I Drew an Entry in Warhammer, and the Emperor Stood Up?

Yay! Beautifully written! Although it is a bit idealistic, Warhammer is already a cesspool of despair, and there is no need to engage in plots that abuse the main character. So it's pretty good to watch as it is now. The protagonist is very interesting, and the character description is also very good. The supporting characters also fit the setting without being too deviant. The characters of the supporting characters have their own characteristics. It's well written. At least it's very good so far! [Please update] I beg you not to write romance novels in Warhammer! I have been poisoned to the point of conditioned reflex, and when I saw the Battle Sister, I thought for a moment whether I was going to have another ambiguous relationship, or maybe the heroine? Harem? Is it so classic? Later I felt relieved, it was a comrade, [covering face] breathed a sigh of relief! Can the Warhammer novel just write down the career lines of defeating alien demons, etc., And bringing humanity glory again? If I want to read romance, why don't I read the ancient and modern sweet novels [crying]. Don't make any feminine characters, the evil god has become cute, just write a Warhammer article as normal!

The headline in the comment section turned out to be Tzeentch's instigation, but loyalty! ! ! The writing is very delicate, and the protagonist seems like a normal time traveler. Not only does it immediately integrate the darkness of Warhammer, but the cesspools complained about in other books will also have vitality and tenderness. Yunzhui is very comfortable to read.

Warhammer's big stage, don't come here. The protagonist is a normal person, with sincere feelings, affection and justice, which fits my fantasy of what ordinary people with big tricks would do after traveling to Warhammer. I just love watching such cheerful and passionate episodes. Plus, I love the little blueberries! I'm convinced. How many of Tomato's Warhammer novels are good? If you don't smell this or that every day, what's going on? The purpose of fan creation is to let a hundred flowers bloom. If everything is consistent with the official, then there is no point in writing. It's because the official version is dark that I want to adjust it to a sunny, cheerful, lively and cute version. Also, what do the male protagonist's women's chirping comments mean? Have you ever been to college? Have you ever heard of something so outrageous? What about the guy next door to me who slaps his girlfriend in the front and slaps him seven times back, then buries his head in the girl's arms and cries for forgiveness, buddy? [Smile]

It's so pretty🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘Yes God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It makes me realize that God does exist, I am so cute that I cry From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression 😋 is the alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 So cute that tears flow out of the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River 😈 It sounds so good 🥰 God is my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😙 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, which made me realize that God does exist. I was heard and the tears will not stop. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water.

It's a very interesting article, and the characters so far have been created reasonably and normally. Taking into account the emotional delicacy of the female channel and the excitement of the male channel, as someone who is completely too lazy to remember foreign names (I really can't remember this thing, I scored 32 in high school English, sorry), I can remember all the characters in the plot. This is an article that can be read by normal people, regardless of whether they are men or women. (It means you won't be offended. Everyone has different preferences, so I can't guarantee that everyone will like it) It's not the kind of fun combat (so far?), And the protagonist's abilities are mostly auxiliary. The character of the protagonist is very lovable. The old man saw loving kindness, the children saw respect and love, the men saw fatherly love, the women saw maternal love, and the dogs all wagged their tails (bushi). You can feel that the protagonist is a student, a teenager, a person who needs to grow up and can grow up, the kind that makes people feel a hint of father/mother love. I like that the atmosphere is not particularly depressing (the original work was very depressing, and I personally just want to relax a bit 😌), it has a little bit of humor and jokes (not bad ones), and it occasionally makes people sad and happy, this one is good to watch. It's just a bit short🥲

Quite an interesting perspective. Others' Warhammer is about exciting battles and large battlefields. What you write is about survival in the wilderness from a personal perspective, covering everything from drinking water to turning on a light. The psychological description of the characters is very detailed. From being a cultist to walking at night, you have to be afraid of everything you encounter, and then talk nonsense with the system, and then look at the emperor standing up in the lottery, and then you can comfort yourself and continue to cover yourself with a quilt under the bridge. [Laughing and crying]

This is so beautiful. Linn is really a good boy. He is the most well-behaved child in the past among other Warhammer novels I have read. Because I have seen some Warhammer fans describe women in aspects that are really no different from those ancient male videos, but this one does not describe a person in a normal way. I saw that there is a battle nun. My heart skipped a beat, and then I started to wonder if I was going to fall in love, start a harem, etc., Which is totally inappropriate in Warhammer. It turned out that this child really regarded the Battle Sisters as brothers and sisters/family members. This child was so good, so successful, and I was so excited. Even when facing my idol Blood Angel, it was hilarious and adorable.

