Single female protagonist, micro system, daily orientation, growth flow
Do you think that after people leave, they start a new journey or disappear? At the last moment, Mo Fan saw a beam of white light. It's the truck's headlight.
Reader comments
OK, I started reading [Chigua] after I had held it in for about 100,000 words. The writing in the early stage was quite sweet and very good, and I can accept the slight differences.
[Eating melon] In the middle period, a poisonous point came to me, which was the first important dungeon that all the Hermione heroines must experience, the troll attack. The way the author writes this is really speechless. You can write a script to kill Ron, who is full of splendens. Then how come an adult with outstanding talent, Holy Light talent, and IQ of 30 can't deal with a troll? To be honest, this writing method is really no different from the original work "Ron used the levitating spell to kill the giant monster's head"
[Chigua] There are also hidden plots throughout the whole story. Why do I feel so AI? If it's not AI, then you think I'm wrong.
Another missing part of the plot is the mirror. The mirror that reveals inner desires is not written. Although everyone knows about the invisibility cloak, the plot of these two items still needs to be written to some extent. [Eat melon]
There is another poisonous point, that is, you know that the troll is not dead but you still don't touch it? Real time traveler? Why wouldn't such a highly talented person learn all kinds of practical magic spells from the original world, such as being torn apart, shattered to pieces, thunderbolt explosions, and even transformation spells? In comparison, Holy Light Magic is really not as cost-effective as Original World Magic in the early stage.
There are more or less other minor problems that I won't list one by one. For example, if there are 4 people in front and 5 people behind, this situation will happen twice.
To sum up, there are some poisonous points, different details, wrong names, etc. It's really not good at the moment. I'll give it three points. Let's see what happens next
Emotions come naturally and is written very delicately! The plot is not bad!
OK, I started reading [Chigua] after I had held it in for about 100,000 words. The writing in the early stage was quite sweet and very good, and I can accept the slight differences. [Eating melon] In the middle period, a poisonous point came to me, which was the first important dungeon that all the Hermione heroines must experience, the troll attack. The way the author writes this is really speechless. You can write a script to kill Ron, who is full of splendens. Then how come an adult with outstanding talent, Holy Light talent, and IQ of 30 can't deal with a troll? To be honest, this writing method is really no different from the original work "Ron used the levitating spell to kill the giant monster's head" [Chigua] There are also hidden plots throughout the whole story. Why do I feel so AI? If it's not AI, then you think I'm wrong. Another missing part of the plot is the mirror. The mirror that reveals inner desires is not written. Although everyone knows about the invisibility cloak, the plot of these two items still needs to be written to some extent. [Eat melon] There is another poisonous point, that is, you know that the troll is not dead but you still don't touch it? Real time traveler? Why wouldn't such a highly talented person learn all kinds of practical magic spells from the original world, such as being torn apart, shattered to pieces, thunderbolt explosions, and even transformation spells? In comparison, Holy Light Magic is really not as cost-effective as Original World Magic in the early stage. There are more or less other minor problems that I won't list one by one. For example, if there are 4 people in front and 5 people behind, this situation will happen twice. To sum up, there are some poisonous points, different details, wrong names, etc. It's really not good at the moment. I'll give it three points. Let's see what happens next
Emotions come naturally and is written very delicately! The plot is not bad!