The Flower of Gaoling Was Kissed to the Point of Silence by a Dark and Yandere Girl

It's quite good-looking, a beautiful master who cultivates the Supreme Being ruthlessly and forgets his love. [Praise]

Good-looking, love-making, ruthless master Obviously the first chapter was well written, but after 55 chapters, the sect abandoned the heroine, and then the ghost wife rescued the heroine. After waking up, she negotiated terms with her wife for that great man's sect. It was as if the previous chapters suddenly lost their memory. These few chapters feel like the AI mixed writing is particularly poisonous. I feel disappointed [grieved] with the author and the world view is also written. I'm not sure. I thought it was ancient times at first, or thought it was the world of immortality, but then a helicopter exploded and it turned into modern times. This is not the main thing. The main thing is that the great sect treated the protagonist like this. The protagonist also negotiated terms with the protagonist's wife for this great man's sect, saying that these thousands of disciples are innocent. It really poisoned me.

This book has advantages and disadvantages (evaluate it objectively) Disadvantages: 1. It's a bit hard to understand. Is it ancient or modern? Some of the content here is modern and some is ancient. 2. There is also a bit of repetitive description. Advantages: 1. Well, the previous plot is still okay 2. Beautiful writing style, vivid and expressive

It looks good. There are no major problems at the moment. The subtle logic needs to be improved. I will pay more attention to it later and it will be perfect. People who watch the settings are quite happy [eating melon]

Give me a little support and tie up with 38 chapters. The problem is not that big, come on [laughing]

Very good, more than 30 chapters so far, no big problems

I personally like this kind of double girl very much