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I read Chapter 21, which is very detailed, but why is the plot of rescuing Li with Zhao not described in detail? It jumps directly to bringing him back to the sect. After reading the author, I found that several books have been on the recommendation list, but they have been discontinued. I hope the author can work hard.
It is a genre of classical fantasy + multiple female protagonists. The writing is good, the plot is smooth and vivid, the protagonist is a moral type, and the emotional line and the plot of cultivating immortality are in the right proportion. I would like to call it the fairy grass of classical fantasy novels.
The most comfortable thing about this book is that you don't write about useless things endlessly like other novels. The main plot is very clear, and everything that has nothing to do with the main plot is dealt with in one stroke without procrastination. Therefore, even if you write a lot of psychological descriptions, the pace does not seem slow.
The pace is not sluggish at all, and there is no sense of sluggishness when reading the whole story, as if it is just casual and casual. There is no unnecessary redundant narration, and the necessary plot should be there, so it is there. There is a degree of relaxation in advance and retreat, and the details are appropriate.
Although the name is a bit strange, the content is very good. It has only been updated to more than 40 chapters now. I dare not say what will happen in the future, but at least it seems that there is nothing poisonous at present, and it can be taken in at a glance.
Ernie, write novels for the rest of your life!
The plot written by the author is really good [laughing] It's very good (✪▽✪) but I feel that sometimes the lines are too middle-of-the-road [Thinking]
Don't have a taste
Not bad, very pretty
Classical fantasy ok
.....
I feel good looking at it
Are there any other books of the same type?
Not bad, come on
It's okay, I don't know if it will be sent
Promise me and keep writing, okay?
It's a great book, but I feel like I was put off by the title.
A bit of a literary youth, but quite interesting [I learned it]
You see, (*Ӧ)σ is beating him up~ (TロT)σ Don't leave after school!
It's pretty good, but I feel that there is very little daily interaction between the heroines, especially Li Gaoyao, and there is a feeling of uneven distribution.
It's very strong, I hope the author will stick with it! ! !
It feels a bit like a light novel, a very good novel
The writing is so good. I have followed the author for several books. I hope I can write it to the end this time!
It's very delicate. I haven't read such a smooth book in a long time.
Very pretty! There are no complicated words and sentences, it looks a bit fresh, and occasionally mixed with a little humor. Please let more people read this book and encourage the author! Not enough to eat at all! ! [Full]
The language is simple, I like the character development of the protagonist better, the writing style is more delicate, and the overall plot line is not too aggressive.
I think it's very well written
It's nice to read, the writing is very delicate, and the story is okay
I read Chapter 21, which is very detailed, but why is the plot of rescuing Li with Zhao not described in detail? It jumps directly to bringing him back to the sect. After reading the author, I found that several books have been on the recommendation list, but they have been discontinued. I hope the author can work hard.
It is a genre of classical fantasy + multiple female protagonists. The writing is good, the plot is smooth and vivid, the protagonist is a moral type, and the emotional line and the plot of cultivating immortality are in the right proportion. I would like to call it the fairy grass of classical fantasy novels.
The most comfortable thing about this book is that you don't write about useless things endlessly like other novels. The main plot is very clear, and everything that has nothing to do with the main plot is dealt with in one stroke without procrastination. Therefore, even if you write a lot of psychological descriptions, the pace does not seem slow.
The pace is not sluggish at all, and there is no sense of sluggishness when reading the whole story, as if it is just casual and casual. There is no unnecessary redundant narration, and the necessary plot should be there, so it is there. There is a degree of relaxation in advance and retreat, and the details are appropriate.
Although the name is a bit strange, the content is very good. It has only been updated to more than 40 chapters now. I dare not say what will happen in the future, but at least it seems that there is nothing poisonous at present, and it can be taken in at a glance.
Ernie, write novels for the rest of your life!
The plot written by the author is really good [laughing] It's very good (✪▽✪) but I feel that sometimes the lines are too middle-of-the-road [Thinking]
Don't have a taste
Not bad, very pretty
Classical fantasy ok .....
I feel good looking at it
Are there any other books of the same type?
Not bad, come on
It's okay, I don't know if it will be sent
Promise me and keep writing, okay?
It's a great book, but I feel like I was put off by the title.
A bit of a literary youth, but quite interesting [I learned it]
You see, (*Ӧ)σ is beating him up~ (TロT)σ Don't leave after school!
It's pretty good, but I feel that there is very little daily interaction between the heroines, especially Li Gaoyao, and there is a feeling of uneven distribution.
It's very strong, I hope the author will stick with it! ! !
It feels a bit like a light novel, a very good novel
The writing is so good. I have followed the author for several books. I hope I can write it to the end this time!
It's very delicate. I haven't read such a smooth book in a long time.
Very pretty! There are no complicated words and sentences, it looks a bit fresh, and occasionally mixed with a little humor. Please let more people read this book and encourage the author! Not enough to eat at all! ! [Full]
The language is simple, I like the character development of the protagonist better, the writing style is more delicate, and the overall plot line is not too aggressive.
I think it's very well written
It's nice to read, the writing is very delicate, and the story is okay