The Black Robes: from Clerk of Vitrum to the Star-Shattered Emperor

Love this track. How can I put it, I see the people of the motherland going crazy a lot, and the time-travelers always targeting Walter a lot, and I'm tired of seeing it. This book gave me a novel feeling, that is, the protagonist changes from weak to strong. Slowly penetrate, slowly taking Walter into his own hands. The people of the motherland are not killed directly or brutally targeted, but tamed. A new track. There are no big flaws so far, so I'll give it five stars.

This book is really novel. I'm tired of those novels that always treat Azu as a roadside kick. This book treats the people of the motherland as brothers. It's really good. After all, who is reading the black robe novel is not for Azu. I hope it can continue to keep it up and don't kill Azu again in the end. I think it's great to be able to take Azu through time together. I can strengthen Azu. The characters are all online, the writing is smooth, and it is an excellent source of information.

It's rare that Black Robe has good writing, and the protagonist's ability can be well integrated into Black Robe's worldview. How about the character creation? Although it is already good, it always feels a little less spiritual. There are no bugs in other settings. I look forward to updates [Like]

It seems pretty good so far. Although I haven't read The Black Robe Picket, I have read a lot of related novels. The protagonist of this book has a relatively likable personality. He is a normal person, righteous but not a virgin, and he kills evil people when they should. There are no flaws in the plot. Overall, it seems to be quite smooth. There is nothing particularly bloody or brain-dead in the plot. The supporting characters are more three-dimensional, unlike the supporting characters in some novels, which are empty, nihilistic, and have no memorable characteristics. There are good and bad supporting characters in writing fan fiction. The good thing is that readers have the first impression, but the one that is most likely to cause outrage is the character design. The author of this book handles it very well. The personality changes of the original characters are traceable and reasonable. To sum up, this is a very relaxing novel. The protagonist does not have any bitterness or hatred, nor does he encounter any brain-burning conspiracies. It is an excellent and refreshing novel.

I have read a lot of fan fiction and I have a very high opinion of this book: the character design is reasonable, the plot is natural and smooth, and the writing style is appropriate and not fancy (do you understand the value of this kind of evaluation on fan fiction)? It may be a poisonous point for some people: according to the content I have read so far, it should have multiple female protagonists and a system, but I don't care about this aspect, so my overall rating is still 4.5 To 5 stars. There is no rating for this book yet. I hope that if it does not collapse in the future, the rating will be between 7.5 And 9.0. Expectations and questions about updated content: the cliché of more daily updates and the expectation that there will be no sudden changes to the whole life. Nowadays, stable authors are really valuable. In terms of questions, will there be more wearers of Zongmanliu? I feel that the current increase in combat power is difficult to sustain in the black robe, and what are the plans for other worlds?

It's really good. The characters in the Black Robe Pickets fanfiction are not OOC, and it's very relaxing and not bitter. The main point is that the protagonist is really super strong and not overwhelming at all. It's a great book.

It's quite fun. I hope I don't keep talking about Azu like other novels. The motherland is quite fun, and he is also an unlucky guy. It would be nice to be that kind of enemy + friend, a duo who are funny and happy every day.

There are indeed shortcomings, but they are not boring hydrology. The key is to see what your expectations are. If you come to see the battle as fun, then you will be disappointed. The protagonist is still in the development stage. Although he is not a pure good person, he still has basic morals and does not have my tendency not to eat beef. I think it's possible because I regard him as a true second creation, with an authentic world of low quality per capita and a familiar Thunder language system. It's quite fun to watch. After running out of ideas, I started copying and changing maps, stacking combat power, and finding more women. The fun was gone and the battles were no longer enjoyable.

Okay, so far it seems that he is invincible. If there is no problem in terms of combat power, it will be okay. After all, I don't expect it to be okay for a Vitrumite who is in his teens and has not experienced any cruel battles.

It's well written, but the biggest problem is that there are traces of AI assistance.

I read other comments saying that the combat power is suppressed, but I don't think it's too much. The combat power transitions smoothly from competing with Azu to becoming the father of a native of the motherland. As long as the relationship between the characters is not too broken, he can do whatever he wants.

Let's put it this way, this is one of the rare Black Robe Picket fan novels that I can read from the beginning to the latest chapter in one go. The role of the protagonist is really novel. He is not like other travelers who traveled to the world of black robe pickets, eager to confront the people of the motherland. He helps the people of the motherland analyze the current situation, and uses half-truth and half-false methods to become brothers with the people of the motherland, or even a brother-brother type of character. This is really interesting to watch. It is much more interesting than direct force crushing. You can fill in the values ​​of combat power and fighting, and edit the actions as you like, but the language and negotiation skills are what the author needs to spend time to write. This kind of thing is much more advanced than those who just fight against the sky and the earth at every turn. There is a bit of pressure on combat effectiveness in the front, but I think you can actually ignore this, because basically you will become the strongest in the world within a week.