ˏ₍•ɞ•₎ˎAncient hand rubbing without AI! The plot and setting are very attractive ∠(°ゝ°) It can be seen that the author carefully understands the setting of the original work! (Yun Zhui can also be read with confidence! The author has an introduction) The only fan who has written book reviews and ratings, the author must be crazy to update ninety chapters a day (no) The character of the protagonist is very good₍₍ ◟(∗˙ ꒵ ˙∗)◞ ₎₎I really like this kind of protagonist with upright views! The lack of cp is also a bonus for me. Can a three-person team be cb for life? (Telenius, we miss you (•̩̩̩̩＿•̩̩̩̩)) ٩꒰ ⍢ ꒱۶⁼3 Xiaolin must defeat Chaos/Heresy with his friends and draw the throne to liberate him and become the emperor✌ Big daddy. It's also fun to get along with the system! Looking forward to the next card drawing (*^o^*) The author will bring up the combat skills for me to taste (˵˚ ω ˚˵) (screen front squat update ing... What is there to earn from a female channel and a male channel? If you don't like the protagonist's character, don't read it. What is the fuss about in this comment section? It's not like Tomato doesn't have other books. The author can create any kind of protagonist he wants. What does the quality of the book's content have to do with the female-male version? Is one of them necessarily better?

Many Warhammer fans are inevitably focused on writing about the darkness of this world. I understand that this is the nature of this worldview and something that cannot be avoided, but this book also writes about the brilliance of humanity in this cruel world in a seemingly humorous atmosphere, making people unable to help but get excited. Oh my God! That's what I want to see. And I really like the rhythm of this book. Before I finish laughing at one point, the next one comes. I couldn't stop reading this book. It has just the right amount of laughs and the protagonist is an optimistic big dog (currently still looking optimistic and cute like a normal person). I like it.

After reading so many AI Warhammer articles, I finally got the money [angry] Long live the hand rub! Although it is set in the Warhammer cesspit, the overall story is full of laughter and tears. Goldfinger is quite fun (?). The protagonist Lin En is very lovable and has the feeling of a cute and passionate young man [Sending Hearts] The author has a strong sense of being and can often be found in the comment area (◍ ´꒳` ◍) I've been chasing it for half a year, and now I think of writing a review. I give you five stars [love] As for the guy who gave low stars in the comment section, every one of his novels is rated low... [Awkward laugh] I wonder if the author would write a high-quality novel without breaking the law [face covering] Not enough, not enough at all! Centaur, Xiu Lun Shi, Zero Hour, Times Reader Thinking about the boxing, thoughts are like a spring!👊😭👊 Nian Zhongjian! Never forget it!🗡😭🗡 Author's hand! Life after life!✋😭🤚 Thirty years of solitude, first read! 😡 The most unforgettable gift, the author's new work!😍 The canonization of the foreign persimmon, the reader's war commander!🤤 The author loves me, I love the author! 🤪 Impossible, how could the author only update two chapters? Absolutely impossible! Gua—Author, I really love you so much—woo woo—wow croak—ah ah—hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee! Let the author's updates burn! 👿

It's a book that's very friendly to people who haven't read it. I actually didn't want to review it at first, but after reading some of the reviews that mentioned things like "mother"... I felt it was a bit outrageous. What exactly is a mother? Could it be said that when encountering difficulties, one cannot even complain? When you encounter pain, can't you say you are not sad at all? Life suddenly turned a corner and suddenly entered a difficult situation. It is normal to feel confused about it. Even soldiers cry sometimes. Do you have to be ruthless, or do you have to be cool and handsome to be unfeminine? That's it. You need to cry when the child is born. All the men in the world are sissies. The protagonist is actually a very tough person, has his own ideas, does not follow the crowd, and does not go to extremes. An ordinary person has the courage to do these things, to survive here hard, and to try to save his own regrets. It is great. You cannot ask an ordinary college student to suddenly become such a person. The protagonist is just an ordinary person, an ordinary person who retains his kindness, and is an ordinary person psychologically. I think this is great.

