[Pure yuri + supernatural ghost-hunting + past lives and present + love and hate + younger green-tea apprentice + sick, twisted confinement + one-on-one + both untouched
The aloof, disciplined light of the Daoist sect VS her red-clad vengeful ghost apprentice, who pretends to be blind and plays for sympathy
Song Shuangyin, a cool and composed exorcist, has been running into ghosts with alarming frequency lately.
And not just any ghost: a seductive spirit who haunts her only in her dreams, doing unspeakable things to her.
By day, she is the revered exorcist who slays demons and vanquishes evil, relentlessly strict with the frail, helpless blind apprentice at her side.
“You can’t even draw a single talisman properly. What good is crying? Keep practicing.”
Her little apprentice’s eyes redden as she clutches Song Shuangyin’s clothes and trembles.
At night, however, Song Shuangyin finds herself blindfolded and chained to the ancestral altar, unable to move.
Then one day, her exorcist’s sword knocks the mask from the red-clad vengeful ghost.
The face beneath it is exactly the same as that of her little apprentice, who does nothing all day but cling to her leg and cry!
“Shizun, when you scold me during the day, why doesn’t your heart race this fast?”
“The talismans you draw to ward off evil are so powerful, Shizun. Too bad… they can’t suppress my improper desires for you.”
“If you look at someone else with those icy eyes again, I’ll dig them out and keep them in my shrine. How does that sound?”
It's quite good-looking, a beautiful master who cultivates the Supreme Being ruthlessly and forgets his love. 👍
Good-looking, love-making, ruthless master Obviously the first chapter was well written, but after 55 chapters, the sect abandoned the heroine, and then the ghost wife rescued the heroine. After waking up, she negotiated terms with her wife for that great man's sect. It was as if the previous chapters suddenly lost their memory. These few chapters feel like the AI mixed writing is particularly poisonous. I feel disappointed 🥺 with the author and the world view is also written. I'm not sure. I thought it was ancient times at first, or thought it was the world of immortality, but then a helicopter exploded and it turned into modern times. This is not the main thing. The main thing is that the great sect treated the protagonist like this. The protagonist also negotiated terms with the protagonist's wife for this great man's sect, saying that these thousands of disciples are innocent. It really poisoned me.
This book has advantages and disadvantages (evaluate it objectively) Disadvantages: 1. It's a bit hard to understand. Is it ancient or modern? Some of the content here is modern and some is ancient. 2. There is also a bit of repetitive description. Advantages: 1. Well, the previous plot is still okay 2. Beautiful writing style, vivid and expressive
It looks good. There are no major problems at the moment. The subtle logic needs to be improved. I will pay more attention to it later and it will be perfect. People who watch the settings are quite happy 🍉
Give me a little support and tie up with 38 chapters. The problem is not that big, come on 🤭
I personally like this kind of double girl very much
Very good, more than 30 chapters so far, no big problems