Hogwarts: Is Hermione My Childhood Friend?

OK, I started reading it again after holding back about 100,000 words🍉. The writing in the early stage is quite sweet and very good. There are some differences that are acceptable. 🍉At the mid-term, a poisonous point came to me, which was the first important dungeon that every Hermione heroine must experience, the troll attack. The way the author writes this is really speechless. You can write a script to kill Ron, who is full of splendens. Then how come an adult with outstanding talent, Holy Light talent, and IQ of 30 can't deal with a troll? To be honest, this writing method is really no different from the original work "Ron used the levitating spell to kill the giant monster's head" 🍉There are also hidden plots throughout the whole story. Why do I feel so AI? If it's not AI, think I'm wrong. Another missing part of the plot is the mirror. The mirror that reveals inner desires is not written. Although everyone knows about the invisibility cloak, the plot of these two items still needs to be written to some extent. 🍉 There is another poisonous point, that is, you know that the troll is not dead but you still don't touch it? Real time traveler? Why wouldn't a person with such a high talent learn all kinds of practical magic spells from the original world, such as being torn apart, shattered to pieces, thunderbolt explosions, and even transformation spells? In comparison, Holy Light Magic is really not as cost-effective as Original World Magic in the early stage. There are more or less other minor problems that I won't list one by one. For example, when it comes to the number of people, there are 4 people in front and 5 people behind. This happens twice🍉🍉 To sum up, there are poisonous points, different details, wrong names, etc. It's really not good at the moment. I'll give it three points. Let's see what happens next

Emotions come naturally and is written very delicately! The plot is not bad!