Warhammer's big stage, don't come here. The protagonist is a normal person, with sincere feelings, affection and justice, which fits my fantasy of what ordinary people with big tricks would do after traveling to Warhammer. I just love watching such cheerful and passionate episodes. Plus, I love the little blueberries!

Needless to say, it's good-looking. It's a masterpiece. The protagonist has a very good character, unlike Long Aotian, who is a loser. There are no clichéd plots or vulgar plots in the plot. Very... No! It is highly recommended!

The writing is very clear, and various settings are explained in detail in the paragraphs or essays. It is very friendly to outsiders with zero basic experience, and the writing style is very good. I feel that I can generally understand it even without reading the setting introduction. I have read a few books that also use Warhammer as the world view. (I may not be considered an outsider, but I am not that insider. I only understand the general background. For example, there are four hawkers and the emperor. The emperor has a certain number of sons and some of them rebelled. It is unclear who rebelled and why. Chu) feels that the biggest feature of this book is that it is not as dark and dull as similar books or eager to show what a cesspool this world view is. Instead, it strives to express human struggle and the glorious things of humanity displayed in the struggle, such as sacrifice, hope, and passing on the fire. (Spoiler alert) Terenius really cried when he was sacrificed, Sangliese's babies are not cowards! The world is indeed in tatters, but there are always people working hard to mend it, using their bodies as needles and threads. I think it's a bit funny that this is the score for the female channel's writing that came out of nowhere. First of all, just because you don't like to see this kind of style doesn't mean that this style has no audience. If you don't like it, exit politely with the arrow in the upper left corner. Secondly, if you look at this book and try your best to find faults, you can only find "this is the way a female channel is written" and "how can a male channel be written by a female channel?" This kind of funny point shows that the author really writes well. The writing style is enough to support such a hellish world view, and it can also show the brilliance of human nature well. The plot setting is also logical and reasonable, and not a single laugh is forced in for the sake of fun. Let me just say one thing: the nun sister was not used for sexual favors, and certain places were not deliberately described. She is a staunch warrior. Being female is just her gender, not a reason to brush aside the story as some people expect. She was well raised by the author, and I think this alone surpasses most books of the same type. So much so that you can't find any serious arguments to give this book a low score. Finally, I hope the author will not be affected and will add more updates!

Appreciating period milk is cuter than the main character, and the enemy who can bite the empire is even cuter among the cutest. There is zero dazzling repression, the characters are sincere, and the author is very attentive. I feel that even if there is a love line, it will be very real and cute. If there is no cp, it will be even better. Come on, author, look forward to it!

Right, right, that's it. We must keep our faith and keep the glory of mankind forever. Wuwuwu [crying] I remembered that I am not a shady group. What I want to see is this kind of everyone working hard for a unified belief and goal. There are no false and empty narrative sacrifices. Every life is worth it. Lin En makes up for the original regrets in this way. This is the meaning of second creation. Okay, let's make some serious comments (tactical clearing of throat) Goldfinger is very rough, but it is very suitable in the world view of Hammer (there is no need to add to the despair). The supporting characters are very good, and their actions have clear logical lines. Basically everyone has their own thing to do when they appear. There is no such useless character. The protagonist is even more heavyweight. In a big way, he is affectionate and self-improving. In a small way, he is very vivid. He is really the kind of living person who can cry, laugh, hesitate and be afraid, but in the end he stood up (although his legs are still a little weak due to nervousness and fear). The writing style is sophisticated and the pace is comfortable. It is very relaxing to read it. It has a bit of humor and is the kind of book that makes you smile knowingly after reading it. At the same time, the main line is clear, unlike some books that are really tiring to read.