In my opinion, this is the best fanfic of Black Robe Pickets. Although the protagonist becomes invincible very quickly, it also describes a lot of other aspects, because it can be seen that the protagonist just wants to have fun a lot of the time. Unlike other fanfics where he is clearly invincible and still expresses the plots of other characters by overpowering his combat power or various accidents. For this reason alone, I think this is the best fanfic.

It's good-looking, the mid-opening is high, it's really worth watching [Thinking] It seems that it has overwhelming power in the early stage, but in fact, it will be possible to use Azu as a cup after ten or twenty chapters.

I enjoyed reading it, not feeling aggrieved, and it was very powerful, but I feel that there is only so much I can write about in the world of black robes. It would be a pity not to turn around for such an invincible character. I wonder why there are always people who talk about irrelevant issues and criticize them without writing a better one. They also use the euphemistic name of Sun Shen Nong. Good point. Generally speaking, it's normal to say that Shennong is a giant poisoner, right? If you can't stand it anymore, just leave on your own. Why do you have to force me to do it? Thank you for testing the poison and sitting at the same table. Believe what others say. I don't know if they are exaggerated. The verification period and recommendation period should not be changed casually. It will affect the platform's promotion. It will take a while for the data to be stable.

The writing is pretty good. Compared to Destroyer and Total Darkness, I think Controller is better. But the combat power should be reduced. There is a process that starts slowly from level 1-3, otherwise it will be too short and not enough to read. Later, you can only take the path of traveling through other universes. But this ability is also the strongest in the Marvel Universe. It will be boring to watch later.

Yes, it gets more and more exciting later on, and the wildness does not overwhelm the combat power. In less than ten chapters after the beginning, I started a five-and-a-half fight with Azu, and forty chapters were faster than the speed of light. And the writing is really cool, this plot. Tomato is a breath of fresh air now that all kinds of shark-armed AI articles are flying around. It's rare that he is not a fan of Ai in black robes. I hope to educate Azu hard, and I can try to strengthen it later.

The next step is to test how to control the combat power. Readers who are accustomed to reading cool articles will not like it if they are too hard pressed. However, writing like this will not last long and can only be happy for a while. Even if there is some coolness later, it will not have much effect.

Come on, it's beautiful. I hope everything has a happy ending. Come on, the author.

It's not bad. In terms of combat power, it's actually not bad. I became invincible very quickly. I didn't suffer from any injuries. It's just that it feels a little better. Where can I go after that?

Yes, it is a relatively correct template in the minds of many people. The most important thing is that it is not promiscuous. That kind of addiction is a bonus in novels. Men in the harem do not involve pornography.

It's great. This is the only book on Tomato where people are normal in the world of black robe pickets, but it is still a little bit different. I don't know how the author will deal with it. For example, the standing power is too strong. I don't know if other worlds will be introduced later, but this method is very unpleasant.

This book is not bad. It is not targeted at the people of the motherland like other books, but it is guided in a relatively objective way, which is already commendable. Azu is an evil person, but all this stems from the lack of correct guidance, his lack of love in his heart and the Walter Group. I always think that if Azu had been guided by superhuman parents since he was a child, he would have been more like superman than superman.

I think the writing is pretty good, but I don't know why the rating is so low.

Starlight... Three Links... Maeve... Well... It's better to create a female character of your own. Anyway, none of the black robes are clean, and the European and American ones are pretty much the same.

Hurry up and update, there are only more than 40 chapters and I can't bear to read it [smile]

This is a rare book that I found quite good, especially because Azu was like a child and had the protagonist fool him. It was so fun [laughing] [laughing] Finally, I hope the author can work harder and update it so that the eunuch doesn't end up unfinished.

I think it's pretty good-looking, but generally speaking, it's not Heipaowen, it's Zhu Tianwen. I saw the latest chapter and there are quite a lot of jokes about the protagonist's language system. The only shortcoming of Thunder is that the protagonist's character is good and bad. Now the goal is to unify the multiverse.

5 Stars, absolutely 5 stars. There's always something new to do with tomatoes. Train the people of the motherland and have fun.

This is the protagonist who best fits my imagination of a native of the motherland. The writing is so in line with my taste, 👍, come on