced and cute. I thought it would be the kind of feeling that others think the heroine is cold. After getting to know her, I found out that she is cute, but the heroine often replies with 111, which is interesting at first, but in reality, she often replies like this, which is really quite cold. Hey, when I saw the decline of the game guild, it reminded me of the Naruto OL game I used to play. At that time, a bunch of people joined the guild to fight in organizational battles. I miss it. It looked pretty good at first. The identities of the heroine and the brick-and-mortar Xiao Chen are also very different. But it's too cold. The heroine is not like a cold-faced cute girl, but more like a girl with three attributes in anime. I actually don't like this cold type who can't establish an intimate relationship with anyone. Give me five stars and stop chasing after you. It has nothing to do with the plot and the writing is just out of character.

I like the bland writing style at the moment, but one thing is not to use too many single arrows (there is no foreshadowing, but many people later expressed their love for the heroine, which feels a bit abrupt and embarrassing), but this style of writing and the character of the heroine are really attractive to me [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

I rarely see such good novels. After reading it, I feel that this novel is incomparable with other novels. It is neither impetuous nor impetuous, and the writing is very good, especially the chapter about the supernatural campus and Wen Yining's letter, which surprised me the most. This novel is really different. After reading it, I felt very healing, comfortable and calm. I have rarely liked a novel so much. The author's writing style is really, really, really good. Many novels nowadays have a very fast pace and unclear content. This book really made me feel very comfortable reading it. The character descriptions are also very delicate. There are many detailed descriptions and profile descriptions, plus environmental profiles, which make the characters distinct. The author's literary quality is also very high, especially in the chapter about the supernatural campus. You can clearly feel that the author is divine.

The heroine gives birth to her own consciousness like a spiritual creature from heaven and earth, slowly perceiving the world and feeling human beings. Each world is connected together and you can see the changes of the heroine. She follows the rules and does not ask too much or look too much. She gradually becomes curious. Then to the Republic of China chapter, this chapter breaks her rules. She knows that her power is small, but she still reaches out to help. Her behavior is like a butterfly flapping its wings, and the people around her gradually change. I like that the author didn't describe too much about the male supporting character, and I just have a crush on him honestly! ~ Very well written! I like this book very much. It would be great if there were extra chapters. Every chapter tickles my heart.

Very well written. The first two stories are too dull. Although the heroine is a passerby, she is the protagonist in this book. In the first two stories, the image and character traits of the heroine were too flat, and excessive downplaying made the text less readable. It was not until the third world that the coloring began. From the third world onwards, the heroine's character traits begin to become rich and vivid, the narrative begins to have ups and downs, and the author's writing power also begins to show. Very good word processing. I hope to see more exciting ideas from the author. Very good, very good, I seem to taste a hint of it. As the article progresses, Xiaolin's character continues to grow along with the writing style. From a dull narrative that detaches emotions from the world, it becomes more and more vibrant later on. Xiaolin also gradually becomes gentle, cunning and able to joke from the beginning, and begins to integrate more into the world instead of being a bystander. Is this the author's foreshadowing? Let me make a little guess. Author, write it quickly!

This novel is definitely one of the best books I have read this month. I feel that this is not like a novel, but like prose. The writing style is very good, especially the third world, which has the charm of the Republic of China. The writing style is smooth and flowing, and it moistens my heart inadvertently, and it is not like other novels. The heroine must have an official partner. The heroine behaves very indifferently to the protagonist in the book because she clearly knows his position and what he should do. The author's writing style is also slowly improving. I feel that the later world is getting better and better than the previous world. I really love the third world!