Kougua————The author will update soon. I want to see the pure male big lively puppy Kouya! ! ! The protagonist is like that little country dog ​​who jumps around and screams at people when he is at his best. It's so cute. Now the team has been formed [laughing and crying] as the main attacker Astartes, the deputy attacker Battle Sister, the auxiliary early warning buff male, and the logistics maintenance hammer. The follow-up is coming soon!

I can only say that it is a masterpiece. Even if you are a Yunzhui who only understands the background story and setting, you can understand it. Xiaolin also beautifully became the auxiliary daddy with the help of Huang Pizi. The setting did not crash, and the head was not controlled by Slaanesh. Warhammer was also upgraded from a latrine to a shopping mall toilet with the help of Xiaolin. It was so cool, so cool! I just want to have fun fighting. The author's writing style is also very good, and the writing is very enjoyable when describing the battle scenes. The most important thing is that the author updates very quickly!! I like you, author.

It's really hard not to love such a gentle, strong and determined protagonist in this big cesspool, right? Just like this, he elbowed four vendors with a big numerical value in his left hand and a big mechanism in his right hand! I really love this book. In fact, I have only heard of Warhammer before, and then this book was recommended on my homepage. I should not even count it as Cloud Hammer. Then I learned a lot of stories in this book, and I also checked some of the characters' stories. As I slowly read it, Linn is really gentle. I feel like if I were the Astartes in it, I would call my mother (bushi). Even if you don't know what Warhammer is, I feel like you can read this book. The writing is very delicate. As a protagonist who travels through time and space, I feel like I can read it, because he is a slowly growing protagonist, and it is normal to have a little regret in the story. I cried [cry][cry] about Tyrannius, but I feel that he will come back in the future, isn't he in the Legion of the Curse? The author quickly coded the words. I really like watching the protagonist get along with those cans. No matter what kind of can they are, they are touching and heart-warming [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] And there are also some interesting jokes. In fact, it was only after reading this book that I gradually understood the jokes. After reading a few chapters, I felt so relaxed. The original work was too dark and crippled, but this book is very healing [Blow kiss]

It's not enough. This article is too friendly to the readers of Yunzhui. The style is heavy but also cheerful. The language style is very humorous, but the description of the war is very solemn. The characters in the novel are also full of flesh and blood.

Like! It is a book that can be understood by outsiders, and the author has carefully added the general settings. However, there are some things that I am still confused about, and I am currently trying my best to complete all the settings. (Also, Westerners' names are too difficult to remember, as are planet names) And why are you so obsessed with whether the hero is a mother or not? I've read a lot of book reviews that talk about this, and I sometimes see them in book reviews. I personally think that these reactions are normal and do not belong to the behavior of effeminate. Moreover, when I read book reviews, most of them are complaints when the male protagonist faces some difficulties (in the early stages), which is not a problem. The male protagonist is a college student and has never faced the dangers of society. When faced with the situation described in the book, judging from just some complaints, the kernel is actually very powerful. Also, I really, really like cookies (it's the first time I've ever seen a cookie made for myself that looks so cute, hahaha) And the author, please update more, please update more, please update more

I don't understand Warhammer, but I can understand it. The writing style is very refreshing and the protagonist is very cute😊There is currently no messy love line, the friendship line and family line (? Yes, the nun sister is a mother-like existence) is very warm The future is promising, come and take a look, don't stock up. I can't do it anymore. Writing book reviews is like a human machine. Anyway, it's very interesting. Come and read it🌹🌹🌹

Looks good! It's so well written, the characters all stand up! From the nun sister and the hammer brother in the early stage to the appearance of Guilliman in the later stage, the image is very three-dimensional! Oh, really, the appearance of the Imperial Regent is really shocking. The single cabin fell vertically to the ground for the sake of the children. Thirteenth Primarch, you are really handsome! This appearance image stands out among all the ambitious blueberries! A brief betrayal of the Archangel (crossed out). I have always liked the story of Coze before. Since reading this article, my phone has gained a lot of blueberry hamster emoticons, and I mustered up the courage to read more background stories (it really takes courage, watching nl intermittently wandering between exhaustion and recovery... Although the Lord of the Night is watching It sounds miserable, but after all, he died for his ideals through faith... He died... But Guilliman is still alive, and the cruel reality continues (x) God bless me, before I lose interest, the plot will not be a big one (Cyber, please make a wish), bless the author to be in a super divine state, and the flow of thoughts will be updated twenty times a day!

Even those who don't understand the Warhammer worldview can understand it. The explanation is detailed and concise. There are no book-breaking or outrageous points. The updates are very stable, but it does not prevent me from urging for updates. Two updates a day is not enough. I am unfaithful [face covering] [face covering]

It's super, super good-looking. Almost everything mentioned in the article is explained in the first few pages. Even those who have never played Warhammer can understand it. It is suitable for those who want to know more about Warhammer. There are no stereotypes about men and women. The emotional descriptions are very delicate, and the plot is very exciting. It is not like a male video or a female video, but like a human video. The character of the protagonist can be said to be the best in the books I have read, the righteous protagonist yyds. Although the number of chapters is currently relatively small, it is really enjoyable Come on, author [shy], the writing is so good that it deserves a gift. I feel that this kind of rating is not worthy of this book. Is it because there are too few people rating it?

It doesn't have the hammer flavor, it seems too cozy? The characters in it are described as too normal, and the people inside are not like those extreme lunatics in the Empire. It feels a bit out of place. However, change is a good thing, everything is still being calculated [eating melon]

A very delicious Warhammer novel. First and most importantly, there is no practical Iron Man technology, and the reading experience is particularly smooth. Secondly, our protagonist is also a good young man of the new era who is sentimental, righteous, courageous, and resourceful. It is a rare character of a college student, Mouse. It is neither depressing nor completely mindless. You can feel the character and persistence of the protagonist. However, it is indeed a cool article. I like it very much, but there is no embarrassing description. Everything is just right, like eating sweet and sour pork ribs and smelling the aroma of vinegar that stings your nose. The sour taste in the mouth stimulates the mouth to release the taste, and then you taste the sweet sauce and the chewy meat. The development of the plot is also very reassuring, and I loved watching some of the ghosts appearing on the battlefield. I look forward to writing the plot of Huang Pizi standing up. If I want to see how useful the features of Warhammer are, I will use my teeth to death! As for seeing someone talk about the name Sister Sister and the description of the little puppy, what should I say? If you go to Warhammer and meet such a reliable Sister Sister at the beginning, you will find that she can definitely become your mother! Don't underestimate our bond! Finally, can the author start giving rewards for more updates? [Crying] [Crying] It's not enough. I can't sleep at night because I can't see any updates every night. It feels like there are blood crows crawling all over my body...

This book is okay, and the mental state is very good. It is not as nagging as other Warhammer 40k novels. The protagonist does not believe in the emperor, but his loyalty is to human civilization, which is very good.

Really pretty! You might be a little discouraged in the early stage because the protagonist is really miserable, either running for his life or running for his life, but later on it's really great! The protagonist is Battlefield Daisuke, and the plot is basically a pleasant crush, which is very enjoyable. The protagonist's personality is also quite good, he is a cheerful puppy type, and when he says he has no cp, he really has no cp, and he doesn't even have an ambiguous partner. Although it is a fan, outsiders and Yun can understand it. The author will intersperse explanations in the text, but it will not appear obtrusive. It has been well received and praised!

Good-looking [blowing kiss][sending heart][blowing kiss][sending heart] When I clicked in for the first time, I stopped reading because of the name. I also feel that these mounts are not suitable for Warhammer. But the more I look at it, the better it gets 😎 After all, it's not big enough to hit, so it's impossible to fight. The protagonist is also very cute and has a human rights card The interactions are also very sincere, long live the buddy group! And this picture is really beautiful, and there is even an extra chapter in the middle There's also nothing uncomfortable about the depiction of women. I am an 18-year-old male, and the experience is a bit distressing [crying] Five-star praise, must be five-star praise [adoration] [adoration]