It's good to watch. The first world is light and can be watched. The story line of the supporting characters in the second world has begun to be complete. To be honest, there are too many emotional dramas. In the third world, quantitative changes lead to qualitative changes. The protagonist finally opens his eyes to see the world from an ordinary passerby NPC and becomes someone else's choice and someone else's protagonist. It's not love, it's nothing to do with romance, it's just that the moon will keep the memory of the sisters in the backyard. It feels like the flowers are blooming in spring and the snow melts into tea. Why is it tea? The previous foreshadowing just made me think that the protagonist is a cold-faced cute heartthrob, which is a bit unremarkable. In the future, it will just be snow melted into water. After one sip, I feel the coolness and it is gone. Now it has become a good tea that can be tasted again and again. The taste is not the best tea. At least I will not forget her taste.

After reading The Eighth World, I especially wanted to write a book review. I scrolled through the comments section again and saw many voices. I personally like this book very much. The author's writing style is relatively light, especially literary, and sometimes a little funny. It will not make readers too dull. Overall, it is light and eloquent. The description of heartthrobs is not very strong, which is different from most types of descriptions of heartthrobs, so many people don't like it that much, as you can see in the comments section. But it can indeed be seen that many people like the protagonist, not only for her appearance, but also for her personality. The protagonist's personality is really charming and her outlook is upright. And it can be seen that the author loves the protagonist very much. I even feel that the protagonist is used as a kind of carrier for the author. He does many things that the author wants to do. It is very beautiful. I sometimes do this when I write some short articles. This book is the first time I encountered the author's style when reading online articles. It has a smell of ink, which is very novel to me. If you read my book review, you can stop and read it. Maybe you will fall in love with this style.

The author writes very well, and the heroine of each short story is very personal. I would like to make a small suggestion here, that is, can the author add an extra chapter to each short story? I feel that each short story has a beginning and no end. I want to know whether the heroine left directly or whether she is in this world as a clone or the main body is always in this world. I also want to see everyone's ending. I hope the author can read my comment. Thank you.

A particularly good author. There is no staring or vulgar plots specially described to stimulate emotions. Both the writing style and the conception are very good. Creation is a process of exposing the soul. The author must be a compassionate and noble person. I am very happy to read this work and will always support the author.

It's a very light feeling, like the fog before the sun rises in the morning. It's relatively daily, but I quite like this feeling, and the author's writing is also online. As far as I can see, there are no degrading plots or insulting words about women. The heroine is kind but has a bottom line. She will not meddle in other people's affairs and concentrate on running her own life. I feel confused every day, but very smart.

The writing is very good, Lin Su is a plain person, and the plot seems to be written by Lin Su himself. The plainness is not bad, but it can well reflect the feeling that the protagonist does not care about anything except living. In fact, it is difficult for me to do this, so I like to write plans, so that I rarely get anxious. Did the author also write a section on anti-AI? Just dig there. Other characters' love for Lin Su is reserved, restrained, or they don't dare. The most straightforward one now is Professor Wen. No one is purely bad, they have both good and bad aspects, which is very consistent with this kind of literature. Why not five stars? Because Lin Su doesn't want to know, but I do! [Pouts]

This book was interesting at first glance, but I felt a little bored after reading the first world. At that time, I thought that I might not be able to read this book for much longer. Until the third world, the protagonist in the first two worlds was the main character and didn't care about participating. But in the third world, when she redeemed the heroine of the world and gave the people in the hospital a place to stay, I felt the vitality from the protagonist. I think this is a big change for the protagonist in this book. I think each world after this is more beautiful than the other. The author's writing style has also changed from a simple line drawing to a more advanced line drawing. I can clearly feel the progress. The priorities are appropriate and the plot is compact. Each world is more beautiful than the other. You really have to stick to the end to truly discover the beauty of this book! Be sure to give this book a try. Besides, Lin Su, you are so cute and handsome. Please give the author more updates.

It's so beautiful. Although the description is light, the words are very powerful and emotional. The heroine is so cute, so cute, and I love her. This is the first time I saw this style of writing in Kuaishuan, I really like it [Adoration]

It's very well written. It's the kind of story I like about passers-by. It's light but the years are quiet. It's very high-level from the third story on. I like it very much. I clicked on the author's details to read other novels by the author, but I found this one, but I feel that the writing is getting better and better. I hope the author will work hard!